~FIREICEDUDE~
07 March 2007, 01:31 AM
This is the first few books in the who killed fireicedude series, since this thead is too long to keep adding, i will make another thead to continue the story. Thanks.
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Please dont Quote this its extreamly long!
As you might know i had a game a long... long time ago. it was to find out who killed fireicedude.
Here is the official story i might post some pictures.
The story is told by an anymos secret agent.
Chapter one: The discovery
It was a cold night, and i was at my igloo. I went to the town to find a notebook underneath the coffee shop tabes outside. I read into the journel:
Tuesday 14, ----
Today Agent fireicedude was figureing out what i have done.
This isnt good. I am in a secret location and i have my hencman there
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The rest of it was smudged. The rest of the journel was empty but i noticed one page was tored out.
I walked over to the dock and looked at a paper on the ground. It was TORE OUT OF THE NOTE BOOK!!!!!! I was shocked to see what it said:
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Fireicedude is at the mine and i am going to kill him...
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"Oh no!" i cried. I had to find out who killed him. The head agent told me i had to.
I just didnt have enough information.
Two days earlier: I went into the ski loudge and went into the attic. I looked and saw a door there. It wasnt there before! I opened it up. It took me down a long hallway and then into a elevator. I went up. I came out and i was in a secret layar. There was a penguin who was pale white, and i havent seen him before. I saw another penguin with a knife and a dagger with BLOOD!
Chapter 2: The Mine
I RAN to the mine. I saw there a police sign! Yellow police tape. I also saw that the body was getting taken away.
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I just dont know. How could of that of happend.
I looked behind me to see: the man with the dagger. HE WAS GOING TO STAB ME!!!!!!!!
I ran. I ran so fast. I didnt know where i was going. I was running toward the pizza parler.
I tripped on a root.
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Chapter 3: Where am i?
"wake up" said a deep voice. I relized where i was. I was in the box in the night club louge! "HELP!" i cried.
"dont worry i wont hurt you, yet" He opened the box. i was out. He had a dagger!!! It was that SAME MAN!!!!
He put it up to my throught when...... "STOP" said a voice it was the head spy! He would save me! I was so relived. The deep voice released me and the psa agent had lots of agents surrounding the room and the building.
Before i could thank them they all left. Every one of them. And the deep voice was gone too. I still needed more information. I knew where the crime sceen was. BUT who killed fireicedude??
TO BE CONTINUED.....Now back to the story.
Chapter 4: The Killer.
I went back to the town and under the coffee shop table at the town was the notebook. It was updated, so i read:
Thursday -----
I, being the only person with the color white has killed fireicedude.
Luckly i cannot be arrested, i paid someone else to do the dirty work for me. I am genius.
Thats all but tommorow i plan on killing people assosiated with fireicedude.
"AAAAGH!" i screamed. This case is too hard to figure out. I went back up to the attic to go into the door and look at the pale colored penguin again. THE DOOR WAS GONE!!! It was gone. How? How did he take the door! I looked closer to see the door was stil there. It was camiflaused. I walked in. I rode the elevator and was in the secret layar again. This was no secret layer, as i studyed it closley i noticed that it was the dojo! No one ever comes here!
"YES I FOUND THE KILLER!!!" i screamed unaware that the pale penguin heard me. 'WHAT!!!" said the pale penguin "you know???" "i must kill you." He started walking towards me. I was frozen i couldnt move! I had to move! Then right as he was about to come, in the background i saw the penguin with the deep voice, the penguin with the dagger. He was red. Now it all made sence, he was the killer and the pale penguin was behind him. I had to tell hq about this. The pale penguin tied me up to a chair and tied my hands, feet, and mouth up. I had to give that information. Everything got dark....
Next chapter: To be continued............Now back once again
Chapter 5: The arrest.
I struggled and struggled out. I relized they didnt take my spy phone! I quickly escaped and ran to the gift shop and into the hq. I told the head spy Everything! He was shocked. They all quickly ran to the dojo. The red guy was there, and so was his helper the black penguin. BUt the white penguin was gone! I knew where he was! The attic. He was in the attic! We all went to the attic aftere arresting the red and black penguins. Then we arrested the white penguin.
Chapter 6: Funeral
As i woke up i was glad it was all over. I had risked my life, for this. I am deeply sad. The death of my brother has pained me and i cannot stand another day of this pain.
The funeral was today in the forest. Fire always loved the forest. I remember one time when we were six:
"yay!" i called. "this is fun" said my brother FIreicedude. "I really like this forest in our tree house"
It was so fun. we spend many summers there. One day when fireicedude was 22 the day of his birthday we were also in the forest and: "ok, ok. I know where i want to be burried. The forest"
With a heavy heart i traveled to the forest. The mourners where there. crying with heavy hearts also. I could not stand the feeling. My brother killed by that, that PENGUIN!
I Would get my revenge on that man. I swore it.
THE END
Book 2 comming soon......
Book two: The revenge
Chapter one: What has happened.
It has been a few weeks after the death of my brother fireicedude. As you know i swore i would get my revenge on that man, the white penguin, who killed my brother. They say that revenge is a sweet thing. After today it only made matters whorse.
to be continued......
Here is the crime sceen: http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/6986/clubpenguinfireicedudespg7.png (http://imageshack.us)
As you may know this is the sequel to Who Killed Fireicedude.
I was not killed this is a story.
If you want to post your fan art for this story please do so here.
I hope you enjoy the first two chapters, the third chapter is comming soon. Pictures are comming soon.
Here it is: The sequel-The Revenge
In case you dont know the story is written by an anonymos agent- idenity was reveled but now is a secret again
THE REVENGE TM
Intro: What has happened.
It has been a few weeks after the death of my fellow agent fireicedude. As you know i swore i would get my revenge on that man, the white penguin, who killed my fellow agent. They say that revenge is a sweet thing. After today it only made matters whorse.
Chapter 1: A cold begining.
It was a cold night, the coldest night there would be- in january. I am looking at the pictures of fireicedude. I still see the haunting memory of the red penguin with a eyepatch. It gives me nightmaers. The thought, a fellow agent, dead. In our own town. Fireicedude was a brave, and strong penguin. He had a job collecting beans for the coffee shop. No signs of evidence there but anyway i know who the killer is. His location is unknown. Every place in the city of club penguin has been checked. Most people think he is in the wilderness, but i say hes hiding somewhere underground or something. Since the underground is shut off due to sewer problems, no one has gone down there, or atleast no one has dared to.
