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Mastersnowy
28 May 2008, 10:47 PM
PLEASE READ THIS ENTIRE POST BEFORE JOINING!!!

Long ago in a galaxy far, far away, Luke Skywalker and the Rebellion destroyed the second model of the Death Star and have defeated the Empire. Soon afterwards, Luke tought his sister, the beautiful Princess Leia, the ways of the Force. Now, thousands of years after the Galactic Civil War, the Jedi Council has been reformed and is stationed on a distant, remote planet called Kaarina. The Council thought conflict among the Galaxy was over, but a new war has just begun.

Huna Logatar, the young Padawan of Jedi Master Valek Torve, has decided after being discriminated by the Council and being rejected from joining, she would follow the path to the Dark Side.

She found many followers to join her cause and tought them the ways of the Force. After many countless years of training, she has built her army of evil Jedi. Instead of being known as the Sith, she calls her army of Jedi outcasts the Camara. The army continues to grow more powerful than any army ever to rage across the Galaxy

The fate of the Galaxy lies in the hands of Master Valek Torve and a small group of Padawans that he must train to take on the Camara army. The story begins in a large meeting hall located on Kaarina...

Rules

1. No changing the scene unless I change it.

2. No killing anyone on your side. (Jedi can't kill Jedi: Camara can't kill Camara)

3. Be nice to others. No swearing or calling others names!

4. DON'T CHOOSE AN EXISTING CHARACTER!!!!!!! The Galactic Civil War has ended. Luke, Leia, Vader, Han ect. are all dead by now.

5. You can choose to be a Jedi, Padawan, Camara, or any other person.

6. To join, include
Character name
Type of character

7. Have fun!

Characters

Jedi- There can be 2 Jedi, including me.
Valek Torve- mastersnowy
Flare Varve- Flame King
Hal Kelper- Ollie
Toran-Spartan4424
Roklin Torran- Tortoli

Padawans- There can be 4 Padawans.
Kyle Hunter- CPNinja

Camara- In the story there is an entire army of Camara, but we'll have 5.

Spy (only one)

Supporting Characters- There can be an unlimited amount that we'll meet along the way. If you're on a planet and we leave that planet, then you need to post as a new character.

I will start the story

Valek Torve: All right. Lets get this Council meeting started. First off, we'll do role call. "Valek Torve!" Here of course. Next we have...

Flame_King
28 May 2008, 10:56 PM
I'll join. It looks pretty fun.

Character Name: Flare Varve
Type: Jedi
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"Flare Varve Sir!!"

Ollie
28 May 2008, 11:20 PM
i'll join
Character name: Hal Kelper
Type of character: Jedi
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"Hal Kelper here too sir" Hal said waving his hand

Mastersnowy
28 May 2008, 11:25 PM
Hello Varve. Hello Hal. Glad you both could make it today. We'll just wait for the others to arrive. I have some very important news to share involving the Camara.

Ollie
28 May 2008, 11:33 PM
Hello Varve. Hello Hal. Glad you both could make it today. We'll just wait for the others to arrive. I have some very important news to share involving the Camara.

"yes that is what brought me here" Hal said sitting down "to see what i could do against those scum" hes voice hardened

Spartan4424
28 May 2008, 11:36 PM
"yes that is what brought me here" Hal said sitting down "to see what i could do against those scum" hes voice hardened

Character: Toran
Info: A twenty year-old Jedi Master. The youngest ever. He carries a custom black lightsaber with intricate gold carvings on the hilt.
Force abilities: Everything and more, including: Force Beam, Force Teleport, and Mind Communications


Toran walked into the room. His black cloak swirling in wind that wasn't actually there. He sat down in his Master Chair, the chair built for every Jedi master.

Hello everyone. I have some amazing news, but I will tell it later.

Mastersnowy
28 May 2008, 11:38 PM
"Ah, welcome Toran! Now Hal, I know how evil they are," replied Valek, taking a seat as well and instructing Flare to do the same, "but we must control our feelings until the others arive.
I do wonder where my Padawans are. I hope they are staying out of trouble. It has been rumored that some Camara ships were seen a few miles from here."

