View Full Version : Into the Forest: Book 1
Phrax
08 April 2008, 12:16 AM
This is based off of Topoftheline's RPG, Into the Forest. I hope you enjoy what we have accumulated over the many weeks of typing.
Prolouge (this is straight from the RPG to give you a practical idea)
Cimmorene was chatting with her friends, Terry and Will, when something swooped overhead. Cimmorene looked up. "What was that?"
"I have no idea," said Will.
"Well, we can't just stand here! Let's go check it out," said Terry, kinda nervously.
They then looked over a little, and saw puffs of smoke behind the huge hill in the center of their village. Terry walked over to the hill, and Cimmorene and Will followed cautiously behind. They peeked on the other side of the hill.
"Watch where your going, Kotir! Sooner or later your going to knock everyone out with your clumbsy flying! Now, we need to go look for that girl," said a voice, which seemed to Cimmorene, Terry, and Will as a dragon.
"Fine Kazul, don't get so grumpy. Now, where should we start looking?" said the other dragon.
"Well, I did see some villagers over there on the other side of the hill. Let's go look over there," said Kazul.
"Oh boy, we gotta get out of here!" whispered Will.
The dragons flew over the hill, and stared at Cimmorene. "There she is!" cried Kotir.
"Right you are," said Kazul. She looked at Cimmorene. "Don't be afraid of us. We need your help. You see, our village is under attack by...wizards..., and you have been chosen to lead us to victory."
"Wait a sec," said Cimmorene. "How the heck am I suppost to defeat wizards? I mean, I haven't ever seen a dragon before, or a wizard for that matter."
"We'll train you. Come now, we got some work to do. Oh yea, and you also may gather some people to help you. Now hurry up and meet us by this tree over there and we'll get going," explained Kotir.
Cimmorene looked at Terry and Will. "Guys, you gotta help me. I have no clue what to do."
Terry and Will looked at each other. "Fine," they both said in unison. Then, they packed up and set off through the forest, ready for whatever may happen in their long journey.
Chapter One
As they treked throughout the forest with Kazul and Kotir overhead, they soon came upon a small village. Well, not exactly small it was small dragon in terms of a dragon.
"Where on earth is this? What on earth is this?" asked Will.
The place was encompased by a thirty foot mud barricade, on the inside, there seemed to be strangely shaped caves of sort. The caves were peculiarly formed with rough outer shells. This perhaps, meant that the dragons had carved the caves themselves.
"This is the small village of Snazelsu. It is one of many dragon sanctuaries." replied Kotir.
"Small?" Will snapped back, seemingly shocked. "And if this is not but one of many dragon villages, how come I have not seen another before?"
"Because most of the are hidden you insolent child. Do you think we would leave them out in the open so hunters can 'harvest' our scales, teeth, and talons?" Kotir was obviously annoyed by the question that the little human had asked.
When night finaly dawned upon the village, Cimmorene, Will, and Terry, each had thier own small peculiar cave to sleep in.
Cimmorene looked up at the mud ceiling as she was lying in bed. Then she glancd over at Terry's hut through the open archway. She went out and entered her freind's temporary dwelling. "Where did Kuzul and Kotir go off to?"
"I have no idea," came the soft reply.
"We better go look for them then," Cimmorene responded quickly.
Then as soon as she said those words, they went off to go look for them, leaving Will alone in his own bedroom, asleep.
Kazul and Kotir had been flying far from the village to a graveyard to visit there mother. She tended the graveyard in order to keep it in top shape, and had dug a hole in the earth for her abode. Many years ago, their grandmother had died, her spirit must have pulled her to the graveyard because she had never left it or will ever leave it. Kazul broke open the wooden planks to their mothers hole.
"Are you sure she's not asleep?" asked Kazul
"Yes, of course I am." Kotir responded sharply.
Cimmorene walks around the quite village with Terry. "I still don't see them," she whispered.
All of the sudden, Cimmorene down from the hill where they were currently on. A single mass wizards were coming towards the outer walls of the dragon community. And by the looks of things, they were not about to leave without a fight.
