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TnT
15 April 2008, 08:00 PM
This is my first time attempting to write a song. :P
It's pretty short, but oh well.
I might try redoing some things later on. lol.


It has a blessthefall feel to it.
* - Screamed
*/ - High Pitch Scream
\*/ - Low Pitch Scream
_5_ - Hold note for five seconds
Chorus in red
& - Guitar Solo Here :D(It would be a short one, 30 seconds or so).

The Time has come
to see what you were
and what you have become

Did you really want to be like this?
Do_2 You_2 Even_2 Know_2 Why_2?

*You are what you said you’d never be
\*/Why?_7

&

Did you really want to be like this?
Do_2 You_2 Even_2 Know_2 Why_2?

*I hate what you are.
*Goodbye

REVENGE
15 April 2008, 10:09 PM
I like itttt. ;D

I like the chorus, even though it's short, and I always love screaming. x]

Joshx2
24 April 2008, 05:27 PM
I like it to. BlessTheFall are BRUTAL. They are one of my fave bands. It is similar to BlessTheFall because they ROCK HARD like you and their songs are short, they don't have much lyrics but they are still brutal. Keep up the brilliant work! I love BlessTheFall =].

TnT
25 April 2008, 12:36 AM
Thanks. :)

Here's one I'm working on.
It's not completed yet. :P

You've tried to change me
*but this is who I am *

You say that _2
*I'll never make it*
You say that _2
*I'll never amount to anything*
\*/Well you are wrong\*/

You try to _2
*Stray me from my path*
You try to _2
*Tell me +2 I am worthless*
\*/Well you are wrong\*/

Joshx2
25 April 2008, 01:58 AM
Thanks. :)

Here's one I'm working on.
It's not completed yet. :P

You've tried to change me
*but this is who I am *

You say that _2
*I'll never make it*
You say that _2
*I'll never amount to anything*
\*/Well you are wrong\*/

You try to _2
*Stray me from my path*
You try to _2
*Tell me +2 I am worthless*
\*/Well you are wrong\*/


Yeah, your songs are heaps good! They would sound great if they were played with that 'BlessTheFall' touch. The lyrics are kinda like BlessTheFall too, they are pretty short but they still rock. You a fan of BlessTheFall ? It would be a good BlessTheFall song, if BlessTheFall played them. I love Craig Mabbitt's voice. Shame he left BTF =/. It's very good stuff. Should mention God in one of your songs. God is mentioned in a few BTF songs =].

**For some reason, that song reminds me of BlessTheFalls 'Higinia'. The line "Your tried to change me". You might think it doesn't but for some reason I reckon it sounds like "Higinia". =]

Santa
25 April 2008, 05:39 PM
Smexy Song's. I'm Making Some Of My Own. :) P.S Im Goose On RoR. :P

TnT
10 May 2008, 03:37 AM
Anyone else have any opinions on them?