Write your own Song Contest.

[jujubeeruler]

Hello, I've decided it's about time we have a song writing contest around here... so here is the info.

Theme: None.
Limitations: None.
Obscenities: "Hell" is allowed. Nothing Worse.
Judges: I will make a poll voting is public so no voting for yourself.


FIRST
100 Rank Points. Prize TBA.

SECOND
50 Rank Points.

THIRD
10 Rank Points.

Entrants (10 Maximum)
-Harods
-RedneckSlayer24
-Poetic
-REVENGE
-basketcase1
-leader706
-Tnt
-Mustachio
-John-h


I have only 10 entry spots so keep that in mind.

Have Fun!

--Juju:D


WARNING: WORK MUST BE ORIGINAL!!!

[Poetic]

We probably shouldn't have the points like that. It screws the whole ranking system up. Let's stick to 100 for first, 50 for second, and 10 for third. The only reason for that is that we want all the contests to be equal. The race is to 250 points (see below quote), so 200 for first is a bit too much.

Some of you may have noticed the change in the Hall of Fame! We now have Ranks!
First gets 100 Rank Points. Second gets 50, and Third gets 10.
The first person to 250 points will win a SPESHAL prize!

:D

And I'll be entering. I have a song/poem already written up, so I'll post it soon.

[jujubeeruler]

K I'll fix that right now. Thank You.

[Poetic]

K I'll fix that right now. Thank You.

Welcome. I added this to the Hall of Fame as a current contest.

Thanks for making it.

:D

[REVENGE]

Hm. I've always had problems writing songs. Perhaps I'll be able to force myself into making one for this contest. :] I've got an idea in mind... hm...

When's the deadline?

[Kittens & Cats]

Here goes,

La,
la la la
la la la
la la
la la
What's wrong with the world mama?
La la lala
la la la la lala.

That's all I have for now. :rolleyes:

[Harods]

You should have told me
Im seeing the glimpse in your heart
I see you go by, nothing too shyyy
I know you have something for me deep inside your hearrt
I wink at you, I wink at yooou
Then you wink back so coool

Now I dont see the glimpse in your heart
Im shattered, you should have told me that you were with another man.

You should have told mee.

Im not seeing the glimpse in your heart
I see you go by, ignore me try...

I know you have something for me deep inside your hearrt.

[jujubeeruler]

The deadline is April 14th.

[Dancing Flame]

Here goes,



That's all I have for now. :rolleyes:

What's wrong with the world, mama
People livin' like they ain't got no mamas
I think the whole world addicted to the drama
Only attracted to things that'll bring you trauma
Overseas, yeah, we try to stop terrorism
But we still got terrorists here livin'
In the USA, the big CIA
The Bloods and The Crips and the KKK
But if you only have love for your own race
Then you only leave space to discriminate
And to discriminate only generates hate
And when you hate then you're bound to get irate, yeah
Madness is what you demonstrate
And that's exactly how anger works and operates
Man, you gotta have love just to set it straight
Take control of your mind and meditate
Let your soul gravitate to the love, y'all, y'all

People killin', people dyin'
Children hurt and you hear them cryin'
Can you practice what you preach
And would you turn the other cheek

Father, Father, Father help us
Send some guidance from above
'Cause people got me, got me questionin'
Where is the love (Love)

Where is the love (The love)
Where is the love (The love)
Where is the love
The love, the love

It just ain't the same, always unchanged
New days are strange, is the world insane
If love and peace is so strong
Why are there pieces of love that don't belong
Nations droppin' bombs
Chemical gasses fillin' lungs of little ones
With ongoin' sufferin' as the youth die young
So ask yourself is the lovin' really gone
So I could ask myself really what is goin' wrong
In this world that we livin' in people keep on givin'
in
Makin' wrong decisions, only visions of them dividends
Not respectin' each other, deny thy brother
A war is goin' on but the reason's undercover
The truth is kept secret, it's swept under the rug
If you never know truth then you never know love
Where's the love, y'all, come on (I don't know)
Where's the truth, y'all, come on (I don't know)
Where's the love, y'all

People killin', people dyin'
Children hurt and you hear them cryin'
Can you practice what you preach
And would you turn the other cheek

Father, Father, Father help us
Send some guidance from above
'Cause people got me, got me questionin'
Where is the love (Love)

Where is the love (The love)
Where is the love (The love)
Where is the love (The love)
Where is the love (The love)
Where is the love, the love, the love?