Chapter 2: The mine shack.
I had just realized, i should go into the mine shack. If they even allow me in. I walked toward the mine shack to see police officers guarding the area. I asked why i couldnt get in and they said a recent robbery had token place in the mine. Twenty large peices of GOLD was stolen. And since it was shut off, police officers couldnt even get in. They had to make sure it was ok with "G". "G" was in charge with things like this. I was feeling dizzy because of the fumes. I went into the attic to cool off. It was normally hot up there but now it is as freezing as ever. I cooled down. I felt better, and i was beggining to feel cold. I looked at the air conditioning. I went closer to it. I saw an opening in the back of it. I fell though.
Chapter 3: Frozen.
Hello, i have found this notebook lieing on the ground. It belongs to some agent guy. I am an agent too but im not this guy. If your reading this your probely wondering what happened to that other guy. Well he... let me explain. I was playing find four when i heard a crash. It was the air conditioner. It had broken. I ran up to the attic. It was freezing. I saw a hole. I jumped though and slid down to the bottom of the air conditioner. Frightened, i saw the most horrible sight i had ever seen, it was a frozen person. Apperently it was the guy who had wrote in this notebook in earlier chapters. His eyes where frozen shut. I was horrified. Suddenly he thoughed out. EEEEEEK!!!! He was alive!!!!! I was freaking out! Some frozen dude thoughed in a air conditioner right beside me.
Chapter 4
That guy gave me my notebook back. I am glad i, the anymos agent can tell you the story. I was frozen. The thought still scares me today. But i didnt just freeze. Someone, someone mean, must of turned the air conditioner up. I dont know who but AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGHHHH!
12:09- Death.....of Anonymos agent.
Real idenity-King Dude-Fireicedude's Brother
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I am the man, the man who has found this book. I have found out that King dude has died. My name, oh ill tell you later. I saw the frightining sceen. My best freind-King dude, has died. I saw his body at the crime sceen in the ski loudge. The red snow, as you may call it, was everywhere. We saw a dagger, a very sharp one. In him. I saw a door. I opened a door to see the light...... It was a secret place, it must of been the dojo. My mouth hung wide open as i saw three horrible sights- The white penguin, the red penguin with an eyepatch, and a dagger.
THEY HAD KILLED FIREICEDUDE, AND KINGDUDE!!!!!!!
This was horrible! I, i dont know what to say. The dagger came close to my skin, sinking, sinking in. I saw my life flash before my eyes. I had to tell the head spy, i just had to! I pulled out my spy phone and stabbed the killers with the sissers. I ran to the head spy. I took him there. Agents, and helicoptors carrieing more agents surrounded the dojo. But then i saw, that they had their wepons pointed toward the killers-and me!!!!
Suddenly the two killers stood right beside the head spy. The head spy said good work. I was confused.
"Yes, agent, we are behind the deaths of king dude and fireicedude." Said the head spy "You know who did it now but there is no one to tell. We are going to take over club penguin!!!"
"NOOOOOOOOOOO" i screamed.
The End?
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This is the book rebellion. The third book in the who killed fireicedude series.
Rebellion
Chapter one-what?!?
"Finally hes awake!" said a strange voice "yes indeed" said another strange voice. "can you hear me Jack? Youve taken a stabbing and then they threw you in the air condtioning" said the voice "youve been frozen for over 200 years. A lot has changed" said the voice "what? Who are you" i asked
"Im "G"'s great great great grandson. I am the smartest penguin in the rebelion." "Oh you dont know about the rebellion do you jack?" "no" i said. "let me explain it to you. THe day you were prounounced dead, the evil hq took over club penguin and made thousands of people who wernt agents slaves. You were everyones last hope but now maybe you are our hope" he said "my name is Gary a. Gadget but you can call me Gary". Said Gary.
"let me show you around" replied Gary
Chapter two- The lab
"this is the lab, mr Jack. You may have never seen it. Its very, very, advanced." said Gary "Whats that thing that looks like a puffle and a tv combined?" i asked "Oh its just a puffle x200 mp3 player pet/mobile home." replied gary. I fainted.
Chapter three: Territory
"Uhhhgh" i said "Hurry get up" said Gary "The agents are here" "OH NO!" I cried. Gary got all of his wepons out and began to shoot agents. (agents are evil) He handed me a gun and then we ran into the coffe shop. "we will be safe here" said gary "This is rebel territory" "So is there agent territory too?" i asked "Yes" he said.
We both began to sneak to the pizza parler. It was Agent territory. We were going to free some slaves. When we got in we were amazed to see that the head agent was crowned king of club penguin. "Oh no" i said forgeting that we were trying to not get caught. We ran outside. "CEASE THEM" ordered the king I was running much faster than gary. They had jetpacks. We didnt so they had the advantage. I tripped over a puffle.
Chapter four: The talking puffle
"Why have you tripped over me?" asked a mysterios voice. "Who? WHO said that???" i asked. "Oh, i did." said the puffle. It was a golden puffle. "My species is the golden puffles, We have a special ablitly to talk. We dont like to get adopted, so we run around club penguin to have fun like the rest of you penguins" said the puffle
"well, what is your name little fellow?" i asked "Dont call me that. Well actully i dont have a name, see when you get adopted you earn your name. replied the puffle "Well may i name you?" i asked "Ok, name me" he said. "ill call you Bruce, the golden puffle" i said. " what a wonderfull name" he said. By now i have relized that gary was long gone. Actully now to think of it i was in a cave. "what is this place" i asked "well its my cave. I live here" said bruce "may i tag along with you in your journey" he asked "sure, we need all the help we can get, If you have any freinds there invited to come too." i replied.
"Jack, may i ask where were going? And why are we going anywhere?" asked bruce the golden talking puffle
"were running away from the agents, aka the bad guys. You puffles dont get out much do you?" asked jack
"very funny" said Bruce
"Hurry up we have to hurry or they will find us!!!!!" i said (jack)
Just as were were in the snowforts, we heard a horrible, horrible voice! "IM ALIVE!!" said the horrible voice
I just then relized that fireicedude was burried in a graveyard close to the snowforts. It was him, fireicedude the person that made this happen to my understanding.
