The Legend Of The Pool

[Kingapenguin]

The Legend Of The Pool
By Kingapenguin
The Story
20 years ago in the pool of clubpenguin a murder was commited. This pool is now the Ice Rink. No one knows how this murder was commited but the murdered was Sir Dimelot. As soon as the murder was commited the water turned into blood. A while later words appeared on the wall saying: I will take revenge! This mysterious writing was bright, red blood. This mystery was kept untouched from the public until now: The pool is back open, tonight, on the 20th aniversary of the murder.



A new chapter will be added every once in a while.
Constructive criticism is allowed.

[Chinstrap]

This sounds a whole lot like Mustachio's Mystery of the lighthouse.:rolleyes:

Well, as long as you have permission to use his idea...


I like how the ice rink used to be a pool. That was creative.:);)

[Kingapenguin]

This sounds a whole lot like Mustachio's Mystery of the lighthouse.:rolleyes:

Well, as long as you have permission to use his idea...


I like how the ice rink used to be a pool. That was creative.:);)

I havent read that story.

[Chinstrap]

Strange. Your story sounds almost exactly like his....


Mystery of the Lighthouse
"Long ago, when the lighthouse was first built, a rich penguin named Sir Elliot went with his wife,
Madam Connifer, to the very top of the lighthouse every night to look at the stars and the moonlight
from the telescope. Well, one night, the two got into a big fight and seperated from each other.
Sir Elliot went to the lighthouse alone that night, furious with Madam Connifer.
Madam Connifer felt sad and went to go talk with Elliot at the lighthouse.
But when she got to the top, he wasn't there. She looked over the railings and saw a floating penguin
in the rocks where the waves crashed in. It was Sir Elliot, with blood oozing into the ocean.
She was petrified and tried to get down and out of the lighthouse to see his body.
But she couldn't escape from the lighthouse. When penguins went there the next day, they found Madam Connifer hanging
on a rope on the side of the lighthose. Scratched in the side of the lighthouse
was "REVENGE". People have tried to solve the mystery of what happened that night.
But everyone has failed so far. Now, a young penguin and his friend venture
into the lighthouse 20 years after the incident on the same night it occured
to solve the mystery people have been dying to unravel..."

The Legend of the Pool
"20 years ago in the pool of clubpenguin a murder was commited. This pool is now the Ice Rink. No one knows how this murder was commited but the murdered was Sir Dimelot. As soon as the murder was commited the water turned into blood. A while later words appeared on the wall saying: I will take revenge! This mysterious writing was bright, red blood. This mystery was kept untouched from the public until now: The pool is back open, tonight, on the 20th aniversary of the murder"


Don't you think they sound a lot alike?:confused:

[Slider 789]

Strange. Your story sounds almost exactly like his....


Mystery of the Lighthouse
"Long ago, when the lighthouse was first built, a rich penguin named Sir Elliot went with his wife,
Madam Connifer, to the very top of the lighthouse every night to look at the stars and the moonlight
from the telescope. Well, one night, the two got into a big fight and seperated from each other.
Sir Elliot went to the lighthouse alone that night, furious with Madam Connifer.
Madam Connifer felt sad and went to go talk with Elliot at the lighthouse.
But when she got to the top, he wasn't there. She looked over the railings and saw a floating penguin
in the rocks where the waves crashed in. It was Sir Elliot, with blood oozing into the ocean.
She was petrified and tried to get down and out of the lighthouse to see his body.
But she couldn't escape from the lighthouse. When penguins went there the next day, they found Madam Connifer hanging
on a rope on the side of the lighthose. Scratched in the side of the lighthouse
was "REVENGE". People have tried to solve the mystery of what happened that night.
But everyone has failed so far. Now, a young penguin and his friend venture
into the lighthouse 20 years after the incident on the same night it occured
to solve the mystery people have been dying to unravel..."

The Legend of the Pool
"20 years ago in the pool of clubpenguin a murder was commited. This pool is now the Ice Rink. No one knows how this murder was commited but the murdered was Sir Dimelot. As soon as the murder was commited the water turned into blood. A while later words appeared on the wall saying: I will take revenge! This mysterious writing was bright, red blood. This mystery was kept untouched from the public until now: The pool is back open, tonight, on the 20th aniversary of the murder"


Don't you think they sound a lot alike?:confused:

woah, 20 years, "REVENGE" written on the wall. Must be a common story type:cool:

[Nut]

Wow. It does look like my story. :P

I'm fine with it. As long as it isnt the same story repeated very close to mine.

[Kingapenguin]

Wow. It does look like my story. :P

I'm fine with it. As long as it isnt the same story repeated very close to mine.
It wont be the same as yours. Ill go and read it now to make sure the plan I have in my head isnt the same plan as your story.