One Word Echos

[Lost One]

One word echos through my head,
Overlapping thoughts I thought I'd had.
But my concentration broke,
When you broke down my door,
So now I'm bleeding and I'm dying,
Left on the floor.

Savior, Yes Savior, Echos through my head.
All the hope I thought I'd had...
But my heart broke open,
And I'm opening my fear,
My life fell apart,
I cry every tear.

I think the words I spoke have failed...
I think I'm missing something.
But I can't hear you,
You aren't there,
I'm broken and I'm failing,
Do you care?

One word echos through my head...
I'm losing life I've never had...
But I can't hear you...
You left me all alone...
My heart broke open...
Can't fix it on my own...

Will you hear me?
One word echos...
I can't see...
Savior?

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[TnT]

That's a very nice poem.
You did a very good job, have anymore?

[Lost One]

I have over 300 poems... what kind do you like?

[REVENGE]

I'd love to see more of your poetry. :] Any kind will do.

[guamdude]

Wow, I have not read a poem this good in a while. 6/10