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REVENGE
10 April 2008, 08:19 PM
And As The Blood Begins To Stain...
By Lindsey

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I got bored and decided to use the pong icon for those of you wondering. ;P This is the story in which some of you may take part in, and hopefully it will be fun to read knowing that some of your friends or yourself are included within the text. PLEASE DO NOT BE DISCOURAGED BY THE SIZE - don't act is if a little reading might hurt you, you may find that you'll like it. If I make any mistakes of your appearance, please forgive me; I'm doing my best. :] With that, let us begin.

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Chapter 1 - Page 1
Chapter 2 - Page 1
Chapter 3 - Page 2
Chapter 4 - Page 2
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Starring (In order of appearance):
Ziek
Snoopy4life
Dannyboy
Cras777
TnT
(Will be updated as story progresses)
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Chapter 1

Nothing makes sense anymore, not without you here with me…

The sun cut lightly through the trees and cast shadows around Lauren as tears snuck down the sides of her face, sometimes dropping lightly onto her clothes or the forest floor. Even though the accident had happened two months prior, she was still feeling the hollow sting in her heart that reminded her that her hero was gone – the shoulder that she’d always had to lean on had faded away forever. There, in the forest where she sat sobbing quietly, was where she’d spread the ashes a month or so ago when she’d started to college and had been unable to keep them with her in her dorm room.

Before that point, she’d been hanging onto the last comfort of her mother that she’d thought she had left. After a terrible day at work or school, she would come home and sit on the couch with tears shining upon her frail face, looking up at the jar on the mantel in front of her that held the shoulder she’d leaned on, that held the face she’d loved so dearly. They’d gotten into plenty of fights, just like any other mother-daughter duo – but unlike some, they still loved each other through everything. They had to – it was what kept them sane. Neither of them had really gone to extremes to keep in touch with Lauren’s father after he’d left, and neither of them had had anyone else to trust enough to lean on. They’d gotten hurt too many times to be trustworthy, and after the loss of her mother, Lauren became even more untrustworthy of people.

After finally finishing out the last couple of weeks of high school, however, Lauren had gotten a fully paid scholarship to Rickwood University – just as her mother had wanted. This was also extremely fortunate considering that if Lauren had wanted to go to college without it, there would’ve been no mother to help pay off student loans afterwards. But even the fact that she wouldn’t have to work mowing the campus lawns or painting dorm rooms to pay for schooling couldn’t take away the sharp pain in her heart – soothed it, maybe, but it wasn’t enough relief to drench it completely.

There had been no money for a funeral, only cremation; Lauren’s father, Mike, had agreed to pay for it. That too, had been a blessing. She’d worried about that at first as well, wondering how she would possibly afford to do anything at all for her mother, even a simple cremation. Apparently Mike still had just enough love for his daughter to help her out in that regard, though when the divorce had gone through he hadn’t wanted to see her every other weekend as was suggested. Luckily, it was worked out so that she was able to avoid that; child support was the only thing he’d had to worry about, and after she’d turned 18, he hadn’t even had to worry about that. Perhaps that was why he’d paid in full for the cremation; he felt a bit guilty for having nothing else to do. Lauren doubted he cared enough to be guilty, but it was a nice thought in the least.

She’d chosen the forest to spread the ashes mostly because of a form of greed; no one had wanted anything to do with her mother, Rebecca, when she’d been breathing so why would they have the honor of knowing where she was in death? The forest Lauren had found was a random one that she’d found in a series of woodland area, only about an hour away from the college she attended. She’d driven randomly down the highway the Sunday before classes started, turning down the dirt roads that weren’t gated. She’d come to several houses before finally finding one trail that simply led into the forest which was unnamed, save for a series of numbers, and had spread the ashes several yards to the right of the trail as the sun set. Lauren had marked this spot by tying a red ribbon on a branch of a tree that hung down where she’d gone off the trail, and tying a second just like it around the branch of a tree where she’d spread the ashes themselves.

That was where she sat now, tears rolling silently down her face as she stared into the setting sun. Painful memories seemed to arise everywhere, even during classes – driving to the spot where she sat staring into the sun had become a daily routine, save for the days where she had night classes or when she had to work late on the weekends. Nearly all of the money she made working in Barnes & Noble went strictly to gas for her silver Volkswagen Beetle and the car payment that went with it – she hardly ever bought food or drink for herself.