I feel the weight of the world on my shoulder
As I'm gettin' older, y'all, people gets colder
Most of us only care about money makin'
Selfishness got us followin' our wrong direction
Wrong information always shown by the media
Negative images is the main criteria
Infecting the young minds faster than bacteria
Kids wanna act like what they see in the cinema
Yo', whatever happened to the values of humanity
Whatever happened to the fairness in equality
Instead of spreading love we're spreading animosity
Lack of understanding, leading lives away from unity
That's the reason why sometimes I'm feelin' under
That's the reason why sometimes I'm feelin' down
There's no wonder why sometimes I'm feelin' under
Gotta keep my faith alive till love is found
Now ask yourself

Where is the love?
Where is the love?
Where is the love?
Where is the love?

Father, Father, Father help us
Send some guidance from above
'Cause people got me, got me questionin'
Where is the love?

Sing wit me y'all:
One world, one world (We only got)
One world, one world (That's all we got)
One world, one world
And something's wrong wit it (Yeah)
Something's wrong wit it (Yeah)
Something's wrong wit the wo-wo-world, yeah
We only got
(One world, one world)
That's all we got
(One world, one world)


I'm sorry but it just sounds like that song. GL with all the contestants.

[jujubeeruler]

Dancing Flame that song is called Where is The Love? by the Black Eyed Peas.:|
That work is unoriginal that is against the rules...
Either write your own ORIGINAL song or don't enter at all.

[REVENGE]

-Nervousness- Here goes nothin'. :[ (I'm terrible at writing songs...)

Black Yesterday

Into the black pools of yesterday
Forward we fall
Our limbs ripped away
By clinging memories of fate
Turn around
Take my hand
Burn what's left
Of fate
Of sin
Of black yesterday

Take the pleading
Raging, screaming
Take the tears of black
Black yesterday
Memories shall hold me back
Of black
Black yesterday

Into the black pools of your eyes
Backward we fall
Our souls ripped away
By clinging memories of pain
Run away
Just let go
Burn what's left
Of fate
Of sin
Of black yesterday


(Chorus)

Don't you realize what you're doing?
Screaming, raging
Doing to me?
Don't you understand your duty?
Pleading, crying
Duty to me?

Into black pools of memories
Into black pools of pain
Into black pools of duty
Into black pools of rain


(Chorus)

Into the black pools of future
What shall it hold for me?
Into the promise of tomorrow
Hold me tightly while it fades
Please take away the memories
Of black, of black
Of black yesterday.



Note: Chorus(es) in red. Really hope it wasn't too awful. :[

[jujubeeruler]

:O Thats actually very good!
You've got talent REVENGE.:)
Good luck!

[TnT]

Dancing Flame that song is called Where is The Love? by the Black Eyed Peas.:|
That work is unoriginal that is against the rules...
Either write your own ORIGINAL song or don't enter at all.

He was posting that to the other persons post and said their "song" was like that Black Eyed Peas song. ;)
He wasn't trying to enter it.

[jujubeeruler]

Oh, ok. I didn't realize that.

[Mustachio]

I'll take on this competition if there is room.

Can't Take This Anymore

We're all just waitin' around,
For you to be found.
Nothing will be alright,
Unless you come here tonight... (Echo: Night, night, night, night...)
--------

Refrain
I can't take this anymore!
They're all crying on the floor!
You need to come back,
Or momma's gunna go wack!

I can't take this anymore!
They're all crying on the floor!
You need to come back,
Or momma's gunna go wack!

---------
It seems like its been forever,
Since you walked out in that stormy weather.
They all miss you...
And even me too...
--------

[To Refrain]

--------
It seems like its been forever,
Forever,
And ever...

[Kittens & Cats]

What's wrong with the world, mama
People livin' like they ain't got no mamas
I think the whole world addicted to the drama
Only attracted to things that'll bring you trauma
Overseas, yeah, we try to stop terrorism
But we still got terrorists here livin'
In the USA, the big CIA
The Bloods and The Crips and the KKK
But if you only have love for your own race
Then you only leave space to discriminate
And to discriminate only generates hate
And when you hate then you're bound to get irate, yeah
Madness is what you demonstrate
And that's exactly how anger works and operates
Man, you gotta have love just to set it straight
Take control of your mind and meditate
Let your soul gravitate to the love, y'all, y'all

People killin', people dyin'
Children hurt and you hear them cryin'
Can you practice what you preach
And would you turn the other cheek

Father, Father, Father help us
Send some guidance from above
'Cause people got me, got me questionin'
Where is the love (Love)

Where is the love (The love)
Where is the love (The love)
Where is the love
The love, the love

It just ain't the same, always unchanged
New days are strange, is the world insane
If love and peace is so strong
Why are there pieces of love that don't belong
Nations droppin' bombs
Chemical gasses fillin' lungs of little ones
With ongoin' sufferin' as the youth die young
So ask yourself is the lovin' really gone
So I could ask myself really what is goin' wrong
In this world that we livin' in people keep on givin'
in
Makin' wrong decisions, only visions of them dividends
Not respectin' each other, deny thy brother
A war is goin' on but the reason's undercover
The truth is kept secret, it's swept under the rug
If you never know truth then you never know love
Where's the love, y'all, come on (I don't know)
Where's the truth, y'all, come on (I don't know)
Where's the love, y'all

People killin', people dyin'
Children hurt and you hear them cryin'
Can you practice what you preach
And would you turn the other cheek

Father, Father, Father help us
Send some guidance from above
'Cause people got me, got me questionin'
Where is the love (Love)

Where is the love (The love)
Where is the love (The love)
Where is the love (The love)
Where is the love (The love)
Where is the love, the love, the love?

I feel the weight of the world on my shoulder
As I'm gettin' older, y'all, people gets colder
Most of us only care about money makin'
Selfishness got us followin' our wrong direction
Wrong information always shown by the media
Negative images is the main criteria
Infecting the young minds faster than bacteria
Kids wanna act like what they see in the cinema
Yo', whatever happened to the values of humanity
Whatever happened to the fairness in equality
Instead of spreading love we're spreading animosity
Lack of understanding, leading lives away from unity
That's the reason why sometimes I'm feelin' under
That's the reason why sometimes I'm feelin' down
There's no wonder why sometimes I'm feelin' under
Gotta keep my faith alive till love is found
Now ask yourself

Where is the love?
Where is the love?
Where is the love?
Where is the love?

Father, Father, Father help us
Send some guidance from above
'Cause people got me, got me questionin'
Where is the love?

Sing wit me y'all:
One world, one world (We only got)
One world, one world (That's all we got)
One world, one world
And something's wrong wit it (Yeah)
Something's wrong wit it (Yeah)
Something's wrong wit the wo-wo-world, yeah
We only got
(One world, one world)
That's all we got
(One world, one world)


I'm sorry but it just sounds like that song. GL with all the contestants.
Hey, you stole my song! Yes, that was the song I was making fun of, but I really kinda like it.
Dancing Flame that song is called Where is The Love? by the Black Eyed Peas.:|
That work is unoriginal that is against the rules...
Either write your own ORIGINAL song or don't enter at all.
You think they would really enter that song? We don't have many idiots on this forum, and that person isn't one of 'em.

