View Full Version : Kleo Karter and the Collector's Key - Part I
Mustachio
28 March 2008, 11:10 PM
Kleo Karter and the Collector's Key - Part I
A Role-Playing Story
Based on the series created in Mustachio's head
Info
During the 15th century, a young boy named Kleo Karter lives in the kingdom of Hiyark. Kleo's famous father, Kevin Karter, was King Yerlin's (the king of Hiyark) highest knight. He faced the evil sorceror known as "Mastura" and his army of shadow-beasts called the "Eclipsed". Kevin was tortured and then murdered by Mastura's magic. Mastura took a key from Karter known as the "Collector's Key" that was used to unlock the door to the Underworld. When opened, Mastura would enter the Underworld and take the Ruby Staff, giving him the power to kill thousands in minutes. But Kevin only had half the key. The other half, he left with his son, Kleo. Now, Kleo must train as a knight and continue his father's task to eliminate Mastura. With the help of his friends, Emma and Jimmy, he will travel to "Moonlight", the kingdom of the Eclipsed. Can he stop Mastura and save Hiyark?
Characters
I'm going to play a few. The main characters that I need to control their actions.
Kleo Karter - Mustachio
Emma Patters -
Jimmy Barling - Robo
King Yerlin - Mustachio
Trainer Kerner -
Mastura - Mustachio
Grammy Karter - Mustachio
Sir Tarin - Ollie
(More characters will be added in future parts or if needed now. If you want to add someone yourself, ask me first before you post as that person.)
Rules
-NO Killing (Except for the Eclipsed)-
-Don't be silly during serious parts-
-This part will be Kleo's training. The next part will be when he heads off to Moonlight. So keep everything in Hiyark-
Additional Info
-Kleo and Emma like eachother, but are shy about it-
-Types of Eclipsed:
Shredder - A large wolf with sharp fangs.
Shang - A scorpion with a poisonous venom, turning the infected into Eclipsed. People can only be cured by "Porph", a green liquid medicine.
Tempar - A dark, black and grey dragon with a flaming breath. Mastura's dragon, "Kenton", has steel armor on its skin.
Dementi - A figure in a black hooded jacket with long, pale fingers. If touched by a Dementi, you become pale and die in hours. There is no cure.
-Kleo has a dog, "Buddy", who helps on the way-
I will start once somebody joins as Emma or Jimmy.
-Mustachio-
Ollie
28 March 2008, 11:26 PM
Can i make a charactor? his name would be Tarin,a knight of Hiyak, he wouldnt have any powers,just his know how and his wits
drew618
28 March 2008, 11:46 PM
Can i use My character Makin Takasuma? Can he use his fire powers? Look at my profile for more details.....
Mustachio
29 March 2008, 02:43 AM
Can i make a charactor? his name would be Tarin,a knight of Hiyak, he wouldnt have any powers,just his know how and his wits
Alright.
Can i use My character Makin Takasuma? Can he use his fire powers? Look at my profile for more details.....
Well, that wouldn't really fit in with this story.
Ollie
29 March 2008, 02:54 AM
Alright.
Well, that wouldn't really fit in with this story.
k cool!:D Do we really have to wait till emma and jimmy are filled?
Mustachio
29 March 2008, 03:10 AM
We can just start.
-----------
*Kleo gets out of bed and walks downstairs. His grandmother waits for him.*
Kleo: Hey grammy.
Grammy: Good morning, Kleo.
Kleo: Something wrong?
Grammy: Well, the Hiyark training camp sent me a letter informing me that you'll be escorted today to train to become a knight...
Kleo: A knight?! Sweet!
Grammy: Are you sure you want to get all excited about this?
Kleo: I've always wanted to be a knight, grammy. Like my dad.
Grammy: Yes, but it takes a lot of responsibility...
Kleo: I'll be fine, grammy. Mom and Dad would want me to.
Grammy: If only your parents could of been here today...
Kleo: So when are they comin'?
Grammy: Well, a Sir Tarin is supposed to come and escort you. I don't know when.
Ollie
29 March 2008, 03:16 AM
We can just start.
-----------
*Kleo gets out of bed and walks downstairs. His grandmother waits for him.*
Kleo: Hey grammy.
Grammy: Good morning, Kleo.
Kleo: Something wrong?
Grammy: Well, the Hiyark training camp sent me a letter informing me that you'll be escorted today to train to become a knight...
Kleo: A knight?! Sweet!
Grammy: Are you sure you want to get all excited about this?
Kleo: I've always wanted to be a knight, grammy. Like my dad.
Grammy: Yes, but it takes a lot of responsibility...
Kleo: I'll be fine, grammy. Mom and Dad would want me to.
Grammy: If only your parents could of been here today...
Kleo: So when are they comin'?
Grammy: Well, a Sir Tarin is supposed to come and escort you. I don't know when.