Most of the time, her roommate and friend Anna Webb was the only reason she ate anything. Lauren would follow Anna to the food court sometimes between classes, and most of the time Anna wouldn’t let her leave without eating something. Generally, she even bought it for her which Lauren couldn’t thank her enough for – the fact of the matter was that she didn’t have the money to eat anything when driving to the forest every evening, and she’d subconsciously decided that it was worth starving for. It was the only form of comfort she had left to cling to.

My heart is becoming as flexible as glass; what happened to talking to my friends? Soccer? Why don’t I gossip with Anna like a normal 19-year-old?

Lauren asked herself these questions often, but she never bothered to answer them in return. The answer was obvious, but it still felt slightly reassuring to ask the questions all the same. It made her feel like she still had her inner sanity, made her feel like she might actually be able to branch out again and do those things in time; but she knew better. Her heart was like glass now, overly fragile and hard. She’d lost her shoulder to lean on; she’d lost the face that kept it soft and beating.

When Lauren had been planning for college, she’d wanted to be a creative writing major and had been incredibly enthusiastic about it; now, she struggled through all of her classes and was barely able to turn in her work on time, which was very unlike her.

What happened to looking on the bright side of things? What happened to your benevolent attitude?

She normally despised hugs, but for the last month she’d wanted nothing more than one last hug from a person who would never be able to give her what she longed for. A person that was gone… a woman who had been stronger than any other person her daughter had ever witnessed to. An everlasting friend that had faded away without warning, leaving only a sunset behind for comfort. Everything’s alright, she would’ve told her daughter. Everything always works out in the end, I promise. Yet as Lauren sat on the forest floor, blonde hair pulled back into a ponytail and her bluish-green eyes staring almost unendingly into the sunset, she doubted that everything would be fine and work out for the first time in her life.

I want to be strong like you, so strong… but I can’t. Not without you here to guide me… I keep breathing just to watch everything go by.

“Beautiful isn’t it?”

Lauren turned, startled, to see a young man standing behind her with a slight smile on his face. He had long dark hair that was pulled into a short ponytail, and behind his glasses were eyes of deep hazel. He looked to be about the same age as Lauren, maybe a year older, and was staring almost longingly into the sunset, as if he wished to be somewhere far away against the horizon.

“What… what are you doing here?” Lauren asked as she began breathing steadily again.

“I could ask you the same thing.” He replied, not lifting his gaze from the sun.

“You could… but-“

“But I’m not going to.” He smiled, and for the first time, looked Lauren in the eyes. “Stop looking as though I’m going to attack you – I only came to look at the sunset in a more… beautiful environment. It isn’t the same looking at it through the dorm room windows at Rickwood.”

“You go to Rickwood?” For some reason it didn’t surprise Lauren that she hadn’t noticed him before; it was a medium sized college campus, and she’d become a very drawn back person. She hardly noticed anyone at all; save for Anna and the teachers – sometimes, she had to remind herself to even notice those people, much less the strangers who circled around her on a daily basis.

“Yes… otherwise I suppose it would be a bit odd to be complaining about their window view, don’t you think?” He continued smiling, as if he knew a joke that she did not. Lauren turned away from him, resting her chin on her hand as she started to stare blankly into the sun until he left; unfortunately, this stranger wasn’t of that nature.

“Hmm. Well, since you don’t seem to want to introduce yourself, I’ll do the honors… I’m Danny.” He held out a hand to Lauren’s back, and after a few seconds, put it back down again. “Are you always so anti-social or am I just overly friendly?”

Lauren sighed, and upon seeing that he wasn’t going to leave, turned back to face him again. “A bit of both, I suppose. I’m Lauren.” She held out her hand, and Danny took it happily in a handshake.

“This is more like it. Now, I’m assuming you go to Rickwood as well? Otherwise, I suppose you wouldn’t have had interest in my attending there.”

“Yeah… I guess you could say I go there. I’m not as … ambitious as I thought I would be about my classes though.” Lauren diverted her eyes to the forest floor uneasily.

“Well, sometimes the first year isn’t the easiest. My first year was hell.” From the way that his tone dropped drastically as he said this, Lauren thought for a moment that something even more tragic than the loss of her mother must’ve happened; yet his voice bounced back as he spoke again. “Everything will be fine, though. Everything always works out in the end.”

“What did you say?” Her voice sounded almost offended, angry even.

“Just that… everything would be fine? Did I say something wrong?” A slight hurt expression crossed Danny’s face.

“No… no, sorry. Just… reminded me of someone.”

They both paused for a moment, and then Danny spoke hesitantly.

“Do you mind if I have a seat? Just to watch the very last of the sun.”

Lauren looked to the sunset and saw that the last rays of the sun were almost gone completely from the sky.

“No, I… I don’t mind.”

As Danny sat down, he began speaking again, talking of everything between what classes she was taking to what her favorite foods were. He never mentioned that he had come to Lauren’s place of tranquility by turning off the path at the red ribbon, why he had been in the forest just to watch the sun set in the first place, nor the fact that he had been standing behind her for nearly twenty minutes, just standing there watching her, before introducing himself. He never mentioned any of this, and Lauren never had the mind to ask – perhaps that would’ve made all the difference of what was to come. Perhaps it would’ve saved lives, perhaps it would’ve eliminated the possibility of friendship between them – but it didn’t. Unknowingly, Lauren was now on the pathway to destruction, and all because she had spoken to the strange male who had seemed so harmless.

Her fate was now intertwined within something that no human had ever lived to escape – and she had not the faintest idea of what now awaited her.

Dannyboy
10 April 2008, 10:59 PM
SWEEEEEEEET. I'm digging it so far, you keep writing alright?

Oh yeah, and thanks for putting me in the story. :)

REVENGE
11 April 2008, 03:12 AM
You're very welcome. ;P

And I'm glad you like it. I'm having lots of fun writing it. ;D

RoCkWiRe
11 April 2008, 03:22 AM
I almost cryed what happened in ur story just happened to my best friend 2 months ago :'( (my best friend is a girl) its been a struggle keeping her from commiting scuicide :[ its really hard, but good story i cjnt wait for chapter 2. Maybe I should post some of my stories..

REVENGE
11 April 2008, 10:10 PM
I'm very sorry to hear that. :[

Snoopy4life
13 April 2008, 04:07 AM
Suspense.
I read all of it (very very very long) but very good!

I am a teddy bear..

REVENGE
13 April 2008, 08:18 PM
Chapter 2

The following day was overcast with clouds, leaving Lauren looking up at the sky randomly at times hoping that the sun would come out. She recalled her time with Danny the night before with a sort of haze surrounding and dulling what they had spoken of, what had happened, and even what his face had looked like. All she could remember for certain was that he had captivated her and taken her mind away from the painful loss in her heart, if only because of his friendly and upbeat nature. The way that he spoke and seemed so happily energetic constantly struck her as odd, but she knew that some people were just like that – even if they were unhappy or sad on the inside, they didn’t show it.

Except for that one moment… he said his life had been hell his first college year, and for a moment it seemed as though he meant it literally…

Anna was walking with Lauren to class, and for the first time since she’d arrived, Lauren actually paid attention to what she was saying and the faces around her. She was looking and noting each face, wondering with every passing one if she would run into Danny’s by some chance, or if she might even have a class with him.

“Lauren? Hello? … LAUREN JACOBS!” Anna looked rather exasperated.

“Oh… sorry. I was sort of… thinking into space.”

“Right when I thought you might actually be paying attention, you space out. That’s my luck.” Anna smirked, bringing a slight smile to Lauren’s face.

“Yeah, yeah, yeah. Sorry. Anyway, what were you saying?”

“I was just asking if you knew that guy over there, because he’s staring right at you.”

Lauren quickly glanced in the direction that Anna was pointing to see Danny sitting on a wooden bench a few yards away, expressionlessly eyeing her. She smiled and started to go over there, but stopped herself. He wasn’t looking at her as though she was a friend, and he wasn’t smiling as he had been the night before; he was staring at her coldly as though he saw something disgusting in her direction, as though she was a stranger that he did not want to be acquainted with.

“So, do you know him?” Anna stared expectantly at Lauren, but Lauren was still staring into Danny’s eyes as she spoke.

“No. I’ve never saw him before in my life.”

Her stomach seemed to draw tightly together, and her throat felt dry. For some reason in the back of her mind, she felt as though she’d been waiting for someone to fix her, to pick up the broken pieces that her mother’s death had left behind. Anna hadn’t seemed up to the task, though she’d been caring enough. Really, Anna was all that Lauren had left – she hadn’t kept in touch with all of her other high school friends. In all honestly, she’d forgotten about them completely.