A witch by the name of Walliashi stepped forward with her clan of wizards. The fact of knowing that Cimmorene wasn't trained, she couldn't halp but smile cockily to herself. Obviously Walliashi was thinking her attack on the dragons and Cimmorene would be the most easy 'fight' she had had in years.
Freebee93
08 April 2008, 10:13 PM
This sounds cool! please add on soon.
Topoftheline
08 April 2008, 10:16 PM
Cool. Too bad I took Terry and Will out. They were pretty pointless characters. :P
Phrax
08 April 2008, 10:35 PM
Yeah but still. I am going to add them on the first book.
Spartan4424
09 April 2008, 12:41 AM
this is really cool. but when i said i was writing a story, i meant in real life. i planned on posting it when i was done, but i didnt get very far.
Phrax
09 April 2008, 12:57 AM
this is really cool. but when i said i was writing a story, i meant in real life. i planned on posting it when i was done, but i didnt get very far.
Well I meant off of the original stories.
Spartan4424
09 April 2008, 01:22 AM
Well I meant off of the original stories.
i know, im continuing off from the originals.
Phrax
09 April 2008, 01:31 AM
I might add a little more tonight then more tommorow. Its hard work.
Mustachio
10 April 2008, 12:03 AM
I might have to read this. Can anyone give me a summary of this Into the Forest RP? I would look in the threads but I'm not really hyped about reading 200+ pages.
Phrax
10 April 2008, 12:31 AM
More done on the story. I hope you like it so far.
mosplee8484
10 April 2008, 12:35 AM
thats awesome i love it so funny :D
Phrax
10 April 2008, 02:33 AM
hooray! More of the story is done. After a while, Chapter two will be started.
Ollie
26 April 2008, 04:11 PM
well since Phrax hasnt been on i a while im going to pick up where his editing left off
i had to add a little here and there and take some out to so it make sense
Cimmorene then knew that she needed to find Kazul and Kotir soon, or this would be it for her
All of the sudden Kazul swoops by Cimmorenes side, but she was bleeding, from the neck.
"Ah, so I see you've come to join us, Kazul. Bump into my friends, did you?" Walliashi said as she continued to walk closer,
until there was only the length of a long-sword between the two enemies.
"Kazul!" Cimmorene shouted. She knew she was safe, for now. Kazul then gave Cimmorene a sword.
"I'm sorry I didn't train you, not enough in time. Please be careful," Kazul said.
"Don't worry,i will" said Cimmorene.
"Hah. So you've had no training then? Well, this will be easier then I expected. I knew you had arrived not long before now,
but I'm surprised they didn't even give you a little lesson, knowing of all the danger you are in." Wallshi said smugly
"Un-guard, young-one."
Walliashi swung her sword around as if she had already won the battle.
Will jumped infront of Cimmorene with a sword in hand.
"Where did you get that sword?" Cimmorene asked.
"From Kotir." Will answered.
Then Kotir flew in, ready for battle.
Terry followed behind. Then Kotir gave Terry a sword. "Use this wisely," he said.
"So, three un-trained swordsman? Oh, well now I'm sure to lose." Walliashi said sarcastically.
Then she cut an W into Wills wrist as he charged at her. Will fell back in pain.
More dragons then heard the news from Kotir, and flew in, and started breathing fire on all of the wizards.
Too bad the wizards had used their Fire-Proof charms.The dragons fire hit them and bounced off without any harm to the wizards
Cimmorene then took her sword and started swinging it wildly into the crowd of wizards,with Will and Terry behind,
they all had had shields this time though.
Kotir watched the battle from a high perch
Kazul swoops in, but a wizard named plastic shoots plastic hoops around her.
Aytemu was just sent into battle by the wizard chief. Aytemu runs over to Kazul and takes the plastic hoops off of her,
throwing them back at the plastic wizard.
"What in the world type of wizard shoots plastic?" Aytemu whispers, as he runs away from a plastic hoop.
Cimmorene then takes her sword and slashes it at Plastic
plastic turns tops sword to plastic
Cimmorene then ran to tell Kazul, and Kazul told her that there is a secret stash of weapons in a hut she pointed to.
