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Basketcase1
18 April 2008, 04:52 PM
My Soul Is Alight...

My soul is alight with a burning flame,
And if I try to get it, it'll never be the same,
My soul is fragile and hard to handle,
My soul is a flickering candle.

My soul is alive with a beautiful light,
A light that brightens the darkest of night,
My soul is angelic and nice,
My soul is quite the opposite of ice.

My soul is submerged in the beauty of love,
It is a beautiful and elegant little dove,
My soul is easily bruised,
My soul is a young one, in need of being soothed.

My soul does not love, as it cannot,
I love because I can, and because I am love,
You cannot say that I am not,
Because you are my beloved.

By Holly (Basketcase1)

Ok, I just wrote this just now so please do not laugh at it, it was done in 5 minutes and it is not the best of my work. And do not steal it. I will find out if you have.

Uria101
18 April 2008, 04:57 PM
Wow. Your quite good at writing poems. I love how you rhymed it and I love the theme. Great job. 10/10.

Raaaad
18 April 2008, 04:59 PM
Wow, for 5 minutes that's really good. I write peoms too, but I can't do one in 5 minutes. :rolleyes:

10/10.

Basketcase1
18 April 2008, 05:32 PM
Thanks. If I write enough I'll be getting my own poem book.