The pizza parlor

[Sid Fan]

Ok here it goes

The Pizza Parlor
By: Kenton Woodall
Oh the pizza parlor, what a wonderful place
Where piano music flows at a delicate pace
Where delicious dishes of pizza are plentiful
And the smell of it baking is ever so beautiful
Oh what a treat to eat
The pizza can’t be beat
The pizza parlor is pleasing to the eye
So why not be fancy and wear a tie?
The pizza has been put to the test
And proved it’s really the best

I submitted it to the penguin times but it never got published comment if you like it or if u dont like it, if most ppl say they like it i will add more of my poetry

[Happyboy77]

I thought you overdid the rhyming. 7/10

[Bioclaw]

in these lines:

The pizza parlor is pleasing to the eye
So why not be fancy and wear a tie?

Why not:

The pizza parlor is pleasing to the eye
Its so much better than the thai

lolz

[Poetic]

in these lines:

The pizza parlor is pleasing to the eye
So why not be fancy and wear a tie?

Why not:

The pizza parlor is pleasing to the eye
Its so much better than the thai

lolz

Because that would be discriminatory and racist?

I hope that was a typo...

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