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jujubeeruler
20 April 2008, 06:01 PM
The title says it all time for voting here are the choices.
NO VOTING FOR YOURSELF! (The poll will be public).

You should have told me (harods)

Im seeing the glimpse in your heart
I see you go by, nothing too shyyy
I know you have something for me deep inside your hearrt
I wink at you, I wink at yooou
Then you wink back so coool

Now I dont see the glimpse in your heart
Im shattered, you should have told me that you were with another man.

You should have told mee.

Im not seeing the glimpse in your heart
I see you go by, ignore me try...

I know you have something for me deep inside your hearrt.


Black Yesterday (REVENGE)

Into the black pools of yesterday
Forward we fall
Our limbs ripped away
By clinging memories of fate
Turn around
Take my hand
Burn what's left
Of fate
Of sin
Of black yesterday

Take the pleading
Raging, screaming
Take the tears of black
Black yesterday
Memories shall hold me back
Of black
Black yesterday

Into the black pools of your eyes
Backward we fall
Our souls ripped away
By clinging memories of pain
Run away
Just let go
Burn what's left
Of fate
Of sin
Of black yesterday


(Chorus)

Don't you realize what you're doing?
Screaming, raging
Doing to me?
Don't you understand your duty?
Pleading, crying
Duty to me?

Into black pools of memories
Into black pools of pain
Into black pools of duty
Into black pools of rain


(Chorus)

Into the black pools of future
What shall it hold for me?
Into the promise of tomorrow
Hold me tightly while it fades
Please take away the memories
Of black, of black
Of black yesterday.



Can't Take This Anymore (Mustachio)


We're all just waitin' around,
For you to be found.
Nothing will be alright,
Unless you come here tonight... (Echo: Night, night, night, night...)
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Refrain
I can't take this anymore!
They're all crying on the floor!
You need to come back,
Or momma's gunna go wack!


I can't take this anymore!
They're all crying on the floor!
You need to come back,
Or momma's gunna go wack!


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It seems like its been forever,
Since you walked out in that stormy weather.
They all miss you...
And even me too...
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[To Refrain]


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It seems like its been forever,
Forever,
And ever...




Happy the Toaster (RedneckSlayer24)

Happy the Toaster

Hes friends with your coaster

Happy the Toaster

He has his own poster

Happy the Toaster

Never says thanks or please

Always gonna steal your cheese

He likes to kill bread

Bakes 'em till their dead

Thats how he makes toast

He scared a spooky ghost.

He always has a smile

He leaves you in denial

He likes to eat poop

He hit you with a scoop

He likes snacks by Nabisco

He knows how to disco

Hes Happy the Toaster




Surfing Geek - Parody by John-h

You can type, you can surf, in the internet wooooorld
see that site, watch that mac, dig in the surfing geek.

friday night and the net is slow
looking out for the place to surf
where the play the pc, getting in the mac
you come in to look for a zune
anybody could be a mac
mac is young and pcs old
with a bit of megabytes, everything is fine
you're a mood in tweaks
and when you get the card

you are the surfing geek, young and rich, only 31
surfing geek feel the byte from the mp3
you can type, you can surf, in the internet wooooorld
see that site, watch that mac, dig in the surfing geek

you're a mac, turn them on
leave the pc, and the you're gone
looking our for another anyone will not
you're in the mood for a byte
and you get the byte...


you are the surfing geek, young and rich, only 31
surfing geek feel the byte from the mp3
you can type, you can surf, in the internet wooooorld
see that site, watch that mac, dig in the surfing geek

The tune is like Dancing queen




Alex (Poetic)


fragility

passivity

in glasses

Mista Alex

steppin on up

fronta classes

-

voice aliftin

seeds afflictin

alla the while

Mista Alex

uncontacted

prayin to Satin

to God an Allah

spare their lives

appease the maw

-

from then to now

Mista Alex

in glasses

fronta classes

preachin to the masses

nightly he crashes

a fevered sleep

peppered in dashes—

of Mista Alex

in fronta the classes



" i got burgled (pwned) " (Leader706)

im lying, in bed, im feeling really dread
(really dreeeeaaad)
the sound, i hear, is full of lots of fear
Im awake, i shake, the sounds are all around
I think, is it really a what i think it is?

it might just be my cat
( thats what you think it is! )
it might be the people in the up-er flat!
( probably )
but no matter what it is...
IT FREAKS ME OUT!

