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Ziek
27 February 2008, 01:50 AM
Here's a poem I made some time last year. I used to write alot of poetry last year. I will start to write more, when I have time. When reading this, keep in mind that I wrote this a year ago. ;)

Vacate the Violence

A tear shed, one's blood is splattered,
On the battlefield a moan is heard
Violence manifested,
And our hatred is tested

How much genocide can one planet hold?
How can one's heart be so cold?

The horror we are generating,
The brutality we are craving

The kids that envy a disturbing movie,
No more superman, it's the villain they want to be

The video games that demonstrate sin,
Where they always win

There's no game over, they have another live
But that's not reality, and if we want to thrive . . .

We need to shield the children's eyes
The images are reflecting in their eyes

The kids are our fate,
Are we going to recapitulate?

Or are we going to rewind,
And clean out our minds...

It's time for a new, safe inception

Written by: Ziek93

I hope you liked it. It's about terror and violence in general. I will continue to write poetry, I will hopefully write one tonight.

REVENGE
27 February 2008, 07:02 PM
I loved it.

Although I believe I may be a hypocrite by saying so, as I love violent and frightening movies. :s

However, it's extremely well written.

Ziek
27 February 2008, 07:58 PM
Thank you! That means alot to me, you are a great poet. I will continue to post poetry, as soon as I write it.