[Dominati0n]

I'll enter this, when's the deadline?

[RedneckSlayer42]

Mine is a comedy song. It probably wont win. Its called Happy the Toaster.

Happy the Toaster

Happy the Toaster

Hes friends with your coaster

Happy the Toaster

He has his own poster

Happy the Toaster

Never says thanks or please

Always gonna steal your cheese

He likes to kill bread

Bakes 'em till their dead

Thats how he makes toast

He scared a spooky ghost.

He always has a smile

He leaves you in denial

He likes to eat poop

He hit you with a scoop

He likes snacks by Nabisco

He knows how to disco

Hes Happy the Toaster

[John-h]

Here is the one I made for Chris Pirillo


Surfing Geek - Parody by John-h

You can type, you can surf, in the internet wooooorld
see that site, watch that mac, dig in the surfing geek.

friday night and the net is slow
looking out for the place to surf
where the play the pc, getting in the mac
you come in to look for a zune
anybody could be a mac
mac is young and pcs old
with a bit of megabytes, everything is fine
you're a mood in tweaks
and when you get the card

you are the surfing geek, young and rich, only 31
surfing geek feel the byte from the mp3
you can type, you can surf, in the internet wooooorld
see that site, watch that mac, dig in the surfing geek

you're a mac, turn them on
leave the pc, and the you're gone
looking our for another anyone will not
you're in the mood for a byte
and you get the byte...


you are the surfing geek, young and rich, only 31
surfing geek feel the byte from the mp3
you can type, you can surf, in the internet wooooorld
see that site, watch that mac, dig in the surfing geek

The tune is like Dancing queen ;)

[jujubeeruler]

:)The deadline is april 14th.

[TnT]

Can I still enter?
I know I'm a day late, but it don't look like its ready to start yet.


It has a blessthefall feel to it.
* - Screamed
*/ - High Pitch Scream
\*/ - Low Pitch Scream
_5_ - Hold note for five seconds
Chorus in red
& - Guitar Solo Here :D(It would be a short one, 30 seconds or so).

The Time has come
to see what were
and what you have become

Did you really want to be like this?
Do_2 You_2 Even_2 Know_2 Why_2?

*You are what you said you’d never be
\*/Why?_7

&

Did you really want to be like this?
Do_2 You_2 Even_2 Know_2 Why_2?

*I hate what you are.
*Goodbye

[Poetic]

Oopsies. I forgot about this. XP

I dug this up. (Most spelling errors are intentional)

PWEASE LET ME IN! I FORGOT THE DEADLINE. ):

Alex


fragility

passivity

in glasses

Mista Alex

steppin on up

fronta classes

-

voice aliftin

seeds afflictin

alla the while

Mista Alex

uncontacted

prayin to Satin

to God an Allah

spare their lives

appease the maw

-

from then to now

Mista Alex

in glasses

fronta classes

preachin to the masses

nightly he crashes

a fevered sleep

peppered in dashes—

of Mista Alex

in fronta the classes

[leader706]

" i got burgled (pwned) "

im lying, in bed, im feeling really dread
(really dreeeeaaad)
the sound, i hear, is full of lots of fear
Im awake, i shake, the sounds are all around
I think, is it really a what i think it is?

it might just be my cat
( thats what you think it is! )
it might be the people in the up-er flat!
( probably )
but no matter what it is...
IT FREAKS ME OUT!

* instrumental *

im feeling quite really scared ...
more than when i was in TROGDORS LAIRRR!
i wonder whats behind that door?
or it might be from under the floor!
(yeah)

it might just be my cat
( thats what you think it is! )
it might be the people in the up-er flat!
( probably )
but no matter what it is...
IT FREAKS ME OUT!

[jujubeeruler]

Yeah you guys can enter I'm
lengthning
the deadline to sunday.