I questioned him like a fool. "WHY DID YOU LEAD US INTO THIS HORRIBLE WAR YOU EVIL, AGENT!!!!!????" i asked
"DO NOT QUESTION ME! I AM CERTINLY NOT AN AGENT AND I HAVE SEE ALL THAT HAS GONE IN THIS WAR! I AM BACK AND IM GOING TO DESTROY THE AGENTS said Fireicedude
"Really? Your going to help us!" asked Bruce
"Yes i am, going to help you bruce. But you and jack dont relize that im also going to destory you!!
"RUN" me (jack screamed) "im going as fast as i can!!!!" Said bruce.
Chapter 5 The base
"Wake up jack! Wake up please!" said a stange voice "whos there" i asked (im jack just so you know)"im Caboose, dont worry, im a freind not a foe. I Fight for the rebels and i hate the agents. I had a team but they are fighting right now against the agents" said Caboose "Me and Cp duncan are the only ones who stayed here at the base" he said "Yea weve been waiting here for hours until i rescued you from fireicedude, hes killing the rebels and the Agents, which is horrible" said Cp duncan
"EEEEEEK!" i screamed "wheres Bruce!?!?!"
I ran up off of the couch to go find bruce, but suddenly collapsed. The world was starting to spin!!!!! "OH NO!!!!!!!!!"
"JACK, JACK!!!! ARE YOU okay!!!!!?!?!?" asked caboose
Caboose helped me up and we went to go find bruce. We found him in a forest.
"Poor poor bruce! " i yelled "Hey whats this! Its fireicedudes hat and-." i said.
Me and Caboose went back to the place where i found bruce. I told bruces freinds and all. They were screaming and everything. I felt so sorry for them. Bruces son was just a little puffle when he came up to me and said "why, why have you killed my father" asked bruces son and then he started sobing and the rest of them went back into there cave. I felt like i made bruce die. I should of watched him and helped him.
Chapter 6 Agents are Everywhere
I looked behind me to see 6 agents, they were warriors for the king (head spy). I felt my heart sink! I was surrounded and caboose dissppeared!!!! I was alone. "HELP!!! HELP!!!!" i screamed but nobody could hear me because of the deafining sound of a helicopter with a huge bomb attached to the bottom of it.
"JACK! JACK WE HAVE YOU SURROUNDED! THERE IS NO ESCAPE" said one of the agents in the helicopter. Then all of the agents went on the helicopter and the bomb was going to be released! "NO PLEASE, dont RELEASE THE BOMB!!!!!!!" i screamed Then the sky turned pich black and i knew something was wrong. "TURN BACK MEN ITS DARK WE CANT AIM RIGHT!" said the general of the agents.
I ran into the town, but now it looked like a ghost town. No one was there. The coffee shops windows were broken and the night clubs door was boarded up. As for the gift shop it was completely demolished, it was in rubbles. The world has changed more than i thought it had. I slowly walked over to the dock to see it had flooded. The boat was gone also and you couldnt even see the dock wood thing. It had a thin peice of land leading to the beach so i walked over to the beach. The penguin world was really torn apart by the agents. Then i saw it, it was BRUCE!!!!! He was in a fish basket at the beach. The beach had seeweed all over it.
Out of no where i heard a voice "Jack, jack are you ok?" asked a voice I soon relized it was cp duncan. He was making sure i was okay. He sticked a tracking device on me so he could find me next time.
MEANWHILE
"You are no king, i will not bow down and worship you. You are going to step down from your thrown and give up NOW! Shouted Caboose "WHO DARES APPROCH THE KING WITH SUCH BRAVERY!" Shouted the king
"I do, Caboose of the rebels. Your not such a king, your just a-" said caboose but he was cut off "SILENCE" Screamed the king
"I am going to defeat you tonight, here in your thrown room or what used to be the pizza parler" said caboose "your not going to let your agents fight for you this time, get some backbone, be a man!" couargously said caboose
"Very well than, if i loose i give up the thrown and you can have club penguin back again like it was. But what happens if you loose??" asked the Head agent King "If i loose you can kill me, Jack, and Cp duncan Right infront of all of the rebels and we will be humiliated." said caboose "I accept!"shouted the king
The king wasnt much of a fighter, in fact he was a coward. Every punch that caboose though made the king sob. It was truely a pathetic sight. The king eventully fell over, stenching the stench of defeat. "I WIN!"screamed caboose "Ok, ill step down." said the king "club penguin is yours" he said
"Victory!" said caboose and left the room
"CEASE HIM!" shouted the king
Chaper 7 Explosion
caboose ran all the way to the beach, and boy was he a fast runner! But on the way he bumped into hi mon. Hi mon was a rebel just like him only he had his own fort and stuff, so he tagged along with us.
The kings troops were headed towards us. I told everyone to run into the basement of the light house so they would be safe. The tropps were only a few feet away so i got some C-4 and blew up the joint. lol.
I was badly injured. They came out of the lighthose basment to see that they were the only ones, who were on this island. The war was over but i was dieing. Luckly hi mon was a dr so he tryed to help me but, i was too badly injured. I wasnt going to live and i only had one last hour on the beutiful island. I wanted to die on the beach because i was born there. It seemed appropiate. I layed down on a beach towl. That was my death bed. They all gathered around me and then they let each one say there last words to me. They told me how much they would miss me and such, i was really old anyway and i wouldnt be living now if i didnt go into the air conditioner. It changed me.
The others left the beach and let hi mon talk to me first.
"Jack, im going to miss you. I didnt know you long but i feel so sad." said hi mon
He went to the dock and sent "g"'s great.....great grandson in.
"Jack, i will miss you. I would like to say that you were a great person and when i first unfroze you i knew you were the chosen one, you led us out of this war, your a hero that will be remembered for centurys to come" he said
"G"'s great.....great grandson left me
He went to the dock and sent cp duncan in
"Oh jack, i hate to see you die like this. Your a hero who shouldnt be dieing on the dust." said cp duncan
"no, i want to die here, i hope you understand" i replied
He began to sob on my fin. I knew he was truely sad that i was going.