The way that Danny had seemingly appeared out of thin air and had forced her to talk to him in his upbeat and happy nature had caught Lauren off guard. They’d spoken of what she was interested in, what she enjoyed doing in her spare time, where she worked, what she planned on doing with her life – now that she looked back on all of this, she couldn’t believe that she’d told a complete stranger of these things. What business of it was his, after all? Yet she’d told him those things anyway, perhaps in hope of someone who could take the pain away, if only a complete stranger.

And now look at him. He sees me for what I really am – broken and unfixable.
“Lauren? You coming?”

“Yeah… sorry.”

Reluctantly, she turned away and began walking beside Anna again, trying to set her mind on the Psychology Class ahead. As she walked away, Danny watched her every movement with unblinking eyes.

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Psychology ended early that day, with the teacher lecturing for about forty minutes about how the human mind perceives strangers and then letting the students out to get a head start on the ten page report due in one week. You’ll be writing a report about how you perceive a stranger or acquaintance, and giving your personal opinion on that stranger or acquaintance simply by watching them from afar. Then, we’ll study the assumptions you made simply by looking at them, and why the human mind works in the way that it does when seeing someone they don’t know.
The teacher had made it seem easy enough, but there had been muttering and giggles about watching someone from a distance. Anna elbowed Lauren excitedly as they got their things together to leave.

“Ha, I’m going to ‘study’ Billy from a distance. How about you?”

“I don’t even know where to begin. There are so many people here… I guess it wouldn’t really matter, though, would it?” Lauren smiled slightly. “Have fun studying Billy though.”

As they strode out into the open again, Lauren caught herself staring up at the sky once more, waiting for a glimpse of the sun. She tried to hide her disappointment when she saw the same dull, overcast covering without even a hint of a faint glow. Looking over to the wooden bench where Danny had sat earlier, she saw only empty space. Why did my mind immediately go to him when we were given that assignment? Why was he staring at me like that earlier… like he didn’t even know me?

Perhaps one side of him doesn’t know you at all.

Chills ran down the length of her body, and though she had no idea why she’d thought such a thing, something that didn’t even make sense, she felt there was a hint of truth to it. Anna stopped and turned to Lauren with a pleased expression on her face – the prospect of being able to study Billy Waterman and actually have an excuse to do so would probably keep her in a happy mood the rest of the week.

“Are you coming back to the dorm with me, or…?”

Lauren paused for a moment, and then sighed deeply.

“No… I suppose I’d better to go the library. I hate procrastinating with things like this – I’d rather just get a head start and get it over with.”

Anna frowned. “How are you going to start your report without watching someone first?”

“Well… I look at strangers all the time. I hardly ever introduce myself to people.” Lauren smiled. “I’ll just make up a false observation of someone and ramble on about it for ten pages. I’m good at that sort of thing. Besides, it isn’t hard to explain what you see about someone you don’t know, and why. Most of it’s obvious.”

“Suit yourself – I thought you’d be more excited about this though. I know I am.” Anna smiled sheepishly and walked off in the direction of the dorm rooms, leaving Lauren standing in silence for almost three minutes before realizing that she’d wanted to go to the library. God, what’s wrong with me? I’ve got to stop spacing out like that – I probably look like an idiot just standing around and staring at the concrete. But as she walked off, she knew that she hadn’t been staring at the concrete at all – she’d been looking at the wooden bench with curious and confused eyes.

The library was nearly empty with only a couple of students wandering through the shelves, or typing away at their laptops in the corner with ear buds stuck in their ears, no doubt listening to some of their favorite music while typing up assignments. She was walking through the Horror section in search of a secluded empty table to work on when a hand gripped her arm tightly and pulled her quietly between two aisles.

“Danny? What are you-“

He brought his index finger to his lips.

“Shh.”

As he brought her further in between the long, stretching aisles, he looked around carefully, almost as if in paranoia. He looked into her eyes and began speaking rapidly in whispers; Lauren gasped as she saw his eyes behind his glasses. They weren’t the deep hazel they had been the night before; they were yellow.

“You have to leave Lauren. You have to leave, and you can’t ever come back.”

“What do you-“

“No, don’t talk. Whisper if you must, but please, just hear me out. You’ve got to leave, you can’t stay here. I should have never spoke with you, but I couldn’t help myself and now they know about it, they know that I talked with you and they’re so, so angry…”

Lauren whispered in a small, frightened voice.