Cimmorene ran over there and got a battleaxe, and then ran back over to the action
Aytemu, still confused about the plastic wizard, comes over and casts a spell.
"Arumbanu Carumbanu!" Yelled Aytemu. Plastic then turned into rusty metal, and fall to the ground, not able to move
Cimmorene looked over. "All the wizards are retreating, but what made them do it?"
"I think they lost alot of men,but they will be back. Come, I want to teach you a new technique. It is called Arumbanu
and you say Arumbanu with another word to gain a special move.This will be alot better than the weapons.
Now, what do you want your special ability to be?" Kazul asked
Cimmorene thought for a second. Then she answered, "How about the power of the elements Fire, Water, and Earth?"
"Ok," said Kazul, "Let's get started."
i''l work on more this afternoon
Topoftheline
26 April 2008, 11:45 PM
well since Phrax hasnt been on i a while im going to pick up where his editing left off
i had to add a little here and there and take some out to so it make sense
Cimmorene then knew that she needed to find Kazul and Kotir soon, or this would be it for her
All of the sudden Kazul swoops by Cimmorenes side, but she was bleeding, from the neck.
"Ah, so I see you've come to join us, Kazul. Bump into my friends, did you?" Walliashi said as she continued to walk closer,
until there was only the length of a long-sword between the two enemies.
"Kazul!" Cimmorene shouted. She knew she was safe, for now. Kazul then gave Cimmorene a sword.
"I'm sorry I didn't train you, not enough in time. Please be careful," Kazul said.
"Don't worry,i will" said Cimmorene.
"Hah. So you've had no training then? Well, this will be easier then I expected. I knew you had arrived not long before now,
but I'm surprised they didn't even give you a little lesson, knowing of all the danger you are in." Wallshi said smugly
"Un-guard, young-one."
Walliashi swung her sword around as if she had already won the battle.
Will jumped infront of Cimmorene with a sword in hand.
"Where did you get that sword?" Cimmorene asked.
"From Kotir." Will answered.
Then Kotir flew in, ready for battle.
Terry followed behind. Then Kotir gave Terry a sword. "Use this wisely," he said.
"So, three un-trained swordsman? Oh, well now I'm sure to lose." Walliashi said sarcastically.
Then she cut an W into Wills wrist as he charged at her. Will fell back in pain.
More dragons then heard the news from Kotir, and flew in, and started breathing fire on all of the wizards.
Too bad the wizards had used their Fire-Proof charms.The dragons fire hit them and bounced off without any harm to the wizards
Cimmorene then took her sword and started swinging it wildly into the crowd of wizards,with Will and Terry behind,
they all had had shields this time though.
Kotir watched the battle from a high perch
Kazul swoops in, but a wizard named plastic shoots plastic hoops around her.
Aytemu was just sent into battle by the wizard chief. Aytemu runs over to Kazul and takes the plastic hoops off of her,
throwing them back at the plastic wizard.
"What in the world type of wizard shoots plastic?" Aytemu whispers, as he runs away from a plastic hoop.
Cimmorene then takes her sword and slashes it at Plastic
plastic turns tops sword to plastic
Cimmorene then ran to tell Kazul, and Kazul told her that there is a secret stash of weapons in a hut she pointed to.
Cimmorene ran over there and got a battleaxe, and then ran back over to the action
Aytemu, still confused about the plastic wizard, comes over and casts a spell.
"Arumbanu Carumbanu!" Yelled Aytemu. Plastic then turned into rusty metal, and fall to the ground, not able to move
Cimmorene looked over. "All the wizards are retreating, but what made them do it?"
"I think they lost alot of men,but they will be back. Come, I want to teach you a new technique. It is called Arumbanu
and you say Arumbanu with another word to gain a special move.This will be alot better than the weapons.
Now, what do you want your special ability to be?" Kazul asked
Cimmorene thought for a second. Then she answered, "How about the power of the elements Fire, Water, and Earth?"
"Ok," said Kazul, "Let's get started."
i''l work on more this afternoon
Cool, nice work typing out all of that. It's gonna take alot of typing to finish the whole book. :)
Ollie
27 April 2008, 02:58 AM
Cool, nice work typing out all of that. It's gonna take alot of typing to finish the whole book. :)
Tell me about it, you guys had to go on for about 64 posts! lol jk jk
Any who here is the next piece
After many days, Cimmorene learned new Arumbanus. They are:
Arumbanu Fire-puts fire in palm, and allows Cimmorene to throw it at anyone
Arumbanu Water-same thing as fire
Arumbanu Earth-picks up pieces of earth from the ground,
and allows Cimmorene to throw it at someone
Though Trouble brews and puts Cimmorenes new found skills to the test,Plastic, on of Walshi's witchs had not retreated
and was turning all food to...you guess....plastic
Aytemu announced to Cimmorene: "I think they're coming back!"
Aytemu sends another spell. "Yupoli Quigi!"
A huge bubble comes out of his hands, and floats over to the men.
Some of them get trapped, but others avoid it.
Cimmorene then shouted "Arumbanu Earth!" and made a wall around Plastic,
trapping her there for now.
Plastic made plastic points hurling them at the wall and escaped
Cimmorene kept throwing the walls at Plastic, until Plastic was too tired and fell down, exhausted
Aytemu casted a non-plastic spell. "Non-plasticah Normalah!"
It turns all plasticized items back to normal, and then reverses the spell on Plastic,
turning Plastic into plastic.
Before Aytemu had casted his spell:
Panting plastic sighnaled the wizard warriors to come and help her "medical emergency!"
But before the warriors could come, Aytemu turned them into plastic,
then turned Plastic into plastic, but this time, Aytemu succeeded.
Aytemu then got really dizzy, and fell over.
He realized that he had cast too many spells in a short period of time.
this caused all the spells to reverse, and plastic, ran back to the wizard village.
Aytemu then signaled for the rest of his team to go on. "I'll wait here. I'm too tired to go on."
After the battle Cimmorene then went to go see Terry and Will to see how they were doing on their training
Wearly Plastic walked up to Aytemu, shewas tired of being beaten,
and made Aytembu go in complete confusion and forget who he was with one cursed spell
Cimmorene, returning from her visit with will and Terry, went over to Aytemu.
"Are you ok?" she asked.
Later that night a lightning bolt hit plastic
The lightning bolt also hit a tree, and started a fire that raged thoughout the wizard village.
Jeral watched the scene from a nearby bar.
A wizard stop the fire, but Plastic stumbles off to dragon village, strangely good...
Cimmorene saw Plastic coming, and allerted Kazul and Kotir
Jeral then stood up and wlked out of the bar towards Plastic,
when he came near to the unsuspecting witch he impaled her with his sword.
Walliashi appeared with a travel spell
"Who are you? Did I hire you?
Jeral answered " No. I am super secret samurai warrior."
Kazul flew in "Hello traveler. You look strong.
Will you join us in our journey to defeat the evil wizards?"
Jeral takes a momentary pause, and then said
" Yes"
Kazul smiled. "Thank you traveler. Shall I introduce you to the other warriors?"
"No. I shall name them as followed:Warrior A,Warrior B,Butler C,Warrior D,Warrior E,Butler F" Jeral said cooly looking at the group
"OH REALY? Okay, then. Bye." Walliashi said waving as she disappeared
"Ook..." said Kazul. "Take them to the cave over there to the right.
I'll see you tommorrow, you get some rest now, ok?"
After everyone had left and Cimmorene was setting on a rock next to the stream that ran by the cave.
Cimmorene looked over when she heard a peculiar noise, and there stood Walliashi.
Cimmorence was frightened. She to run to tell Kazul and Kotir before Walliashi started to attack.
But before she could run and tell Kazul and Kotir, Wallaishi pulled out her wand,
and made Cimmorene trip.
Cimmorene thought fast, and then she yelled, "KAZUL! KOTIR!", hoping they would come.
Even though he didnt know it, Kazul had a different son. His name was Trogdor.
He walked like a lizard, but looked like a dragon.
