The Iceberg ~ The Forums Newspaper~ Issue : 2

[shortkid7t9]

This newspaper has advanced so much from the firtst issue. I am not bragging but I have to say this newspaper is top notch now in my opinion. Here it is, issue 2...enjoy an dlook out for issue 3.

I just want to thank Akabob, Balti once again for their help.

Cover-
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pg 2 and 3
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pg 4 and 5
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pg 6 and 7
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pg 8 and 9
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pg 10 and 11
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I HAVE SEVEN PAGES AND ONLY 6 LINKS FOR THE THREAD. THE NEWSPAPER NEWS AND STAFF CREDITS WILL BE POSTED AFTER SOMEONE POSTED HERE> SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE LOOK THERE FOR ALL YOUR INFO, THANKS AGAIN FOR READING!

Also in th eupcoming events the event belows lans in the city limits rock show, i kind of made the line below that by accident.

Sorry for somewhat late stories, the downtime caught us at the worse time

[wweadam]

Nice paper! I love the dora the explorer part lol! This is a great paper By the way. About the spem thing, How did the destroy spem thing work?

[shortkid7t9]

Nice paper! I love the dora the explorer part lol! This is a great paper By the way. About the spem thing, How did the destroy spem thing work?

It was a joke...well atleast I hope! Destry Spem was his computer proram that waz supposedly crashing the forums. It is kind of weird how the downtime happened rite after him postin that but..... thank you for your comment and although off topic here is the last page :::

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[wweadam]

Ok. Where would you like us to write an article? And what topics are you looking for?

[shortkid7t9]

Ok. Where would you like us to write an article? And what topics are you looking for?

If you interested look in the clubs and teasm sub-forum for the iceberg , write an article about anything forums realted wether it is opinion or etc. and then e-mail it to me via the link in the main thread.

[jfpopjr009]

I liked that paper ot was kind of like The Truth but shorter. 9/10!!!!! Keep it up!

[PenguinWonder]

Nice issue, and nice try, but I don't see much difference than last issue, other than the words on the background. I can't read hardly any words and everything's all pixely. Again, nice attempt, but 4.5/10

[Kanilho]

It's not that good when you first look at the paper cover and you see "Quzar, Perma-Banned!"... Quzar? You didn't even see if the cover of your paper was well written? And in the article itself you write his name 3 times and you only get it right once...

Apart from that writing mistake (and many other along the paper), there is some other stuff like the text. Is it that hard not to overcrowd the pages so that the text doesn't havee to go off the paper template? And the text and images quality is awful, everything's choppy and hard to see (expecially in the "Rock On!" part)

Just another thing, in Akabob's article about Sebastian looks like someone cut the final part of his text, something like "... & Funny Stuff sub-forum."

The overall quality of the articles themselves is not bad, I actually find them quite reasonable, however the graphic appearance of the paper ruins it all.

4/10

[shortkid7t9]

Nice issue, and nice try, but I don't see much difference than last issue, other than the words on the background. I can't read hardly any words and everything's all pixely. Again, nice attempt, but 4.5/10

Then I would go to the eye doctor, no offense and I know the text isnt the best but I can easily read it without a problem....at all

It's not that good when you first look at the paper cover and you see "Quzar, Perma-Banned!"... Quzar? You didn't even see if the cover of your paper was well written? And in the article itself you write his name 3 times and you only get it right once...

Apart from that writing mistake (and many other along the paper), there is some other stuff like the text. Is it that hard not to overcrowd the pages so that the text doesn't havee to go off the paper template? And the text and images quality is awful, everything's choppy and hard to see (expecially in the "Rock On!" part)

Just another thing, in Akabob's article about Sebastian looks like someone cut the final part of his text, something like "... & Funny Stuff sub-forum."


The overall quality of the articles themselves is not bad, I actually find them quite reasonable, however the graphic appearance of the paper ruins it all.

4/10


You are true about quazer (mis-spellings and I by accident cut off the end of the article) besides that the graphics arent horrible like you said ,,, there not blurry atleast and yes this newspaper peogresses every issue

[xflashyredx]

Nice issue, and nice try, but I don't see much difference than last issue, other than the words on the background. I can't read hardly any words and everything's all pixely. Again, nice attempt, but 4.5/10

I have to agree. The text is pixely, but it is still readable, except from the article entitled "Rock On". Nice job, it looks like you tried harder on this issue. One thing you could improve on is the text, when you stretch it out, it goes all pixely and hard to read.

[Powdinet]

ONe thing I garantee you, is better then the last one:)

I would sugges you o type QAZAR isntead of quzar or quezar.

[oddball127]

hey the date thing shouldnt it be on the day of 2 years?

[shortkid7t9]

I have to agree. The text is pixely, but it is still readable, except from the article entitled "Rock On". Nice job, it looks like you tried harder on this issue. One thing you could improve on is the text, when you stretch it out, it goes all pixely and hard to read.

Rock on is extremely easy to read! I dont know what you gys are seeing. But thanks anyway for the encouragement.

[darthvader101]

thanks for advertising my concert iceberg news staff!

[shortkid7t9]

thanks for advertising my concert iceberg news staff!