“What do you mean leave? What are you talking about? I’m glad you spoke with me, I don’t know why but it… it made me feel like I was actually alive for the first time in two months. It made me feel like I was actually worth talking to because you wouldn’t give up until you spoke with me. I don’t even know why I told you the things that I did, because I would never normally do that, but-“

“Lauren, listen to me!” Danny’s eyes had grown even more urgent, and his facial features revealed nothing but pure exasperation and fright. “This is not a game, this is your life that we’re discussing. Your life! You have to leave, you don’t have a choice if you want to live, and I’m so sorry for doing this to you. I never meant for this to happen-“

He stopped short, cocking his ear to the right and freezing completely. There were so many things that Lauren wanted to say, but she dared not speak even in a low whisper as he listened carefully. When he met her eyes again, Lauren only heard one almost inaudible word from his lips before he pushed her away and ran in the opposite direction.

“Run.”

Not having time to react in any other way, she did as she was told and ran as quietly as she possibly could in the direction that Danny had shoved her. Creeping around the aisles, she took the long way around and found herself running out the front door in the direction of her dorm room, paying no attention to the tears that were falling silently from her eyes. She stopped short and leaned against a brick building which she was fairly sure led into the campus gym, and stood shaking, closing her eyes against the real world as if trying to wish it away.

Voices met her ears, and her eyes shot open – they were coming from just around the corner of the building she was resting against, and they didn’t sound of the nice sort. She crept quietly along the brick wall until she came to the corner. Peeking around as silently as possible, she saw a young man with dark brown hair just above his shoulders throw Danny up against the side of the building with fierce eyes.

“We know you talked to her Danny – what did you say?”

Through gritted teeth, Danny spoke. “I didn’t tell her anything about us, Tyler. I just spoke with her… I didn’t say anything important.”

Tyler’s grip tightened, and he emitted a deep snarl.

“You know the law. You know what will happen to her, and to you.”

“I’m telling you, I didn’t say-“

“And why should I believe what you say? Huh? You’re the one speaking with human girls. You don’t deserve any form of respect – you don’t deserve to be believed. You probably told her everything about us, about what I worked so hard to build in secrecy. We’re going to find her and kill her, and then we can put this whole thing behind us. The scouts I sent out will get her scent soon enough, and then-“

Tyler paused, breathing deeply for a moment and closing his eyes. When he opened them again, he looked straight at Lauren and smiled maliciously.

“LAUREN RUN!” Danny screamed – Tyler relaxed his grip on Danny only to throw him violently against the concrete as Lauren ran past them, dropping all her belongings and making for the dorm rooms as quickly as she could. If I can just make it to the dorms, there are other people there… they won’t do anything if there are that many witnesses…

Not being able to control herself, she looked back as she ran; Tyler was running after her, and much faster. He would catch her in a matter of seconds. She turned forward again, and put on a new burst of speed – her dorm room building was a few hundred feet away, and she knew she wouldn’t make it. She kept waiting to be pounced upon and shot in the forehead, or perhaps stabbed in the chest with a concealed knife – but all she heard behind her was a deep growl that somehow seemed like a familiar voice.

Turning once more, she saw Danny on top of Tyler, wrestling with him on the ground. Both were emitting deep growls and glaring with sharp yellow eyes as they clawed at each other – she couldn’t be sure, but as she turned back around Lauren thought she even saw Danny lunge down and bite his opponent’s arm. Just as she made it to the steps of her dorm building she heard a distant bell ring; classes were letting out. She stopped as she grabbed the door handle and looked for the heap of writhing clothing upon the concrete that had saved her life; as people began filing out of buildings, all that was to be seen was empty space. The two fighting young men were gone.

Lauren opened the door and ran up the stairs to her dorm room, and without even bothering to go inside, she collapsed in the hallway as a crying, shaking mess. Breathing heavily, all she could do to keep herself from breaking down completely was to think rationally about what had happened.

Danny must be part of some sort of gang, and they thought that he’d told me their secrets –that’s why they wanted to kill me, they thought I knew something that I didn’t.

But as she managed to lift herself up and open the door, paying no attention to Anna’s frantic yells and demands to know what had happened as she fell upon her bed with pure exhaust, she knew that a gang was the least of her problems.

Humans don’t growl; they don’t bite and claw at each other like that. Like… like animals.

Before falling asleep in a crumpled heap next to Anna, Lauren was only able to mutter one word for explanation.