He found Jeral and the others out side of the cave looking over at Cimmorene and Walliashi
Trogdor then decided to help them defeat the wizard.
Trogdor lloked over at Jeral and said" Hello Jeral. I would like to help you
and these warriors on your quest.
I will help you by getting info on the wizard.
I can camouflage myself, so he will neer see me.
What do you say? All you need to do in return is feed me."
Walliashi seeing the odds stacked against her flees from the scene,
carrying only her wand.
When he was far away from the cave ,Jeral turned to face Trogdor.
"So you would rather serve me, rather than these children. Very well, apprentice" said Jeral, he looked over in the direction Walliashi had fleed
"Poor Walliashi, never understanding what defeat actually means"
yeah i skipped the whole thing with Walmart and Akabob22
didnt really have any thing to do with the RPG
Topoftheline
27 April 2008, 03:16 PM
Tell me about it, you guys had to go on for about 64 posts! lol jk jk
Any who here is the next piece
After many days, Cimmorene learned new Arumbanus. They are:
Arumbanu Fire-puts fire in palm, and allows Cimmorene to throw it at anyone
Arumbanu Water-same thing as fire
Arumbanu Earth-picks up pieces of earth from the ground,
and allows Cimmorene to throw it at someone
Though Trouble brews and puts Cimmorenes new found skills to the test,Plastic, on of Walshi's witchs had not retreated
and was turning all food to...you guess....plastic
Aytemu announced to Cimmorene: "I think they're coming back!"
Aytemu sends another spell. "Yupoli Quigi!"
A huge bubble comes out of his hands, and floats over to the men.
Some of them get trapped, but others avoid it.
Cimmorene then shouted "Arumbanu Earth!" and made a wall around Plastic,
trapping her there for now.
Plastic made plastic points hurling them at the wall and escaped
Cimmorene kept throwing the walls at Plastic, until Plastic was too tired and fell down, exhausted
Aytemu casted a non-plastic spell. "Non-plasticah Normalah!"
It turns all plasticized items back to normal, and then reverses the spell on Plastic,
turning Plastic into plastic.
Before Aytemu had casted his spell:
Panting plastic sighnaled the wizard warriors to come and help her "medical emergency!"
But before the warriors could come, Aytemu turned them into plastic,
then turned Plastic into plastic, but this time, Aytemu succeeded.
Aytemu then got really dizzy, and fell over.
He realized that he had cast too many spells in a short period of time.
this caused all the spells to reverse, and plastic, ran back to the wizard village.
Aytemu then signaled for the rest of his team to go on. "I'll wait here. I'm too tired to go on."
After the battle Cimmorene then went to go see Terry and Will to see how they were doing on their training
Wearly Plastic walked up to Aytemu, shewas tired of being beaten,
and made Aytembu go in complete confusion and forget who he was with one cursed spell
Cimmorene, returning from her visit with will and Terry, went over to Aytemu.
"Are you ok?" she asked.
Later that night a lightning bolt hit plastic
The lightning bolt also hit a tree, and started a fire that raged thoughout the wizard village.
Jeral watched the scene from a nearby bar.
A wizard stop the fire, but Plastic stumbles off to dragon village, strangely good...
Cimmorene saw Plastic coming, and allerted Kazul and Kotir
Jeral then stood up and wlked out of the bar towards Plastic,
when he came near to the unsuspecting witch he impaled her with his sword.
Walliashi appeared with a travel spell
"Who are you? Did I hire you?
Jeral answered " No. I am super secret samurai warrior."
Kazul flew in "Hello traveler. You look strong.
Will you join us in our journey to defeat the evil wizards?"
Jeral takes a momentary pause, and then said
" Yes"
Kazul smiled. "Thank you traveler. Shall I introduce you to the other warriors?"
"No. I shall name them as followed:Warrior A,Warrior B,Butler C,Warrior D,Warrior E,Butler F" Jeral said cooly looking at the group
"OH REALY? Okay, then. Bye." Walliashi said waving as she disappeared
"Ook..." said Kazul. "Take them to the cave over there to the right.
I'll see you tommorrow, you get some rest now, ok?"