A knock is heard on the door, it opens revaling a tall man wearing a dark green cloak
"are you ready boy?" he asked in a booming voice
Robo
29 March 2008, 03:21 AM
Could I possibly be Jimmy Barling?
Mustachio
29 March 2008, 03:38 AM
A knock is heard on the door, it opens revaling a tall man wearing a dark green cloak
"are you ready boy?" he asked in a booming voice
*Kleo looks at Grammy and smiles.*
Kleo: I'm ready.
Could I possibly be Jimmy Barling?
Yes.
Ollie
29 March 2008, 04:10 AM
*Kleo looks at Grammy and smiles.*
Kleo: I'm ready.
Yes.
"come on boy!" came a booming command " the knights will not wait!" he turned away and walked of in teh direction of the castle
drew618
29 March 2008, 10:58 AM
((He won't use them then.))
Makin: "Sir Tarin! You're getting the new recruit as I see. Well we better hurry! The armory and the people at the training grounds cannot wait, you see! They have sent me down here to make sure you had gotten him, they were worrying about the time you were taking to bring him back! But i see all is in good hands"
((Also, list him as Makin Takasuma, he is a knight, but still list his full name.))
Mustachio
29 March 2008, 01:59 PM
Alright, you can be Makin.
-------------
*Grammy leans down to Kleo.*
Grammy: Good luck, Kleo...
Kleo: Thanks, grammy.
*Kleo grabs a bag and walks up to the knights*
Kleo: Let's go.
Ollie
29 March 2008, 04:50 PM
Alright, you can be Makin.
-------------
*Grammy leans down to Kleo.*
Grammy: Good luck, Kleo...
Kleo: Thanks, grammy.
*Kleo grabs a bag and walks up to the knights*
Kleo: Let's go.
"lets go boy!"
Makin: "Sir Tarin! You're getting the new recruit as I see. Well we better hurry! The armory and the people at the training grounds cannot wait, you see! They have sent me down here to make sure you had gotten him, they were worrying about the time you were taking to bring him back! But i see all is in good hands"
"what i am late on time and they wont let it go?" Tarin said as slowed down for Makin and Kleo yo catch up to him
drew618
30 March 2008, 01:39 PM
"lets go boy!"
"what i am late on time and they wont let it go?" Tarin said as slowed down for Makin and Kleo yo catch up to him
"No, but as you know, the council is very impatient. They will not stand waiting!"
Ollie
30 March 2008, 06:11 PM
"No, but as you know, the council is very impatient. They will not stand waiting!"
Sighs"Come on boy!" he shouts as he continues to walk with Makin towards the castle
Mustachio
31 March 2008, 07:35 PM
*Kleo walks out the door and hops onto a horse with the other knights on his sides on horses. Kleo looks at his grammy standing in the doorway and waves goodbye. His grammy waves back.*
Ollie
31 March 2008, 10:14 PM
*Kleo walks out the door and hops onto a horse with the other knights on his sides on horses. Kleo looks at his grammy standing in the doorway and waves goodbye. His grammy waves back.*
Sir Tarin started walking away, leading the horse on wards "now, are you ready for training boy?" He asked looking him in the eye "its not as easy as the posters say"
Mustachio
31 March 2008, 10:45 PM
Kleo: Yeah, I'm ready. I'll be as good as my father. Did you know him, sir?
drew618
31 March 2008, 10:49 PM
Kleo: Yeah, I'm ready. I'll be as good as my father. Did you know him, sir?
"Father!? Wait! You're the son of Kevin Karter!? So that's why the council was so imaptient!"
Mustachio
31 March 2008, 10:51 PM
Kleo: Yeah, he's my father. Did you know him?
drew618
31 March 2008, 10:54 PM
Kleo: Yeah, he's my father. Did you know him?
"Yes, I did. He was leading the recruitment seminar. Not many of us got honors and the chance to meet him. They don't do the seminar anymore, the council decided that they needed the knights trained faster."
Mustachio
31 March 2008, 11:05 PM
Kleo: Why do they need them faster?
drew618
31 March 2008, 11:09 PM
"I could never figure that one out. There wasn't a war or anything. i guess they just wanted to be more stocked up."
Ollie
31 March 2008, 11:16 PM
"I could never figure that one out. There wasn't a war or anything. i guess they just wanted to be more stocked up."
"oh no war you say?" Tarin muttered" and then where are all the knights going?" he looked around at the emty road "i tell you lads this there be a war going on and we are not to know about it"
Mustachio
31 March 2008, 11:47 PM
Kleo: I thought we weren't sending anyone to fight against the Eclipsed.
Ollie
31 March 2008, 11:49 PM
Kleo: I thought we weren't sending anyone to fight against the Eclipsed.
