Problems and Hostages

[RoCkWiRe]

Prologue
I sat in the dark, regretting what had just transpired. I could have stopped it...I could have helped. The only problem was I am stuck in the middle of it all, and there's no turning back now...
My name is Jeff Thompson, and I am a New Jersey cop. Or a mobster whichever you prefer, and my story is about to unfold.

Story Updated Weekly Please Comment!!!

[spacedog88]

Sounds cool, you could have made your prolog a bit longer, I don't really jump out of my seat and go ZOMGAWESOMEYAY XP but yeah, just a tip.

[RoCkWiRe]

lol it is actually longer but Im on my psp at it wont let me write very much ill update it when I get on my computer