Tommader
22 March 2008, 01:20 PM
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Chapter One
It Was Just Another Ordinary Day! Go To School. Go To School. Go To School. But Today Was the Saddest day Of My Life! My Dad Had died.
It Happened Last night at 8:50pm. He was driving home from Bristol. When he Crashed With Another car. It Was Bad but I Knew He Was always Safe!
Are You Ok Harvey? Asked Jack.
Er No I replied and ran off.
***
I Got home to Discover Someone Was there Too. hello? I Shouted
Hello Harvey Replied A Man I Dont Know
Who Are You? I Asked
I'm Mr.J Brooks Head Of MI6 Replied Mr Brooks
--- Chapter Two is coming Soon ---
Thanks
Chapter One
It Was Just Another Ordinary Day! Go To School. Go To School. Go To School. But Today Was the Saddest day Of My Life! My Dad Had died.
It Happened Last night at 8:50pm. He was driving home from Bristol. When he Crashed With Another car. It Was Bad but I Knew He Was always Safe!
Are You Ok Harvey? Asked Jack.
Er No I replied and ran off.
***
I Got home to Discover Someone Was there Too. hello? I Shouted
Hello Harvey Replied A Man I Dont Know
Who Are You? I Asked
I'm Mr.J Brooks Head Of MI6 Replied Mr Brooks
--- Chapter Two is coming Soon ---
Thanks