“Animals…”

TnT
14 April 2008, 07:25 PM
haha.
I'm like rawr. ow bite. ow scratch. rawr.

Xx_CUrSeD bLoNdE_xX
14 April 2008, 08:11 PM
REVENGE, that was beautiful. I really liked reading it. =]

I also like how your avvy and sig kinda match your story now. x3 Anyways, I can't wait until the next chapter!

Dannyboy
15 April 2008, 03:34 AM
Awesome, I'm some seductive animal-like thing. :cool:

Sorry for making you cry Ziek. :( Lol.

I'm really getting into this story so far (no pun intended). Keep writing.

REVENGE
17 April 2008, 12:35 AM
Chapter 3 (Bit shorter than usual, for that I apologize.)

When Lauren awoke groggily a short time later, her mind was reeling and trying to sort out her thoughts – trying to remember just exactly what had happened. Surely not the tangle of teeth and escape from death that still lingered in her memory. Upon seeing Lauren stir, Anna screamed her name with excitement and leapt off of her bed, flinging herself beside her friend and asking repeatedly if she was okay, if she could tell her what had happened, if she needed anything. But Lauren wasn’t paying any attention to Anna – she was thinking, trying to remember.

How did I get away from… from… Tyler? I think that was his name. I know that I didn’t outrun him, because he was almost on top of me… yet I made it to the dorms. She paused, and blinked blankly for a moment before everything came rushing back to her. Danny.

But there’s no way that he just jumped on him and started… growling like that. Clawing, even biting. I must have imagined that part… yes, I imagined that part. And Tyler, talking about humans as though he wasn’t one… I… I imagined that as well. It was fairly warm outside… maybe I gave myself heatstroke or something by running. And since those parts didn’t really happen, why did he want to kill me? I haven’t done anything to him, I don’t even know him. … Maybe it was all just a huge dream.

But as Lauren heard Anna shrieking beside her, she knew that wasn’t true. At least not the dream part of it.

“Lauren? Can you hear me?” Anna was in hysterics by the time that Lauren zoned in to her voice.

“Yes, of course I can hear you… unfortunately, I can’t hear anything else because you’re much too busy screaming in my ear.”

Anna gave a slight hurt look, and Lauren backtracked.

“I’m sorry – I was just trying to think. Yes, I’m fine. Thank you.”

“Well… what happened?” She looked wide-eyed at her friend as Lauren began telling a tale off the top of her head.

“I … uhh… was almost… mugged, I think.”

Anna gasped. “In broad daylight?”

“Yeah.” Lauren paused for a moment, trying to get her story straight. “This guy I’d never saw before came around the corner of the gym and tried to steal my bag. But Da-… I mean, that guy that was staring at me this morning, he fought him off and stuff, so everything’s fine. His name is Danny – he’s really… uhm… nice.”

Anna looked at her with slight disbelief, her eyebrows furrowed.

“You seemed so shook up when you came in here, crying and gasping and… then you said something about animals before you fell asleep. I thought something absolutely terrible had happened – you acted as though you’d saw a ghost.”

Or as if I’d heard plan of my own demise, she thought.

Lauren sighed, trying to look embarrassed. “Well… I’ve never gone through anything like that. It just shook me, I guess. I’m not used to the world being like it is. I’ve always had the pleasure of being around kind people and good communities. Not to say this isn’t a good community, of course, but I’ve never been mugged before. Or… almost been mugged.”

Anna opened her mouth to speak, but was interrupted by a hard knock on the door. Lauren looked questioningly at her, slightly puzzled. They’d never locked their door before – and even though Lauren realized it was probably an extremely necessary precaution, it usually made her feel better to fool herself into thinking that everyone around their college campus was nice with good intentions, though she knew better.

“Should I open it? I locked it after you came in… you kind of got me paranoid with your dramatic arrival, earlier.”

Lauren nodded. “Just be… careful.”

As Anna stood and walked over to the door, Lauren’s heartbeat soared – was it Tyler or one of his ‘scouts’? Was he back to do the dirty work that Danny had prevented him from doing earlier? Would he hurt Anna if it were him?

Anna slowly opened the door, and then issued a slight scream and jumped away from the door, letting it slowly creak open.