Spartan4424
28 May 2008, 11:40 PM
"I know how evil they are," replied Valek, taking a seat as well and instructing Flare to do the same, "but we must control our feelings until the others arive."

I don't think many more people will be coming soon. At least, I don't sense anyone close coming this way.

Mastersnowy
28 May 2008, 11:46 PM
"I guess you're right. I sense nothing as well," Valek stated. "We might as well start now and we'll inform them later."

"I think I may have found a lead on the secret base of the Camara. One of our anonymous spies has discovered many Camara ships and sabers on Kamino. The sabers can be identified by the curled C engraved on them. Now as I've been thinking, the species living on Kamino was able to construct the clone army of the Republic long, long ago. I think they may be doing the same with the Camara Jedi."

"I have sent a spy to the planet to montor the activity. He will hopefully return soon."
NEW CHARACTER ADDED!

Flame_King
29 May 2008, 12:27 AM
"Another Clone War? My ancestors were in that war, they described it as a horribe fate..."
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"I will do anything in my power to stop this!"

Mastersnowy
29 May 2008, 12:43 AM
"Another Clone War? My ancestors were in that war, they described it as a horribe fate..."
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"I will do anything in my power to stop this!"
"We all will," Valek boomed. "The Clone Wars was a terrible time. Many lives were lost. Many Jedi were killed. And children..... children were slaughtered. We cannot let this happen again. I do wonder when my spy will be back."

Flame_King
29 May 2008, 12:45 AM
"We all will," Valek boomed. "The Clone Wars was a terrible time. Many lives were lost. Many Jedi were killed. And children..... children were slaughtered. We cannot let this happen again. I do wonder when my spy will be back."

"I saw someone outsice the council who looked like he was lost. Was that maybe him?"

Mastersnowy
29 May 2008, 12:48 AM
"I saw someone outsice the council who looked like he was lost. Was that maybe him?"

"Would you like to check?" Valek asked "I think Hal should go with you. The Camara are very good at blending in."

Flame_King
29 May 2008, 01:11 AM
"Would you like to check?" Valek asked "I think Hal should go with you. The Camara are very good at blending in."

"I don't think that's necessary, but if he wishes to come he can." *walks out of the council*

CPNinja
29 May 2008, 01:59 AM
Name: Kyle Hunter
Gender: Male
Uh... can't there be Rebel Clones? If there is, I'll be one. if not, I am a Jedi Padawan, with no leader.

Kyle walks in. "Did I miss something?" Kyle asks.

Tortoli
29 May 2008, 05:34 AM
Roklin Torran
Species: Rodian
Height: 5 '9
Skin color: Green
Attributes: Jedi and a hunter
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Image:JediWeaponMaster.JPG

Roklin Torran ran into the room. "Master Skywalker has been assassinated!" Roklin shouted. Despair filled the room like a fog spreading quickly. Even a non-force sensitive could feel the despair in the air. The Skywalker Legacy had ended. The last of the Skywalker line was now dead. Outside the temple a storm ominously started stirring, gradually getting more and more violent. This was the start of the war. The start of the Jedi Wars.

Roklin heard whispers in the room, none of the Jedi's mouths were moving. He spun around, looking, trying to find something in the Force. He found nothing. For once in his life, Roklin felt like he was being hunted, instead of him hunting.

Ollie
29 May 2008, 10:47 AM
Roklin Torran
Species: Rodian
Height: 5 '9
Skin color: Green
Attributes: Jedi and a hunter
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Image:JediWeaponMaster.JPG

Roklin Torran ran into the room. "Master Skywalker has been assassinated!" Roklin shouted. Despair filled the room like a fog spreading quickly. Even a non-force sensitive could feel the despair in the air. The Skywalker Legacy had ended. The last of the Skywalker line was now dead. Outside the temple a storm ominously started stirring, gradually getting more and more violent. This was the start of the war. The start of the Jedi Wars.

Roklin heard whispers in the room, none of the Jedi's mouths were moving. He spun around, looking, trying to find something in the Force. He found nothing. For once in his life, Roklin felt like he was being hunted, instead of him hunting.