Then they sent caboose in.
He had tears in his eyes when he said "Im going to miss you jack, your, your my freind. I really am going to miss you. You led us out of war and saved our lives, you touched our souls. You made everything better, i cannot see you die. Youve been like a brother to me, waching out for me." said caboose
With that he cried on my fin just like Cp duncan did. Finnally he left.
They all were gone, and my time was growing shorter. I was begining to sob. My life, was over.
Then i felt a horrible pain in my heart. It felt like i broke an artery or poped it or something. I began to bleed uncontrolably. Then i felt my eyes close. It became dark.
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An anonymos person tells the story now. (He just has read this book and came from a distand island.) They will keep the titel of anonymos for a while.
The others went along to the moutain looking over fireicedude.
They burned him. He had a proper funural. He lie there being cremated.
It was dark and you could see the flames for miles and miles away.
Then they began up the moutain again.
They began to talk to each other as morning approched.
(the following part was made by cp duncan)
CP duncan: Well
Caboose: With great joy comes great sacrifice
CP duncan: Do you think we can really put Club Penguin back the way it was all those centuries ago?
Caboose: It won't be done overnight.
(A figure walks up behind them. Caboose nor CP duncan notice)
Fireicedude: What won't be done overnight?
CP duncan and Caboose run to fireice when they see him.
Fireicedude: Well
Caboose: I knew we could do it
CP duncan: Let's run Club Penguin...the right way.
The End
That was the ending that was told by cp duncan, the next book was written by me
Intro: I hope youve liked this series, its not the end. As long as people like them there will be books. Here is the next story in the series, i hope you like it as well.
Rebuilding, the next book in the series
Chapter 1: Intro
The dark ages were gone, there wasnt a war between rebels and agents anymore. Fireicedude seemed less angry. He seemed peacfull. All of them were rebuilding the city. It was going to be a hard job. Each day they would clean up a section of deystroyed wood. They would burn it and then go ahead and make new wood from the trees they cut down. They had to rebuild the sports shop. It was ruined. The clothes were burnt and were ruined. Also the agency was ruined, but since all the survivers were rebels they didnt care to rebuild it for a while. It was burnt down. I felt a cool breeze hit my fin. It was very cold and the survivers were continueing to build. All of the igloos were completely destroyed so they were roughing it at the book room. They each slept on a couch or near a couch. The coffe shop was the only place that wasnt ruined.
Chapter 2: The Mineshack
All of the penguins: Cp duncan, Caboose, Hi mon, and fireicedude were going to the mineshack to see what the damage was there. It turns out that it was completly blew up. But there was a small opening into the mine. They all quetly stepped into the mine barley into it they saw: Agents, apperently the KING was lead down into the mine. He even had warriors that slept in the cave. But no one went into the broiler room because the dance club collapsed.
Caboose took a deep breath, very queitly but a warrior found them. "so they surrvived the great explosion also?" said the king "apperently sir" said a warrior
Chapter 3: The last battle
This was going to finish it, they were going to fight, it was going to end now!
All of the agents pulled out swords sence there fancy wepons were destroyed.
"FIGHT THEM" Cried the king
There were only so many former rebels.
But seemingly something good happened. Fireicedude pulled a gun from under his hat and shot 5 of the 6 agents. He also shot the king. The stench was unbelivably discusting so they eventully got the bodys and threw them into the ocean. It seemed to honnoraable to burn there bodies. The last warrior-agent surrendered and was going to fight for the good side.
They got to know this guy. He was a reasonably nice guy. His name was Rick. Everyone called him R so it sounded like he had a nickname.
They let R sleep in the bookroom with the rest of them, they trusted R like he was never evil. CP duncan wasnt sure about it, he felt that R was still evil.
Chapter 4: The nightclub mess
Well, the crew went on down to the town after getting there gear on. It wasnt there, the main floor was completely gone. The second floor was noticable though, but it was where the first floor should of been. The main floor collapsed into the basement and the top floor just went to the ground. You could see inside the nite club lounge. It wasnt a beutiful sight, and we all feared to go down into the broiler room since who knows what could be under that collapsed mess.
R was going to wait in the nite club lounge which was now ground floor. The others went down into the collapsed area where the broiler room should be. Hi mon went down first. He couldnt see anything so he pulled out his flashlight to see water. The broiler must of exploded. He looked closer to see something moving in the water.
"GUYS THERES SOMTHING MOVING IN THE WATER DOWN HERE!!!!!' He yelled But when he yelled the building began to get unsteady and hi mon fell into the water as the others climed back up to the louge. They were going to help him, but they didnt know how.
"HELP HES GO-" said hi mon, he got cut off and he was never heard from again. R Pushed caboose into the water.
Cp duncan "i knew he was still evil!!! Fireice get out your gun hurry!!!!" "Okay i got it" said fireicedude He shot R. R fell to the ground. We didnt have a doctor now. IT was horrible!!!! And the whorst part was: Caboose fell down into the water and there was something there!!!!!!
Chapter 5 (i almost lost track lol!)
Caboose saw the monster, it was a giant green sea monster. It was capable of eating him in one bite.
Caboose began to turn very pale."Please dont eat me!" he said
Fireicedude flew down and got caboose. He saved his life. Cp duncan was glad that they all were there but they all morned for hi mon. They couldnt even burry him, how un honnorable.
We have seen two deaths recently and we wernt prepaired for anymore.
Chapter 6
Well Fireicedude, Cp duncan, and caboose were all walking away. The city was still a mess, it was dark, and they were hopeless. Caboose became depressed. Fireicedude sort of went crazy because of the thought that the city was busted and 2 ppl have recently died. Cp duncan was being a trooper though. He was acting a little strange. Then he became sick. There wasnt any hope for them. They thought the penguin nation was comming to an end........
Chapter 7: The strange ship
The beach blew in a new ship, much different than the migrator, it was a crewship. (i cant spell lol)
Anyway, there were girl penguins on the ship wich was a good thing......Caboose, Fireicedude, and Cp duncan became better. The girls liked them, and they liked the girls. They all had children and Club penguin was growing their population again. Fireicedude, Caboose, and cp duncan all built igloos for them and their families. They also built for the generations to come. The island was becoming fixed. Everything looked simi normal.