It’s him, with his yellow eyes malicious smile… he’s come to kill me, and this time, I can’t escape…

As the door was pushed open quickly by a bloodied hand, Lauren couldn’t help but issue a small scream just as Anna had done as she saw Danny standing in the doorway, looking like a completely different person. His hair, which had been tame and pulled back out of his eyes, was now ragged and free, falling into his face. His eyes had gone back to their original hazel color, but were somehow just as wild as the yellow had been. Deep gashes were seeping blood from his arms, and another cut ran just along the curve below his right eye. Lauren knew as she looked into Danny’s eyes that all hopes of dispelling most of it as her own imaginings were gone. As he walked in the room, he left his handprint in crimson on the off-white door, and his voice was urgent as he spoke.

“Lauren, we have to leave. Now. Pack all that you’re going to take, but keep it as light as possible.”

She hesitated, looking from Danny, to Anna, and back to Danny.

“LAUREN, GET YOUR THINGS!” Danny roared sternly, sending Anna into hysterics again and sending Lauren into a whirlwind of running and grabbing things she thought she would need, packing them roughly into the traveling bag that she had under her bed.

“WHY ARE YOU BLEEDING? WHAT DO YOU MEAN LEAVE? LAUREN HAS A RESEARCH PAPER DUE IN A WEEK!” Anna shrieked with wide eyes, uncomprehending what was going on. “ALL OF THIS BECAUSE OF A BAG? SHE DIDN’T EVEN GET MUGGED, WHAT’S ALL THIS-“

“SHUT UP!” Danny screamed, obviously trying desperately to calm himself from whatever had left him bleeding and dirty. Anna did as she was told, but not because Danny had said to do so – she was standing in place with her mouth open, awestruck that no one seemed to care to tell her what was going on, and only had the courtesy of telling her to be quiet. However, as Danny and Lauren ran out the door, leaving her behind, she found her voice again and ran after them.

“LAUREN WAIT! YOU… YOU LEFT YOUR CAR KEYS!”

Instead of Lauren answering, Anna heard only Danny’s gruff voice. “JUST KEEP THEM FOR HER UNTIL SHE GETS BACK!”

They left without another word, leaving Anna standing in the hallway, dumbstruck. It was the last time Lauren would ever see her friend again – she didn’t get to say goodbye.

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This might be the last update for a while - a huge test is coming up, and I've got to pass it to graduate. (I think.) So I'll be studying for that until after next Wednesday.

Basketcase1
18 April 2008, 05:34 PM
This is amazing. Well done!

Dannyboy
22 April 2008, 04:09 AM
The story is still going awesomely. Good luck on that test. :cool:

REVENGE
28 July 2008, 06:34 PM
Now that everything's calmed down a bit this summer and I actually have a bit of time to write, I may write a few more chapters. :] Who knows what'll happen.

REVENGE
01 August 2008, 02:46 AM
Chapter 4

Tyler sat with a reserved expression upon the forest floor, calmly looking around at his comrades. The silence was only broken by the sound of his own voice – the birds and crickets never ventured into this place. It was almost as though they could sense the centuries of death and evil among the painted rocks and dead trees. The rocks were symbols, circling the clearing with the malice of dozens of generations. In front of Tyler were seven men, all sitting with looks of hunger upon their flushed faces.

“Humans are only here for our own entertainment – the ancestors said so. They like to make stories of how they can become one of us, stories made to scare little children into being good instead of mischievous. The human mind can be twisted and contorted until it’s nothing more than putty – when they come into contact with something that they cannot destroy, they break into pieces. Danny has broken the law. Are we going to act in the way of humans with compassion and understanding that lawbreakers thrive on, or are we going to end this now?”

The men said nothing, only acknowledged what they were being told in silence. Tyler smiled and stood, as did the others. Rain began to fall around them.

“Good.”

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Danny drove solemnly, ignoring Lauren’s questions about where they were going and why they’d taken his car instead of hers. It was a simple black sports car, and as elegant as it was, it was also extremely flashy and easy to spot. Why not take hers, something a little less conspicuous? After a while she’d given up, and let him drive in silence. His wounds had stopped bleeding before the loss of blood had gotten too serious, but he looked a mess all the same. Sweat ran down his face regardless of the fact that the air conditioner was on full blast, and the dirt, sweat, and blood had all mingled together. Yet he seemed not to notice any of these things; his eyes were focused intently on the road as he drove at a steady 80 MPH, hardly slowing down to go around curves.

“You’re going to kill us both driving like that on this road.”

For once, Danny seemed to acknowledge her existence.