Hal looked at this new comer thoughtfully "my friends i think it is not safe here any more" he said standing up "i do beleive they have found us out"

Mastersnowy
29 May 2008, 11:28 AM
Name: Kyle Hunter
Gender: Male
Uh... can't there be Rebel Clones? If there is, I'll be one. if not, I am a Jedi Padawan, with no leader.

Kyle walks in. "Did I miss something?" Kyle asks.

Roklin Torran
Species: Rodian
Height: 5 '9
Skin color: Green
Attributes: Jedi and a hunter
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Image:JediWeaponMaster.JPG

Roklin Torran ran into the room. "Master Skywalker has been assassinated!" Roklin shouted. Despair filled the room like a fog spreading quickly. Even a non-force sensitive could feel the despair in the air. The Skywalker Legacy had ended. The last of the Skywalker line was now dead. Outside the temple a storm ominously started stirring, gradually getting more and more violent. This was the start of the war. The start of the Jedi Wars.

Roklin heard whispers in the room, none of the Jedi's mouths were moving. He spun around, looking, trying to find something in the Force. He found nothing. For once in his life, Roklin felt like he was being hunted, instead of him hunting.

Hal looked at this new comer thoughtfully "my friends i think it is not safe here any more" he said standing up "i do beleive they have found us out"

You're both added. (GCW is over.)

Valek added, "We must depart, but not without the others." Suddenly, the Comscan in the center of the room flickered, and an immage appeared. It was Huna.

"They're in the Council room!" She seemed to be yelling to someone.

"Quick," Valek yelled. "We will contact the others later. Now we must leave!"

Tortoli
29 May 2008, 12:36 PM
The Jedi Masters sprinted down a long narrow hallway. They could all feel the deaths of Jedi, fading out of the Force. Roklin spun around when he heard whispers behind him. He could not see or sense anything.

What do the whispers mean? Is it only I who am hearing them? I must procede forwards, can not be hunted.

The whispers seeemed to drag him down, keep him from running forwards. Roklin's heartbeat started to increase, sweat coming down his brow.

Flame_King
29 May 2008, 02:01 PM
*ran back into the meeting hall* " We must get to the Council! The camara are COMING!"

Mastersnowy
29 May 2008, 06:44 PM
"Quickly! Head for the ships!" Valek yelled. "We can all fit in the Master Cruiser!"

The Master Cruiser was the Jedi Council's largest ship capable of holding a large amount of people. It was designed after the Mon Calamari ship, but some changes were made in the building process.

*Valek runs out the door*
"Follow me! I know the way!"

Flame_King
29 May 2008, 06:47 PM
"Quickly! Head for the ships!" Valek yelled. "We can all fit in the Master Cruiser!"

The Master Cruiser was the Jedi Council's largest ship capable of holding a large amount of people. It was designed after the Mon Calamari ship, but some changes were made in the building process.

*Valek runs out the door*
"Follow me! I know the way!"

*runs behind Valek* "What about the council? What about the people there?"

Mastersnowy
29 May 2008, 06:50 PM
*runs behind Valek* "What about the council? Weren't we supposed to go there?"

"The others will just have to catch up. They're bright. They know where the hidden ship docks are." Valek responded. "Besides, I don't sense many Camara here. Now, MOVE!"

(if you haven't noticed, I'm waiting for more people to join.)

Ollie
29 May 2008, 08:45 PM
"The others will just have to catch up. They're bright. They know where the hidden ship docks are." Valek responded. "Besides, I don't sense many Camara here. Now, MOVE!"

(if you haven't noticed, I'm waiting for more people to join.)

"come on! i can take you! im not some child!" Hal shouted to the three Calamori jedi that circled him "strike darnit!" Hal said in frustration, swinging his light saber at one of them

Mastersnowy
29 May 2008, 08:56 PM
"come on! i can take you! im not some child!" Hal shouted to the three Calamori jedi that circled him "strike darnit!" Hal said in frustration, swinging his light saber at one of them

"Keep moving!" Valek yelled to the others as he pulled a blaster from his cloak. "I'll take the last one." Valek shot at the last Camara and hit him dead in the chest, sending him falling to the floor.