* instrumental *

im feeling quite really scared ...
more than when i was in TROGDORS LAIRRR!
i wonder whats behind that door?
or it might be from under the floor!
(yeah)

it might just be my cat
( thats what you think it is! )
it might be the people in the up-er flat!
( probably )
but no matter what it is...
IT FREAKS ME OUT!




* - Screamed
*/ - High Pitch Scream
\*/ - Low Pitch Scream
_5_ - Hold note for five seconds
Chorus in red
& - Guitar Solo Here
"A Beautiful Tragedy" (TNT)

You are everything to me

I'm sorry for all the things I did to you
_5 and what I didn't do at_3 all

*All I really wanted
Was already in front of me
Blinded by your beauty
Invisible to these eyes*

*You are all I ever needed
I'm sorry we had to say _2 goodbye_6*

*All I really wanted
Was already in front of me
Blinded by your beauty
Invisible to these eyes*

I loved you..




I'm Sorry... (Basketcase1)

Why didn't I let you go?
In my heart I did not know!
I'm sorry for the pain I caused you,
I'm sorry but there was nothing I could do...(Hold on for 5 beats)

What did I do to deserve this?
What was I supposed to say "Ooh, I'm sorry Miss!"?? (Say slightly sarsatically)
I didn't say those things to you,
There was nothing much that I could do!

Hey look at me! I crushed your dreams,
You crushed mine too, so it seems,
I can't live this way anymore,
Each time I come round, you just close the door.

Chorus

Hey look at this!
You had your first kiss,
With some guy I never knew,
I'm only another boy to you...

Chorus

I give up now, I've had enough,
I'm sick of acting all tough,
Good bye 'cos I'm not comin' back anytime,
This was the last thing on my mind!

Chorus

As I run quickly out of air,
I grab a golden lock of your hair,
I pull you under with me,
And I am the last person you see.

Chorus

I climb out quick as I can,
I am no longer a tough man,
I'm a man who's not afraid to cry,
I killed another in my quest to die.

Chorus

Every night I tell you again and again,
Even if it causes me much pain,
I caused you much more,
The window to your heart is closed and so is the door...(Hold on for 3 beats)

Chorus

I'll give myself the same fate,
Was this all planned from our first date?
My eyes close and I remember you,
And everything we used to (Whisper the next part and hold it on for 3 beats) do...

worldking01
20 April 2008, 06:03 PM
I like Revenges the best. It just really caught onto me.

jujubeeruler
20 April 2008, 06:09 PM
TnT's was very touching and well written, it was my favorite. The poll's up BTW worldking.

TnT
20 April 2008, 06:14 PM
I suggest putting the different songs into quotes.
It would help to seperate them a little better, in my opinion. ;)

I'll read over all the songs and decide my favorite later.

Basketcase1
21 April 2008, 07:06 PM
Hmmm...I wonder, I'll need to think on this one, there are many great ones, it's so hard to decide. :|:)

REVENGE
21 April 2008, 10:12 PM
I voted for Tyler's (TnT's) song. :]

TnT
12 May 2008, 11:59 PM
So.... Did I win this? :D

Caution!
14 May 2008, 12:17 AM
So.... Did I win this? :D

I guess so and congraulations! I would vote for you too;)

REVENGE
14 May 2008, 12:53 AM
So.... Did I win this? :D

Seems that way - this contest doesn't seem to be very well organized.

Congrats, though! ;D

Linkin Parker
11 June 2008, 12:11 AM
So.... Did I win this? :D

I guess you really did. I'm kind of a rock song person but your song was really touching..
You really a cinch to win, there's not really much competition ( no offense other contestants).
Look at how much votes you've got!