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SarahPenguin
05 March 2007, 08:07 PM
Ode to penguins

O, penguins they waddle

Through town and even in a battle.

O,they grab a slice pizza

Espessially one penguin,lissa.

O, penguins they go a jetpacking

Because without it they waddle,

They don't have a horse and a saddle.

Patman58
05 March 2007, 08:09 PM
Pretty good i guess i couldnt do any better!:D

1jim3bob
24 March 2008, 02:07 PM
Cool 6/10 :confused: :)

:D

Happyboy77
25 March 2008, 12:48 AM
Ehh, could have been quite better 6.5/10

Icy Joe 8
25 March 2008, 12:51 AM
I would say 5/10 I think some of the things are a little random and don't go with the rest of the poem.:confused: