The Stalker!

[Samson4268]

I wrote a story on the old forum about a stalker and a teen age girl penguin babysits an eight year old boy penguin and the phone rings and no one answers and then she sees a shadow and the phone line is cut. ...that is not in order lol but somethin like that. idk do u think it is a good idea?

[sangej99999]

yeah its a good idea i cant wait to be in the film

[Snowball3028]

You bumped this thread. Yesterday I saw that it was the last thread at the last page.

[razzelfrazel]

its kind of good..........
but i wouldnt start off that dramatically let the plot develope a little first;)

[Snowball3028]

This thread has been made twice. Please either delete the other one or delete this one.