“I’m a good driver.”

“Good drivers know not to drive this fast on roads like this – there’s too many curves. Plus, they usually obey the speed limit. You should slow down.” Lauren only sounded vaguely interested and her voice sounded miles away as she watched the highway unfold in front of them.

“We don’t have time to slow down.”

“I’m guessing you think that dying in a car wreck would be more suitable than what’s after us now.”

Danny sighed. “I told you, I’m a very good driver. We’re not going to die.”

“Really? I think we are. I think this is just a giant game of cat and mouse, and we’re on the latter side.”

Danny looked at Lauren’s face – it was even more forlorn than it had been when they’d first met.

“Then I’m guessing you’ve never watched Tom & Jerry.”

A slight smiled made its way across her face for a moment – then it left as quickly as it had come.

“Too bad life isn’t as wonderful as a cartoon.”

Danny quickly took off the cruise control and floored the gas pedal; the needle began climbing and the trees shot past faster and faster as they raced along the road.

“What are you doing?!?”

“Are you going to stop?”

“Stop what?”

Lauren eyed the needle nervously as he kept climbing higher and higher – looking ahead, she saw the next curve and knew that they’d never make it if he didn’t slow down.

“Stop being so pessimistic and depressing.”

“SLOW DOWN!”

“ARE YOU?”

“YES, FINE, ANYTHING!”

Danny took his foot off the gas and eased on the brake as they shot around the curve in the wrong lane, barely staying on the road at all. As the highway straightened out, he eased back into the right lane and smiled as the needle made its way back to 80. After putting the cruise control back on, he looked over at Lauren who was still gripping her seat tightly with her eyes shut.

“Are we dead yet?” She whispered.

“Sorry to disappoint you, but no.”

She opened her eyes and let out her breath, eyeing the speedometer reassuringly.

“Oh.”

“So… do you enjoy this speed better?”

“I like the number 80 quite a lot right now, actually.”

“Good.”

Lauren smiled sheepishly.

“Look, I’m sorry for being so … depressing. It’s just hard not to be when people are trying to kill you for no known reason, especially when your life sucked to begin with.”

“Obviously you value your life at least a little bit or the thought of death wouldn’t scare you so much.”

“You don’t have to value life to fear death. At least… you don’t have to value your own.”

She looked away, staring intently again at the road.

Danny looked quizzically at her for a moment and then did the same, surrounding himself in thought.

“I hope you aren’t talking about me.” He said at last, breaking the silence.

“Why?”

“Because if you are, that would make you incredibly stupid, and I don’t want to think of you as stupid.”

“I don’t see why fearing for someone else’s life would be stupid.”

“And I don’t see why someone who longs for death would fear it so much, so I suppose we have a fair bit to learn about one another.”

For once, Danny’s voice was malicious and angry instead of kind and understanding, a voice that Lauren had never heard before. Her voice was a whisper as she spoke.

“Whenever I think I’ve got you figured out you change – you keep throwing in these little pieces of you that don’t connect to one another, pieces that don’t make a whole person but two different people entirely. I don’t think I’ll ever understand you.”

Danny’s expression was cold as sheets of rain began battering the windshield, and the car slowed as they passed into a small town, stopping at a conveniently placed gas station. He opened the door and stepped out into the rain, then thoughtfully said something to Lauren before slamming the door and filling the car with gas.

“The real me is beyond understanding.”

TnT
01 August 2008, 03:23 PM
Ah, it's great, Lindsey. :)
Reminds me of Twilight a little. :P

REVENGE
02 August 2008, 12:01 AM
I'm glad you like itttt. x]

TnT
07 August 2008, 01:22 AM
More! MORE! MORE!
lol
I need more. :P

Ziek
07 August 2008, 06:25 PM
Sorry for making you cry Ziek. :( Lol.


Haha, I forgive you! :P

Ah, it's great, Lindsey. :)
Reminds me of Twilight a little. :P

I agree with everything Tyler said, it does remind me of Twilight. :)

And it's very cool reading a book where I'm a main character! (and she does act like me too)
I laughed out loud at some parts, it's great so far!

YAY.

Dannyboy
29 August 2008, 08:12 PM
Oh hey, I'm glad to see that this story is still coming along smoothly. The story's still looking good, REVENGE. :)

peguin21795
02 September 2008, 12:44 AM
That's so cool!

I'm also good at writing myself, but this story rocks! :D