Ollie
29 May 2008, 08:57 PM
"Keep moving!" Valek yelled to the others as he pulled a blaster from his cloak. "I'll take the last one." Valek shot at the last Camara and hit him dead in the chest, sending him falling to the floor.

"i had him!" Hal shouted as he ran towards them "but i guess i will get plenty more to take care of"

Mastersnowy
29 May 2008, 09:01 PM
"i had him!" Hal shouted as he ran towards them "but i guess i will get plenty more to take care of"

"Sorry," Valek panted. "It's just that we have to stick together. If one goes down then we all go down."

Valek continued to run down the hall until he reached the ship loading dock. Hundreds of Camara ships were flying in and landing everywhere. Warriors jumped out of the ships and ran through the corridors. They all looked almost like they were exactly the same.
"I guess you were right," Valek said quietly. "Anyone got a plan?"

Ollie
29 May 2008, 09:02 PM
"Sorry," Valek panted. "It's just that we have to stick together. If one goes down then we all go down."

Valek continued to run down the hall until he reached the ship loading dock. Hundreds of Camara ships were flying in and landing everywhere. Warriors jumped out of the ships and ran through the corridors. They all looked almost like they were exactly the same.
"I guess you were right," Valek said quietly. "Anyone got a plan?"

'yes" Hal said smirking "but you wouldnt like it, it involves charging straight in"

Mastersnowy
29 May 2008, 09:04 PM
'yes" Hal said smirking "but you wouldnt like it, it involves charging straight in"

"I guess you don't know me too well," Valek replied with a smile. He jumped from the hiding place and charged straight for the ship, lightsaber out and his blaster at the ready.

Flame_King
29 May 2008, 09:07 PM
"I guess you don't know me too well," Valek replied with a smile. He jumped from the hiding place and charged straight for the ship, lightsaber out and his blaster at the ready.

"Oh great, this is gonna be fun :rolleyes:* Dashes to the ship*

Mastersnowy
29 May 2008, 09:11 PM
Valek kept running at full speed toward the ship, slashing at any Camara that got in his way. When he finally got to the ship, he noticed a dark figure standing near the top.
"Lower your weapons," it said. The Camara immediatly knelt before the mysterious figure and put away their sabers. "Torve is mine, as are the others."

Tortoli
29 May 2008, 09:14 PM
The mysterious figure was a slender attractive female human. The tight black jumpsuit she wore defined the fitness of her body. Her name was Roocani. She ignited a green lightsaber and stood at the top of the ship ramp menacingly.

The Jedi are evil, they used to serve a noble purpose, now they are a tool of the government. I am doing this for the good of the galaxy. Maybe some day the Jedi will be alive again, as a rightful and noble group, and then I will join.

Spartan4424
29 May 2008, 09:30 PM
The mysterious figure was a slender attractive female human. The tight black jumpsuit she wore defined the fitness of her body. Her name was Roocani. She ignited a green lightsaber and stood at the top of the ship ramp menacingly.

The Jedi are evil, they used to serve a noble purpose, now they are a tool of the government. I am doing this for the good of the galaxy. Maybe some day the Jedi will be alive again, as a rightful and noble group, and then I will join.

Toran teleported into the battle. He began slicing and swinging wit hhis blakc lightsaber.

Hal! Valek! When are we leaving?

Mastersnowy
29 May 2008, 09:36 PM
"I don't know!" Valek said jokingly as he ran to the controls for the ship. "When do you want to?"

Tortoli
29 May 2008, 10:31 PM
This is getting confusing. :confused: So many continuity errors.

Mastersnowy
29 May 2008, 10:32 PM
This is getting confusing. :confused: So many continuity errors.

I agree. Maybe we should start from a new scene in a new thread.

Tortoli
29 May 2008, 10:34 PM
I agree. Maybe we should start from a new scene in a new thread.

Yeah how about we start right when they are running into the hallway after being alerted Skywalker is dead?

Mastersnowy
29 May 2008, 10:44 PM
Ok mods please lock this thread.

Tom
29 May 2008, 11:57 PM
Locked upon request of the author.