Thoughts were better and everyone was happier and the nation began to grow. it was a peacefull time.
The end
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Please dont Quote this its extreamly long!
As you might know i had a game a long... long time ago. it was to find out who killed fireicedude.
Here is the official story i might post some pictures.
The story is told by an anymos secret agent.
Chapter one: The discovery
It was a cold night, and i was at my igloo. I went to the town to find a notebook underneath the coffee shop tabes outside. I read into the journel:
Tuesday 14, ----
Today Agent fireicedude was figureing out what i have done.
This isnt good. I am in a secret location and i have my hencman there
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The rest of it was smudged. The rest of the journel was empty but i noticed one page was tored out.
I walked over to the dock and looked at a paper on the ground. It was TORE OUT OF THE NOTE BOOK!!!!!! I was shocked to see what it said:
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Fireicedude is at the mine and i am going to kill him...
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"Oh no!" i cried. I had to find out who killed him. The head agent told me i had to.
I just didnt have enough information.
Two days earlier: I went into the ski loudge and went into the attic. I looked and saw a door there. It wasnt there before! I opened it up. It took me down a long hallway and then into a elevator. I went up. I came out and i was in a secret layar. There was a penguin who was pale white, and i havent seen him before. I saw another penguin with a knife and a dagger with BLOOD!
Chapter 2: The Mine
I RAN to the mine. I saw there a police sign! Yellow police tape. I also saw that the body was getting taken away.
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I just dont know. How could of that of happend.
I looked behind me to see: the man with the dagger. HE WAS GOING TO STAB ME!!!!!!!!
I ran. I ran so fast. I didnt know where i was going. I was running toward the pizza parler.
I tripped on a root.
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Chapter 3: Where am i?
"wake up" said a deep voice. I relized where i was. I was in the box in the night club louge! "HELP!" i cried.
"dont worry i wont hurt you, yet" He opened the box. i was out. He had a dagger!!! It was that SAME MAN!!!!
He put it up to my throught when...... "STOP" said a voice it was the head spy! He would save me! I was so relived. The deep voice released me and the psa agent had lots of agents surrounding the room and the building.
Before i could thank them they all left. Every one of them. And the deep voice was gone too. I still needed more information. I knew where the crime sceen was. BUT who killed fireicedude??
TO BE CONTINUED.....Now back to the story.
Chapter 4: The Killer.
I went back to the town and under the coffee shop table at the town was the notebook. It was updated, so i read:
Thursday -----
I, being the only person with the color white has killed fireicedude.
Luckly i cannot be arrested, i paid someone else to do the dirty work for me. I am genius.
Thats all but tommorow i plan on killing people assosiated with fireicedude.
"AAAAGH!" i screamed. This case is too hard to figure out. I went back up to the attic to go into the door and look at the pale colored penguin again. THE DOOR WAS GONE!!! It was gone. How? How did he take the door! I looked closer to see the door was stil there. It was camiflaused. I walked in. I rode the elevator and was in the secret layar again. This was no secret layer, as i studyed it closley i noticed that it was the dojo! No one ever comes here!
"YES I FOUND THE KILLER!!!" i screamed unaware that the pale penguin heard me. 'WHAT!!!" said the pale penguin "you know???" "i must kill you." He started walking towards me. I was frozen i couldnt move! I had to move! Then right as he was about to come, in the background i saw the penguin with the deep voice, the penguin with the dagger. He was red. Now it all made sence, he was the killer and the pale penguin was behind him. I had to tell hq about this. The pale penguin tied me up to a chair and tied my hands, feet, and mouth up. I had to give that information. Everything got dark....
Next chapter: To be continued............Now back once again
Chapter 5: The arrest.
I struggled and struggled out. I relized they didnt take my spy phone! I quickly escaped and ran to the gift shop and into the hq. I told the head spy Everything! He was shocked. They all quickly ran to the dojo. The red guy was there, and so was his helper the black penguin. BUt the white penguin was gone! I knew where he was! The attic. He was in the attic! We all went to the attic aftere arresting the red and black penguins. Then we arrested the white penguin.
Chapter 6: Funeral
As i woke up i was glad it was all over. I had risked my life, for this. I am deeply sad. The death of my brother has pained me and i cannot stand another day of this pain.
The funeral was today in the forest. Fire always loved the forest. I remember one time when we were six:
"yay!" i called. "this is fun" said my brother FIreicedude. "I really like this forest in our tree house"
It was so fun. we spend many summers there. One day when fireicedude was 22 the day of his birthday we were also in the forest and: "ok, ok. I know where i want to be burried. The forest"
With a heavy heart i traveled to the forest. The mourners where there. crying with heavy hearts also. I could not stand the feeling. My brother killed by that, that PENGUIN!
I Would get my revenge on that man. I swore it.
THE END
Book 2 comming soon......
Book two: The revenge
Chapter one: What has happened.
It has been a few weeks after the death of my brother fireicedude. As you know i swore i would get my revenge on that man, the white penguin, who killed my brother. They say that revenge is a sweet thing. After today it only made matters whorse.
to be continued......
Here is the crime sceen: http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/6986/clubpenguinfireicedudespg7.png (http://imageshack.us)
As you may know this is the sequel to Who Killed Fireicedude.
I was not killed this is a story.
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I hope you enjoy the first two chapters, the third chapter is comming soon. Pictures are comming soon.
Here it is: The sequel-The Revenge
In case you dont know the story is written by an anonymos agent- idenity was reveled but now is a secret again
THE REVENGE TM
Intro: What has happened.
It has been a few weeks after the death of my fellow agent fireicedude. As you know i swore i would get my revenge on that man, the white penguin, who killed my fellow agent. They say that revenge is a sweet thing. After today it only made matters whorse.
Chapter 1: A cold begining.
It was a cold night, the coldest night there would be- in january. I am looking at the pictures of fireicedude. I still see the haunting memory of the red penguin with a eyepatch. It gives me nightmaers. The thought, a fellow agent, dead. In our own town. Fireicedude was a brave, and strong penguin. He had a job collecting beans for the coffee shop. No signs of evidence there but anyway i know who the killer is. His location is unknown. Every place in the city of club penguin has been checked. Most people think he is in the wilderness, but i say hes hiding somewhere underground or something. Since the underground is shut off due to sewer problems, no one has gone down there, or atleast no one has dared to.
Chapter 2: The mine shack.
I had just realized, i should go into the mine shack. If they even allow me in. I walked toward the mine shack to see police officers guarding the area. I asked why i couldnt get in and they said a recent robbery had token place in the mine. Twenty large peices of GOLD was stolen. And since it was shut off, police officers couldnt even get in. They had to make sure it was ok with "G". "G" was in charge with things like this. I was feeling dizzy because of the fumes. I went into the attic to cool off. It was normally hot up there but now it is as freezing as ever. I cooled down. I felt better, and i was beggining to feel cold. I looked at the air conditioning. I went closer to it. I saw an opening in the back of it. I fell though.
Chapter 3: Frozen.
Hello, i have found this notebook lieing on the ground. It belongs to some agent guy. I am an agent too but im not this guy. If your reading this your probely wondering what happened to that other guy. Well he... let me explain. I was playing find four when i heard a crash. It was the air conditioner. It had broken. I ran up to the attic. It was freezing. I saw a hole. I jumped though and slid down to the bottom of the air conditioner. Frightened, i saw the most horrible sight i had ever seen, it was a frozen person. Apperently it was the guy who had wrote in this notebook in earlier chapters. His eyes where frozen shut. I was horrified. Suddenly he thoughed out. EEEEEEK!!!! He was alive!!!!! I was freaking out! Some frozen dude thoughed in a air conditioner right beside me.
Chapter 4
That guy gave me my notebook back. I am glad i, the anymos agent can tell you the story. I was frozen. The thought still scares me today. But i didnt just freeze. Someone, someone mean, must of turned the air conditioner up. I dont know who but AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGHHHH!
12:09- Death.....of Anonymos agent.
Real idenity-King Dude-Fireicedude's Brother
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I am the man, the man who has found this book. I have found out that King dude has died. My name, oh ill tell you later. I saw the frightining sceen. My best freind-King dude, has died. I saw his body at the crime sceen in the ski loudge. The red snow, as you may call it, was everywhere. We saw a dagger, a very sharp one. In him. I saw a door. I opened a door to see the light...... It was a secret place, it must of been the dojo. My mouth hung wide open as i saw three horrible sights- The white penguin, the red penguin with an eyepatch, and a dagger.
THEY HAD KILLED FIREICEDUDE, AND KINGDUDE!!!!!!!
This was horrible! I, i dont know what to say. The dagger came close to my skin, sinking, sinking in. I saw my life flash before my eyes. I had to tell the head spy, i just had to! I pulled out my spy phone and stabbed the killers with the sissers. I ran to the head spy. I took him there. Agents, and helicoptors carrieing more agents surrounded the dojo. But then i saw, that they had their wepons pointed toward the killers-and me!!!!
Suddenly the two killers stood right beside the head spy. The head spy said good work. I was confused.
"Yes, agent, we are behind the deaths of king dude and fireicedude." Said the head spy "You know who did it now but there is no one to tell. We are going to take over club penguin!!!"
"NOOOOOOOOOOO" i screamed.
The End?
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This is the book rebellion. The third book in the who killed fireicedude series.
Rebellion
Chapter one-what?!?
"Finally hes awake!" said a strange voice "yes indeed" said another strange voice. "can you hear me Jack? Youve taken a stabbing and then they threw you in the air condtioning" said the voice "youve been frozen for over 200 years. A lot has changed" said the voice "what? Who are you" i asked
"Im "G"'s great great great grandson. I am the smartest penguin in the rebelion." "Oh you dont know about the rebellion do you jack?" "no" i said. "let me explain it to you. THe day you were prounounced dead, the evil hq took over club penguin and made thousands of people who wernt agents slaves. You were everyones last hope but now maybe you are our hope" he said "my name is Gary a. Gadget but you can call me Gary". Said Gary.
"let me show you around" replied Gary
Chapter two- The lab
"this is the lab, mr Jack. You may have never seen it. Its very, very, advanced." said Gary "Whats that thing that looks like a puffle and a tv combined?" i asked "Oh its just a puffle x200 mp3 player pet/mobile home." replied gary. I fainted.
Chapter three: Territory
"Uhhhgh" i said "Hurry get up" said Gary "The agents are here" "OH NO!" I cried. Gary got all of his wepons out and began to shoot agents. (agents are evil) He handed me a gun and then we ran into the coffe shop. "we will be safe here" said gary "This is rebel territory" "So is there agent territory too?" i asked "Yes" he said.
We both began to sneak to the pizza parler. It was Agent territory. We were going to free some slaves. When we got in we were amazed to see that the head agent was crowned king of club penguin. "Oh no" i said forgeting that we were trying to not get caught. We ran outside. "CEASE THEM" ordered the king I was running much faster than gary. They had jetpacks. We didnt so they had the advantage. I tripped over a puffle.
Chapter four: The talking puffle
"Why have you tripped over me?" asked a mysterios voice. "Who? WHO said that???" i asked. "Oh, i did." said the puffle. It was a golden puffle. "My species is the golden puffles, We have a special ablitly to talk. We dont like to get adopted, so we run around club penguin to have fun like the rest of you penguins" said the puffle
"well, what is your name little fellow?" i asked "Dont call me that. Well actully i dont have a name, see when you get adopted you earn your name. replied the puffle "Well may i name you?" i asked "Ok, name me" he said. "ill call you Bruce, the golden puffle" i said. " what a wonderfull name" he said. By now i have relized that gary was long gone. Actully now to think of it i was in a cave. "what is this place" i asked "well its my cave. I live here" said bruce "may i tag along with you in your journey" he asked "sure, we need all the help we can get, If you have any freinds there invited to come too." i replied.
"Jack, may i ask where were going? And why are we going anywhere?" asked bruce the golden talking puffle
"were running away from the agents, aka the bad guys. You puffles dont get out much do you?" asked jack
"very funny" said Bruce
"Hurry up we have to hurry or they will find us!!!!!" i said (jack)
Just as were were in the snowforts, we heard a horrible, horrible voice! "IM ALIVE!!" said the horrible voice
I just then relized that fireicedude was burried in a graveyard close to the snowforts. It was him, fireicedude the person that made this happen to my understanding.
