First Attempt Super Silly Penguin peom

[SarahPenguin]

Ode to penguins

O, penguins they waddle

Through town and even in a battle.

O,they grab a slice pizza

Espessially one penguin,lissa.

O, penguins they go a jetpacking

Because without it they waddle,

They don't have a horse and a saddle.

[Patman58]

Pretty good i guess i couldnt do any better!:D

[1jim3bob]

Cool 6/10 :confused: :)

:D

[Happyboy77]

Ehh, could have been quite better 6.5/10

[Icy Joe 8]

I would say 5/10 I think some of the things are a little random and don't go with the rest of the poem.:confused: