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Snazzy
27 April 2008, 05:56 PM
Tears dripped from her crimson eyes
She screamed, but not in suprise
She gasped for air, for a single breath
But, she was now facing death.

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I totally made that up on the spot... It's pretty deep, but I'm not sure if I like it.

Pen Rua
27 April 2008, 05:59 PM
I really liked that, I dunno why. I just did. 10/10 from me, make some more!

D!$(0M@N
28 April 2008, 12:10 AM
Nice, it kinda scared me though.
10/10