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swick
22 February 2008, 07:37 PM
Here's my poem called"The Pen"

"Click""click""click"
What's that sound?
"Click""click""click"
Why do you talk so loud?
"Click""click""click"
Whats that noise frm here to there?
"Click""click""click"
ITS EVERYWHERE!
"Click""click""click"
"Stop it!"I yelled
"Click""click""click"
Please stop it or I'm going to tell!
"Click""click"
"AAAAAHHHHH!!!"I screamed
"Click"
Stop it please!

STOPPPP I.......
Thanks.


Please tell me if you like it:]

Pen Rua
22 February 2008, 09:37 PM
Here's my poem called"The Pen"

"Click""click""click"
What's that sound?
"Click""click""click"
Why do you talk so loud?
"Click""click""click"
Whats that noise frm here to there?
"Click""click""click"
ITS EVERYWHERE!
"Click""click""click"
"Stop it!"I yelled
"Click""click""click"
Please stop it or I'm going to tell!
"Click""click"
"AAAAAHHHHH!!!"I screamed
"Click"
Stop it please!

STOPPPP I.......
Thanks.


Please tell me if you like it:]

Hmm... It's sorta confuseing at first. Too many " and ' in it.

Yours;
Pen

REVENGE
27 February 2008, 07:03 PM
Well, it's original. The writing or meaning isn't very complex, but it's a nice poem. :]