Dirty Girl

[Freebee93]

Dirty Girl
By, Freebee93
Dedicated to Walmartshrty: You rawk gurl!

Chapter One: The boy
"You! Girl! Wake up!" Then she felt a firm kick. Only known as Dirty Girl she stepped up the man examined her. "Off, leave!" He yelled at her. "Oh please let me stay! I will work and I eat so very little..." she whimpered. The man fine sputtered "Fine." and sent her to the cook.
"A man of strong has sent me to you ma'am" She said quietly to the cook. The cook then named her "Stiley" and sent her to work in the feilds gathering berries.
There she met a dog. "A stray" A thought and gave him some straw. She gathered some berries to satisfy the cook who gave her a peice of old cheese.

[REVENGE]

I'm afraid your story seems to be a bit broken, dear. :[

You have a very wonderful imagination, but you need to work on re-reading your work to check for grammatical/spelling errors (we all mess up from time to time, though) and perhaps work on making your first chapter a bit longer than one paragraph.