[TnT]

Can I change mine to this?

It has a blessthefall feel to it.
* - Screamed
*/ - High Pitch Scream
\*/ - Low Pitch Scream
_5_ - Hold note for five seconds
Chorus in red
& - Guitar Solo Here

"A Beautiful Tragedy"

You are everything to me

I'm sorry for all the things I did to you
_5 and what I didn't do at_3 all

*All I really wanted
Was already in front of me
Blinded by your beauty
Invisible to these eyes*

*You are all I ever needed
I'm sorry we had to say _2 goodbye_6*

*All I really wanted
Was already in front of me
Blinded by your beauty
Invisible to these eyes*

I loved you..

[Basketcase1]

I'm Sorry...

Why didn't I let you go?
In my heart I did not know!
I'm sorry for the pain I caused you,
I'm sorry but there was nothing I could do...(Hold on for 5 beats)

What did I do to deserve this?
What was I supposed to say "Ooh, I'm sorry Miss!"?? (Say slightly sarsatically)
I didn't say those things to you,
There was nothing much that I could do!

Hey look at me! I crushed your dreams,
You crushed mine too, so it seems,
I can't live this way anymore,
Each time I come round, you just close the door.

Chorus

Hey look at this!
You had your first kiss,
With some guy I never knew,
I'm only another boy to you...

Chorus

I give up now, I've had enough,
I'm sick of acting all tough,
Good bye 'cos I'm not comin' back anytime,
This was the last thing on my mind!

Chorus

As I run quickly out of air,
I grab a golden lock of your hair,
I pull you under with me,
And I am the last person you see.

Chorus

I climb out quick as I can,
I am no longer a tough man,
I'm a man who's not afraid to cry,
I killed another in my quest to die.

Chorus

Every night I tell you again and again,
Even if it causes me much pain,
I caused you much more,
The window to your heart is closed and so is the door...(Hold on for 3 beats)

Chorus

I'll give myself the same fate,
Was this all planned from our first date?
My eyes close and I remember you,
And everything we used to (Whisper the next part and hold it on for 3 beats) do...

Uhhh...Yeah...I just made that up there. It's bad, I know. (I'm actually a girl, but I thought it was a different idea to do a boy instead)

[leader706]

I'm Sorry...

Why didn't I let you go?
In my heart I did not know!
I'm sorry for the pain I caused you,
I'm sorry but there was nothing I could do...(Hold on for 5 beats)

What did I do to deserve this?
What was I supposed to say "Ooh, I'm sorry Miss!"?? (Say slightly sarsatically)
I didn't say those things to you,
There was nothing much that I could do!

Hey look at me! I crushed your dreams,
You crushed mine too, so it seems,
I can't live this way anymore,
Each time I come round, you just close the door.

Chorus

Hey look at this!
You had your first kiss,
With some guy I never knew,
I'm only another boy to you...

Chorus

I give up now, I've had enough,
I'm sick of acting all tough,
Good bye 'cos I'm not comin' back anytime,
This was the last thing on my mind!

Chorus

As I run quickly out of air,
I grab a golden lock of your hair,
I pull you under with me,
And I am the last person you see.

Chorus

I climb out quick as I can,
I am no longer a tough man,
I'm a man who's not afraid to cry,
I killed another in my quest to die.

Chorus

Every night I tell you again and again,
Even if it causes me much pain,
I caused you much more,
The window to your heart is closed and so is the door...(Hold on for 3 beats)

Chorus

I'll give myself the same fate,
Was this all planned from our first date?
My eyes close and I remember you,
And everything we used to (Whisper the next part and hold it on for 3 beats) do...

Uhhh...Yeah...I just made that up there. It's bad, I know. (I'm actually a girl, but I thought it was a different idea to do a boy instead)

that.. is... AWSOME!!! better than mine

[Basketcase1]

Thanks I suppose. :) It was hard to think it all up in five minutes, but I got there. =P