"what they say and what they do are two differnt things lad" Tarin said lowering his voice even more "you must never forget that"
Mustachio
31 March 2008, 11:56 PM
*Kleo nods and stares into the distance, seeing the kingdom and grey clouds begin to cover it.*
Ollie
01 April 2008, 12:08 AM
*Kleo nods and stares into the distance, seeing the kingdom and grey clouds begin to cover it.*
They spend teh rest of the day on the road,when they arrive at the castle it is twilight
"well we'll stay at the High Horse inn and then get a fresh start in the moring" Tarin said pointing at a inn a few feet away "any objections?"
Mustachio
01 April 2008, 12:35 AM
*Kleo smiles.*
Kleo: Sounds good to me.
Ollie
01 April 2008, 11:03 AM
*Kleo smiles.*
Kleo: Sounds good to me.
"aright then!" Tarin said smiling "nd i guess i will have to pick up the tab eh?"
Mustachio
05 April 2008, 07:45 PM
*Kleo laughs*
KLeo: Well, I have no gold.
Ollie
06 April 2008, 08:51 PM
*Kleo laughs*
KLeo: Well, I have no gold.
Tarin laughed with him "i like this boy, makin!" they trio went inside
Mustachio
06 April 2008, 10:21 PM
*Kleo sat down at a table and pulled out an apple from his bag*
drew618
06 April 2008, 10:24 PM
"So, what do you guys want. We need to eat quick so I suggest a small meal."
Ollie
07 April 2008, 12:04 AM
"So, what do you guys want. We need to eat quick so I suggest a small meal."
"in a hurry to get to bed Makin?" Tarin said as he signaled th beer maid "three ales here for my friends" he said when she came over "and also what ever you got to eat"
Mustachio
08 April 2008, 02:34 AM
*The maid nodded and walked to the bar.*
Kleo: So are you a high knight?
Robo
08 April 2008, 03:12 AM
"Hey Kleo!" Jimmy said. "Oops am I interrupting something?"
----------------------------------------------
I've been trying to get into the picture since the last four pages.
Ollie
08 April 2008, 10:39 AM
*The maid nodded and walked to the bar.*
Kleo: So are you a high knight?
"me or Makin here?" Tarin asked "Makins the high one im just a low recruiter"
"Hey Kleo!" Jimmy said. "Oops am I interrupting something?"
----------------------------------------------
I've been trying to get into the picture since the last four pages.
"this a friend lad?" Tarin asked turning towards jimmy "come sit and eat with us!"
Mustachio
09 April 2008, 11:57 PM
Kleo: Jimmy?! How'd you get here?
Ollie
10 April 2008, 12:08 AM
Kleo: Jimmy?! How'd you get here?
just to sped up time im going to skip to the next day,K?
__________________________________________________ __
The next morning Tarin,Kleo,Makin,and Jimmy stood outside the inn
"lets be going" Tarin said as he started towards the castle agian
Mustachio
10 April 2008, 12:38 AM
Kleo: Alright. See you Jimmy.
Ollie
10 April 2008, 12:41 AM
Kleo: Alright. See you Jimmy.
Tarin,Makin,and Kleo go off in the opposite direction then Jimmy
Soon they arived at the Castle
"see you later Makin" Tarin said as he lead Kleo to the training ground "now over there is your mess hall and over there is the sleeping bunks and over there is where you will train, any questions?" he said with a smile
Mustachio
10 April 2008, 12:43 AM
Kleo: One. Will I ever see you again?
Ollie
10 April 2008, 12:51 AM
Kleo: One. Will I ever see you again?
"yes i hope you will" Tarin said laughing "as you know ever newbie gets a knight to teach them one on one, im your teacher Kleo"
Mustachio
10 April 2008, 12:51 AM
*Kleo laughed*
Kleo: Awesome.
Ollie
10 April 2008, 12:53 AM
*Kleo laughed*
Kleo: Awesome.
"now get to the training ground boy!" Tarin said pushing Kleo in the direction "or you'll miss the opening introduction!"
Mustachio
10 April 2008, 01:55 AM
Kleo: Right.
*He waved to Tarin as he ran.*
Ollie
10 April 2008, 01:58 AM
Kleo: Right.
*He waved to Tarin as he ran.*
Tarin waved back as he went to the mess hall,where the instructors where getting their own introduction
pappadi
10 April 2008, 09:10 PM
Can I be Riku, the knight of all knights, who comes 1,000 miles just to see Kleo?
drew618
10 April 2008, 10:03 PM
As Tarin didn't know, Makin was there too. At the introduction.
"Didn't think I'd miss this did ya Tarin? I'm going to start knight instructing soon. let's see who i get....."
Ollie
10 April 2008, 10:04 PM
As Tarin didn't know, Makin was there too. At the introduction.
"Didn't think I'd miss this did ya Tarin? I'm going to start knight instructing soon. let's see who i get....."
"good to know" tarin said sitting next to his friend "i got that Kleo kid, not half bad if you ask me. He may one day be a high knight"
vBulletin® v3.6.8, Copyright ©2000-2009, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.