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Motocena
26 March 2007, 04:17 AM
Everytime I go to dinner
it seems like I'm getting a little bit thinner
I'll sit down at the breakfast table
I can talk, but they're not able
When I look at them I find
there's a single question on their mind.
I wish it could go back to the way it was
it's not easy no because...

My whole family thinks I'm ***
I guess its always been that way.
Maybe it's cause of the way I walk,
that makes them think that I like...boys

The god dang question just wont go away
cause I get asked every single day
but the way they ask it is no disguise,
like "How was your day? Do you like to kiss guys?"
This is the worst, baby this was my fear
Now their opinions are crystal clear.

My whole family now is shocked,
I'm in the closet and the door is locked.
Now my glory days are gone,
I was John Elway now I'm Elton John.

My whole family now suspects,
That watching spongebob had side-effects.
But I'm not *** and thats what I said,
If I'm *** then god strike me dead.

Just cause I go to an all-guys school,
Doesn't mean Justin Timberlake makes me drool.
When I go outside, what do I see?
The clouds in the sky spell "F-*-G"

I think that God might think I'm ***,
What does he know anyway.
My grandma gave me a present just last year,
and the card said, "Happy Birthday queer!"

My whole family thinks I'm "fab"
There's a guys butt, hey bo, take a stab!
Why doesn't he get women, theres no other way,
It's cause I'm lanky, not cause I'm ***.

Just cause I'm afraid of the snow,
Or my favorite color is, the rainbow.
I don't mean to yell but I fear I must,
Cause I'm losing the people that I thought I could trust.

Even my boyfriend thinks I'm ***...just kidding

You all probably think I'm ***,
Man this song is counterproductive...
la la la la la...

Cause my whole family thinks I'm ***,
What am I suppose to say?
Baby you got to see right through the haze,
Easy-Bake oven was just a phase.

My whole family thinks I'm queer,
That is all I ever hear,
But I've been as straight as a ramp,
If you don't count Bible camp.

Do you like it?

Shippo Fox33
26 March 2007, 07:28 AM
That song is very out there =/
thats all i can say

M3l0dy
26 March 2007, 10:01 AM
its good to hear you can make a song up... but yea... the lyrics like Shippo said... its very out there!... and yea... and i cant believe you made up lyrics like thtat... is that all wat you could think of...lol!!!

Maine Rocks
26 March 2007, 10:54 AM
that was very good, you should make a vidio and put it on youtube:)

11dx11
26 March 2007, 11:30 AM
It Is hard to beleive you made that, but I have a feeling you did make It. It Is an great song and I think that If you keep up the hard work you can maybe make even more!

-You Score: 8/10

bonita nena
26 March 2007, 11:45 AM
I think that was good. Is that a true song? just had to ask

Motocena
26 March 2007, 03:16 PM
I think that was good. Is that a true song? just had to ask

No,its 100% fake I can assure you.:)

!Icy Chris!
26 March 2007, 03:19 PM
Does your family really think your ***?Thats sad....

DGuy
26 March 2007, 04:39 PM
i've got a lot of songs at http://penguinforum.miniclip.com/showthread.php?t=2747!

Motocena
26 March 2007, 10:21 PM
i've got a lot of songs at http://penguinforum.miniclip.com/showthread.php?t=2747!
Cool,I liked the songs.
Does your family really think your ***?Thats sad....

No,They don't think I'm ***,sheez.
Its even sadder that you think that.

Rod Rego
26 March 2007, 11:03 PM
No,They don't think I'm ***,sheez.

Its even sadder that you think that.


Well, your the one who made the song. It's obvious people will wonder, lol...

TheHuskerDu
27 March 2007, 12:30 AM
Wow, that's songs deep. 10/10! You need to be signed by Matador Records! Just kidding, but those lyrics are good. Keep it up, if I were you, I would make more songs, someone might just want to do them someday!:)

Guardian Ou
28 March 2007, 12:33 AM
Ok overall i thought it was OK. But dude, don't try to rhyme constantly. Try to sing that song in your head and u will get sick of all the rhymes.

Tyl3r4
28 March 2007, 12:39 AM
It's good i suppose, but it seemed more like a poem to me :D

Guardian Ou
28 March 2007, 12:42 AM
It's good i suppose, but it seemed more like a poem to me :D


A song is a poem, but when you here it rhyming line after line, it gets annoying.

Thex478
28 March 2007, 01:37 AM
Wow Moto, those lyrics are deep AND strong. Bravo bravo. 10/10.

Died By Bear
28 March 2007, 01:52 AM
It sounds good but I wish I knew the rhythm... :(