ipodguy555
13 March 2008, 09:37 PM
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Part I of my mini story. It's a good size and when I finish I might make it a youtube series. It's a story inspired by Halo games and books. Please rate 1-10 on poll. It took about 45 minutes. If popular i'll add pictures to help explain what ni mean
ROH: Felg, Exen, Redeemer, Red 4, Drako, Dark, Yeko, Liko
Narrator: On the planet of Kerolo (Kee-Ro-Lo) many innocent lives are being threatened. People are killing each other and themselves. All but one city remains populated. That city is Mosik (Ma-Zic). Within the months all will be killed. A group of Fighters are the only thing standing in deaths way. Only known as the R.O.H (Renewals of Life). The groups captain Captain Exen (X-een) has been captured by a gang called the eighty-fives. The 7 other ROH (Roe) must act quickly before there leader and fellow ROH (Roe) is executed.
The Rectory ROH base
1400 hours May 2, 3040
Felg: What now?
Redeemer: Rest now tomorrow we begin our mission.
Felg: Why not leave now?
Red 4: Oh Felg shut up. Listen to Redeemer.
Felg (Grunts): Fine.
The Rectory ROH Base
200 hours May 3, 3040
Stage Direction: Putting armor on loading weapons.
Redeemer: Hurry up boys unless you want X (Short for Exen) Dead.
Felg: You’re the one takin’ your time man.
Dark Leaning against metal wall in corner already suited up: Felg your not any faster then Redeemer over there.
Felg: Well atleast I don’t have to wake up at midnight.
Drako: Dangit you three give it a rest!
Yeko: Walks in from getting warthogs ready: Well I finished the updates. It’s now a warthog completely armored with bullet prove tinted glass. The MG has a bubble where the gunners head’ll be. Times 4 and Walla! 4 amazing warthogs.
Drako: This thing better have massage chairs. (Serious Voice)
Yeko: Ha, everything but.
Drako laughs.
Redeemer: Well I see your all ready let’s move out.
Far Roads
2.5 hundred hours May 3, 3040
Drako in passenger seat glancing at radar: Unidentified object coming in fast!
Felg captain gunner on MG: Liko (other MG gunner) and I switch to rockets. Red 4 and dark stay machine gun I repeat stay machine gun!
Liko, Red 4, and Dark: Copy that. (Click is heard as Liko switches.)
Stage Directions: Redeemer leads warthogs through metal tunnel and gunners track down the enemy ship on radar. Out of the tunnel all Gunners shoot after locking on.
Felg: Is he hit?
Liko: I have no clue!
Dark: Hmmm
Red 4: Negative on that no damage done.
Redeemer: Keep your eyes open gunners. Wait, nevermind we’re already in the woods.
Shalko Woods
3.1 hundred hours May 3, 3040
Stage Directions: All men exit vehicles weapons in hands since it’s still dark night vision is on.
Redeemer leads group farther through the woods until coming to a Metal building. All ROH are on top of a small cliff covered by grass unseen by the 85 guards.
85 guard 1 (as lights a cigarette): Man this couldn’t get any more boring.
85 guard 2: Atleast we’ll see that idiot executed tomorrow.
85 guard 1: Eh, that’s better than nothin’ I guess man.
Liko and Dark equipped with sniper rifles.
Redeemer: Okay Liko, Dark see those to guards? I want you to take em’ out.
Liko: I got the one on the right
Dark: I got the left.
Liko: Permission granted to open fire?
Redeemer: If your silencers are on give it a go.
Liko: Roger that.
Dark: 3…2…1… death
Stage Directions: All ROH slide down small cliff take bodies and hide them. Use ropes to attach to roof of building and move up.
Redeemer: Wait! Sentry other side of roof. Granted permission open dang fire!
Stage Directions: The sentry falls and the ROH use a ‘slicer’ to cut through the roof and slip inside the building.
Part I of my mini story. It's a good size and when I finish I might make it a youtube series. It's a story inspired by Halo games and books. Please rate 1-10 on poll. It took about 45 minutes. If popular i'll add pictures to help explain what ni mean
ROH: Felg, Exen, Redeemer, Red 4, Drako, Dark, Yeko, Liko
Narrator: On the planet of Kerolo (Kee-Ro-Lo) many innocent lives are being threatened. People are killing each other and themselves. All but one city remains populated. That city is Mosik (Ma-Zic). Within the months all will be killed. A group of Fighters are the only thing standing in deaths way. Only known as the R.O.H (Renewals of Life). The groups captain Captain Exen (X-een) has been captured by a gang called the eighty-fives. The 7 other ROH (Roe) must act quickly before there leader and fellow ROH (Roe) is executed.
The Rectory ROH base
1400 hours May 2, 3040
Felg: What now?
Redeemer: Rest now tomorrow we begin our mission.
Felg: Why not leave now?
Red 4: Oh Felg shut up. Listen to Redeemer.
Felg (Grunts): Fine.
The Rectory ROH Base
200 hours May 3, 3040
Stage Direction: Putting armor on loading weapons.
Redeemer: Hurry up boys unless you want X (Short for Exen) Dead.
Felg: You’re the one takin’ your time man.
Dark Leaning against metal wall in corner already suited up: Felg your not any faster then Redeemer over there.
Felg: Well atleast I don’t have to wake up at midnight.
Drako: Dangit you three give it a rest!
Yeko: Walks in from getting warthogs ready: Well I finished the updates. It’s now a warthog completely armored with bullet prove tinted glass. The MG has a bubble where the gunners head’ll be. Times 4 and Walla! 4 amazing warthogs.
Drako: This thing better have massage chairs. (Serious Voice)
Yeko: Ha, everything but.
Drako laughs.
Redeemer: Well I see your all ready let’s move out.
Far Roads
2.5 hundred hours May 3, 3040
Drako in passenger seat glancing at radar: Unidentified object coming in fast!
Felg captain gunner on MG: Liko (other MG gunner) and I switch to rockets. Red 4 and dark stay machine gun I repeat stay machine gun!
Liko, Red 4, and Dark: Copy that. (Click is heard as Liko switches.)
Stage Directions: Redeemer leads warthogs through metal tunnel and gunners track down the enemy ship on radar. Out of the tunnel all Gunners shoot after locking on.
Felg: Is he hit?
Liko: I have no clue!
Dark: Hmmm
Red 4: Negative on that no damage done.
Redeemer: Keep your eyes open gunners. Wait, nevermind we’re already in the woods.
Shalko Woods
3.1 hundred hours May 3, 3040
Stage Directions: All men exit vehicles weapons in hands since it’s still dark night vision is on.
Redeemer leads group farther through the woods until coming to a Metal building. All ROH are on top of a small cliff covered by grass unseen by the 85 guards.
85 guard 1 (as lights a cigarette): Man this couldn’t get any more boring.
85 guard 2: Atleast we’ll see that idiot executed tomorrow.
85 guard 1: Eh, that’s better than nothin’ I guess man.
Liko and Dark equipped with sniper rifles.
Redeemer: Okay Liko, Dark see those to guards? I want you to take em’ out.
Liko: I got the one on the right
Dark: I got the left.
Liko: Permission granted to open fire?
Redeemer: If your silencers are on give it a go.
Liko: Roger that.
Dark: 3…2…1… death
Stage Directions: All ROH slide down small cliff take bodies and hide them. Use ropes to attach to roof of building and move up.
Redeemer: Wait! Sentry other side of roof. Granted permission open dang fire!
Stage Directions: The sentry falls and the ROH use a ‘slicer’ to cut through the roof and slip inside the building.