After everyone had left and Cimmorene was setting on a rock next to the stream that ran by the cave.
Cimmorene looked over when she heard a peculiar noise, and there stood Walliashi.
Cimmorence was frightened. She to run to tell Kazul and Kotir before Walliashi started to attack.
But before she could run and tell Kazul and Kotir, Wallaishi pulled out her wand,
and made Cimmorene trip.
Cimmorene thought fast, and then she yelled, "KAZUL! KOTIR!", hoping they would come.
Even though he didnt know it, Kazul had a different son. His name was Trogdor.
He walked like a lizard, but looked like a dragon.
He found Jeral and the others out side of the cave looking over at Cimmorene and Walliashi
Trogdor then decided to help them defeat the wizard.
Trogdor lloked over at Jeral and said" Hello Jeral. I would like to help you
and these warriors on your quest.
I will help you by getting info on the wizard.
I can camouflage myself, so he will neer see me.
What do you say? All you need to do in return is feed me."
Walliashi seeing the odds stacked against her flees from the scene,
carrying only her wand.
When he was far away from the cave ,Jeral turned to face Trogdor.
"So you would rather serve me, rather than these children. Very well, apprentice" said Jeral, he looked over in the direction Walliashi had fleed
"Poor Walliashi, never understanding what defeat actually means"
yeah i skipped the whole thing with Walmart and Akabob22
didnt really have any thing to do with the RPG
That's ok with you skipping that part, it wasn't even needed. D:
Anyways, good job with the book so far!
Ollie
27 April 2008, 03:39 PM
That's ok with you skipping that part, it wasn't even needed. D:
Anyways, good job with the book so far!
thank you, really its kinda fun. almost like reading a book, but having to make sense with senseless lines and random moments. i'll have more later:)
EDIT: sorry it took so long! but here ya go the next part of the story
Cimmorene, who had gotten up from her fall,
ran to tell Kotir and Kazul about the scene,
and also see how Will and Terry were doing with their training.
mean-while plastic wannabes started attacking the village
Cimmorene called out "Arumbanu Fire!", and took out all the Plastic wannabes.
Trogdor looked at Cimmorene
" Isn't there only one?" he asked confused
"No, there's alot more wannabes coming up.
Hurry up and get a weapon, and meet me back here." she said as she ran into battle
Trogdor blew a little flame
"Don't worry. Fire's good enough right? Plastic melts." he said winking
"Good enough for me. Now get ready, here they come!" Cimmorene said getting in a fighters stance
Cimmorene calls out 'Arumbanu Shadow!',
which makes her disappear,
and she starts swinging her sword wildly through the crowd of Plastics.
Trogdor switched between camouflaging himself and hiding up in a tree, and flying,
while breathing fire to melt the plastics.
"Take that plastics! Ha ha! When they melt, others slip and fall on them!" he shouted
Then Kotir flew over all the Plastics and breathed fire on them,
melting about 10 of them below him.*
Plastic was tired of being beat stopped the wannabes
and asked to help with the training.
As the wannabes retreated,
Cimmorene went back to check on Will and Terry with their training.
Trogdor looks up and smile a big toothy grin.
"Well, that helped a lot. Thanks Kotir!" he said to the bigger dragon
Meanwhile plastic was in the wizard court changing her name to Kily Jep.
Trogdor went back with Cimmorene to check on the others.
Cimmorne reached her friends adn said" Hey guys, is your training going well?"
"Yea, look what I can do! Arumbanu water!" Terry answered
Terry filled up a nearby pool with water with his spell
"What about you, Will?" she said turning to him
Will smiled and answered "Great. Anymore news on Plastic and Walliashi?"
"No news from Wallishi, but Plastics have been starting to attack." Cimmorene answered
Cimmorene took a telescope and
went to watch over the wizards training from the tower in the dragon's village
to see if anything looked suspicious, so then they would be ready.
Mean while Walliashi changed her features, hid her wand, and snuck into the Dragon Village.
Cimmorene walked by the hidden Walliashi.
She stared back, but saw nothing suspicious.
She kept walking, which was a huge mistake.
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