I questioned him like a fool. "WHY DID YOU LEAD US INTO THIS HORRIBLE WAR YOU EVIL, AGENT!!!!!????" i asked
"DO NOT QUESTION ME! I AM CERTINLY NOT AN AGENT AND I HAVE SEE ALL THAT HAS GONE IN THIS WAR! I AM BACK AND IM GOING TO DESTROY THE AGENTS said Fireicedude
"Really? Your going to help us!" asked Bruce
"Yes i am, going to help you bruce. But you and jack dont relize that im also going to destory you!!
"RUN" me (jack screamed) "im going as fast as i can!!!!" Said bruce.
Chapter 5 The base
"Wake up jack! Wake up please!" said a stange voice "whos there" i asked (im jack just so you know)"im Caboose, dont worry, im a freind not a foe. I Fight for the rebels and i hate the agents. I had a team but they are fighting right now against the agents" said Caboose "Me and Cp duncan are the only ones who stayed here at the base" he said "Yea weve been waiting here for hours until i rescued you from fireicedude, hes killing the rebels and the Agents, which is horrible" said Cp duncan
"EEEEEEK!" i screamed "wheres Bruce!?!?!"
I ran up off of the couch to go find bruce, but suddenly collapsed. The world was starting to spin!!!!! "OH NO!!!!!!!!!"
"JACK, JACK!!!! ARE YOU okay!!!!!?!?!?" asked caboose
Caboose helped me up and we went to go find bruce. We found him in a forest.
"Poor poor bruce! " i yelled "Hey whats this! Its fireicedudes hat and-." i said.
Me and Caboose went back to the place where i found bruce. I told bruces freinds and all. They were screaming and everything. I felt so sorry for them. Bruces son was just a little puffle when he came up to me and said "why, why have you killed my father" asked bruces son and then he started sobing and the rest of them went back into there cave. I felt like i made bruce die. I should of watched him and helped him.
Chapter 6 Agents are Everywhere
I looked behind me to see 6 agents, they were warriors for the king (head spy). I felt my heart sink! I was surrounded and caboose dissppeared!!!! I was alone. "HELP!!! HELP!!!!" i screamed but nobody could hear me because of the deafining sound of a helicopter with a huge bomb attached to the bottom of it.
"JACK! JACK WE HAVE YOU SURROUNDED! THERE IS NO ESCAPE" said one of the agents in the helicopter. Then all of the agents went on the helicopter and the bomb was going to be released! "NO PLEASE, dont RELEASE THE BOMB!!!!!!!" i screamed Then the sky turned pich black and i knew something was wrong. "TURN BACK MEN ITS DARK WE CANT AIM RIGHT!" said the general of the agents.
I ran into the town, but now it looked like a ghost town. No one was there. The coffee shops windows were broken and the night clubs door was boarded up. As for the gift shop it was completely demolished, it was in rubbles. The world has changed more than i thought it had. I slowly walked over to the dock to see it had flooded. The boat was gone also and you couldnt even see the dock wood thing. It had a thin peice of land leading to the beach so i walked over to the beach. The penguin world was really torn apart by the agents. Then i saw it, it was BRUCE!!!!! He was in a fish basket at the beach. The beach had seeweed all over it.
Out of no where i heard a voice "Jack, jack are you ok?" asked a voice I soon relized it was cp duncan. He was making sure i was okay. He sticked a tracking device on me so he could find me next time.
MEANWHILE
"You are no king, i will not bow down and worship you. You are going to step down from your thrown and give up NOW! Shouted Caboose "WHO DARES APPROCH THE KING WITH SUCH BRAVERY!" Shouted the king
"I do, Caboose of the rebels. Your not such a king, your just a-" said caboose but he was cut off "SILENCE" Screamed the king
"I am going to defeat you tonight, here in your thrown room or what used to be the pizza parler" said caboose "your not going to let your agents fight for you this time, get some backbone, be a man!" couargously said caboose
"Very well than, if i loose i give up the thrown and you can have club penguin back again like it was. But what happens if you loose??" asked the Head agent King "If i loose you can kill me, Jack, and Cp duncan Right infront of all of the rebels and we will be humiliated." said caboose "I accept!"shouted the king
The king wasnt much of a fighter, in fact he was a coward. Every punch that caboose though made the king sob. It was truely a pathetic sight. The king eventully fell over, stenching the stench of defeat. "I WIN!"screamed caboose "Ok, ill step down." said the king "club penguin is yours" he said
"Victory!" said caboose and left the room
"CEASE HIM!" shouted the king
Chaper 7 Explosion
caboose ran all the way to the beach, and boy was he a fast runner! But on the way he bumped into hi mon. Hi mon was a rebel just like him only he had his own fort and stuff, so he tagged along with us.
The kings troops were headed towards us. I told everyone to run into the basement of the light house so they would be safe. The tropps were only a few feet away so i got some C-4 and blew up the joint. lol.
I was badly injured. They came out of the lighthose basment to see that they were the only ones, who were on this island. The war was over but i was dieing. Luckly hi mon was a dr so he tryed to help me but, i was too badly injured. I wasnt going to live and i only had one last hour on the beutiful island. I wanted to die on the beach because i was born there. It seemed appropiate. I layed down on a beach towl. That was my death bed. They all gathered around me and then they let each one say there last words to me. They told me how much they would miss me and such, i was really old anyway and i wouldnt be living now if i didnt go into the air conditioner. It changed me.
The others left the beach and let hi mon talk to me first.
"Jack, im going to miss you. I didnt know you long but i feel so sad." said hi mon
He went to the dock and sent "g"'s great.....great grandson in.
"Jack, i will miss you. I would like to say that you were a great person and when i first unfroze you i knew you were the chosen one, you led us out of this war, your a hero that will be remembered for centurys to come" he said
"G"'s great.....great grandson left me
He went to the dock and sent cp duncan in
"Oh jack, i hate to see you die like this. Your a hero who shouldnt be dieing on the dust." said cp duncan
"no, i want to die here, i hope you understand" i replied
He began to sob on my fin. I knew he was truely sad that i was going.
Then they sent caboose in.
He had tears in his eyes when he said "Im going to miss you jack, your, your my freind. I really am going to miss you. You led us out of war and saved our lives, you touched our souls. You made everything better, i cannot see you die. Youve been like a brother to me, waching out for me." said caboose
With that he cried on my fin just like Cp duncan did. Finnally he left.
They all were gone, and my time was growing shorter. I was begining to sob. My life, was over.
Then i felt a horrible pain in my heart. It felt like i broke an artery or poped it or something. I began to bleed uncontrolably. Then i felt my eyes close. It became dark.
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An anonymos person tells the story now. (He just has read this book and came from a distand island.) They will keep the titel of anonymos for a while.
The others went along to the moutain looking over fireicedude.
They burned him. He had a proper funural. He lie there being cremated.
It was dark and you could see the flames for miles and miles away.
Then they began up the moutain again.
They began to talk to each other as morning approched.
(the following part was made by cp duncan)
CP duncan: Well
Caboose: With great joy comes great sacrifice
CP duncan: Do you think we can really put Club Penguin back the way it was all those centuries ago?
Caboose: It won't be done overnight.
(A figure walks up behind them. Caboose nor CP duncan notice)
Fireicedude: What won't be done overnight?
CP duncan and Caboose run to fireice when they see him.
Fireicedude: Well
Caboose: I knew we could do it
CP duncan: Let's run Club Penguin...the right way.
The End
That was the ending that was told by cp duncan, the next book was written by me
Intro: I hope youve liked this series, its not the end. As long as people like them there will be books. Here is the next story in the series, i hope you like it as well.
Rebuilding, the next book in the series
Chapter 1: Intro
The dark ages were gone, there wasnt a war between rebels and agents anymore. Fireicedude seemed less angry. He seemed peacfull. All of them were rebuilding the city. It was going to be a hard job. Each day they would clean up a section of deystroyed wood. They would burn it and then go ahead and make new wood from the trees they cut down. They had to rebuild the sports shop. It was ruined. The clothes were burnt and were ruined. Also the agency was ruined, but since all the survivers were rebels they didnt care to rebuild it for a while. It was burnt down. I felt a cool breeze hit my fin. It was very cold and the survivers were continueing to build. All of the igloos were completely destroyed so they were roughing it at the book room. They each slept on a couch or near a couch. The coffe shop was the only place that wasnt ruined.
Chapter 2: The Mineshack
All of the penguins: Cp duncan, Caboose, Hi mon, and fireicedude were going to the mineshack to see what the damage was there. It turns out that it was completly blew up. But there was a small opening into the mine. They all quetly stepped into the mine barley into it they saw: Agents, apperently the KING was lead down into the mine. He even had warriors that slept in the cave. But no one went into the broiler room because the dance club collapsed.
Caboose took a deep breath, very queitly but a warrior found them. "so they surrvived the great explosion also?" said the king "apperently sir" said a warrior
Chapter 3: The last battle
This was going to finish it, they were going to fight, it was going to end now!
All of the agents pulled out swords sence there fancy wepons were destroyed.
"FIGHT THEM" Cried the king
There were only so many former rebels.
But seemingly something good happened. Fireicedude pulled a gun from under his hat and shot 5 of the 6 agents. He also shot the king. The stench was unbelivably discusting so they eventully got the bodys and threw them into the ocean. It seemed to honnoraable to burn there bodies. The last warrior-agent surrendered and was going to fight for the good side.
They got to know this guy. He was a reasonably nice guy. His name was Rick. Everyone called him R so it sounded like he had a nickname.
They let R sleep in the bookroom with the rest of them, they trusted R like he was never evil. CP duncan wasnt sure about it, he felt that R was still evil.
Chapter 4: The nightclub mess
Well, the crew went on down to the town after getting there gear on. It wasnt there, the main floor was completely gone. The second floor was noticable though, but it was where the first floor should of been. The main floor collapsed into the basement and the top floor just went to the ground. You could see inside the nite club lounge. It wasnt a beutiful sight, and we all feared to go down into the broiler room since who knows what could be under that collapsed mess.
R was going to wait in the nite club lounge which was now ground floor. The others went down into the collapsed area where the broiler room should be. Hi mon went down first. He couldnt see anything so he pulled out his flashlight to see water. The broiler must of exploded. He looked closer to see something moving in the water.
"GUYS THERES SOMTHING MOVING IN THE WATER DOWN HERE!!!!!' He yelled But when he yelled the building began to get unsteady and hi mon fell into the water as the others climed back up to the louge. They were going to help him, but they didnt know how.
"HELP HES GO-" said hi mon, he got cut off and he was never heard from again. R Pushed caboose into the water.
Cp duncan "i knew he was still evil!!! Fireice get out your gun hurry!!!!" "Okay i got it" said fireicedude He shot R. R fell to the ground. We didnt have a doctor now. IT was horrible!!!! And the whorst part was: Caboose fell down into the water and there was something there!!!!!!
Chapter 5 (i almost lost track lol!)
Caboose saw the monster, it was a giant green sea monster. It was capable of eating him in one bite.
Caboose began to turn very pale."Please dont eat me!" he said
Fireicedude flew down and got caboose. He saved his life. Cp duncan was glad that they all were there but they all morned for hi mon. They couldnt even burry him, how un honnorable.
We have seen two deaths recently and we wernt prepaired for anymore.
Chapter 6
Well Fireicedude, Cp duncan, and caboose were all walking away. The city was still a mess, it was dark, and they were hopeless. Caboose became depressed. Fireicedude sort of went crazy because of the thought that the city was busted and 2 ppl have recently died. Cp duncan was being a trooper though. He was acting a little strange. Then he became sick. There wasnt any hope for them. They thought the penguin nation was comming to an end........
Chapter 7: The strange ship
The beach blew in a new ship, much different than the migrator, it was a crewship. (i cant spell lol)
Anyway, there were girl penguins on the ship wich was a good thing......Caboose, Fireicedude, and Cp duncan became better. The girls liked them, and they liked the girls. They all had children and Club penguin was growing their population again. Fireicedude, Caboose, and cp duncan all built igloos for them and their families. They also built for the generations to come. The island was becoming fixed. Everything looked simi normal.
Thoughts were better and everyone was happier and the nation began to grow. it was a peacefull time.
The end