NI problem your welcome and off topic but you know if the Blue Band is playng in i tyet?

[256log]

I'd give it a 2/10. Theres to many pictures and colors. Its not so great of editing either. It looks like it was all rushed.

[AkaBob22]

Thanks shortkid. Good issue.

Nice issue, and nice try, but I don't see much difference than last issue, other than the words on the background. I can't read hardly any words and everything's all pixely. Again, nice attempt, but 4.5/10
Says the man who runs WonderFire News.
It's not that good when you first look at the paper cover and you see "Quzar, Perma-Banned!"... Quzar? You didn't even see if the cover of your paper was well written? And in the article itself you write his name 3 times and you only get it right once...
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Apart from that writing mistake (and many other along the paper), there is some other stuff like the text. Is it that hard not to overcrowd the pages so that the text doesn't havee to go off the paper template? And the text and images quality is awful, everything's choppy and hard to see (expecially in the "Rock On!" part)

Just another thing, in Akabob's article about Sebastian looks like someone cut the final part of his text, something like "... & Funny Stuff sub-forum."

The overall quality of the articles themselves is not bad, I actually find them quite reasonable, however the graphic appearance of the paper ruins it all.

4/10
Thanks for the little bit of goodness.
It always helps.

At least it's not as bad as issue 1.

EDIT: 256log- The graphics were rushed because Balti did not help us make the paper. Hopefully next ime we will get him/someone else to help with the paper.

[darthvader101]

NI problem your welcome and off topic but you know if the Blue Band is playng in i tyet?

NO AND IF U CHECK THE PARTIES FORUM THERE IS A ANNOCMENT AND I HAVE SUMTHIN SPECIAL THAT WILL BE ON SOON

[shortkid7t9]

Thanks shortkid. Good issue.


Says the man who runs WonderFire News.

Thanks for the little bit of goodness.
It always helps.

At least it's not as bad as issue 1.

EDIT: 256log- The graphics were rushed because Balti did not help us make the paper. Hopefully next ime we will get him/someone else to help with the paper.

Thanks Akabob fo rthe back up Next issue, I am going to do it another way. It will be better. Thanks again Akabob

NO AND IF U CHECK THE PARTIES FORUM THERE IS A ANNOCMENT AND I HAVE SUMTHIN SPECIAL THAT WILL BE ON SOON


Ummmm ok? EDIT: I dont see anything?

[soccer686]

the text is a bit hard to read but besides that its perfect and I love the articals

[shortkid7t9]

the text is a bit hard to read but besides that its perfect and I love the articals

Thanks soccer your compliments are always apprecditaed

[AkaBob22]

the text is a bit hard to read but besides that its perfect and I love the articals

Thank you soccer.

Note: Before you start saying "HEY tHIS nEWSPAPE SUX!!!!!11111!!111!", give the note that only 3 people made this, compared to WonderFire's six people and PMC's 8 people.

[darthvader101]

it has the date of the show and the surprise is up

[shortkid7t9]

it has the date of the show and the surprise is up

Ok look, can you just telll me the surprse?

[Tarheel 4]

Hm,I was wondering were my article was but it seems that my e-mail isnt working -_-. Anyways as soon as I can get it to work ill constantly e-mail the article I wrote...

[Oceanside344]

Pretty good paper. Isn't it spelled Qazar? It seems to be overcrowded and not very appealing. I also noticed a few spelling mistakes. I would suggest next time to use fonts that are easy to read and not put dark pictures under the text.

I would rate it a 6/10.

[wweadam]

Its still a great paper based on the events added disregarding the text and other appeals. If you want better reviews try to make it where theres one paper you can flip through. ITs a GREAT PAPER and I congragulate you on a job well done! ;)

[shortkid7t9]

Hm,I was wondering were my article was but it seems that my e-mail isnt working -_-. Anyways as soon as I can get it to work ill constantly e-mail the article I wrote...

O srry If i get it I will ofcourse use it in the next issue!

Pretty good paper. Isn't it spelled Qazar? It seems to be overcrowded and not very appealing. I also noticed a few spelling mistakes. I would suggest next time to use fonts that are easy to read and not put dark pictures under the text.

I would rate it a 6/10.

Thank you Oceanside, you actually gave us constructed criticism

Its still a great paper based on the events added disregarding the text and other appeals. If you want better reviews try to make it where theres one paper you can flip through. ITs a GREAT PAPER and I congragulate you on a job well done! ;)

Thank you also wweadam now can you tell me what the surprise is?

[boscobear10]

Nice issue, and nice try, but I don't see much difference than last issue, other than the words on the background. I can't read hardly any words and everything's all pixely. Again, nice attempt, but 4.5/10

Iwouldnt be talking your paper isnt even out yet.

[shortkid7t9]

Iwouldnt be talking your paper isnt even out yet.

Actually it also came out but thankd for the support and all. Anyway look at the thread I made a new deadline, so get ready for your debut as editorial writer before you start writing make sure you tell me what your writing about. And if your e-mail doesnt work well,,, I have an idea but ill tel u later.

[boscobear10]

Actually it also came out but thankd for the support and all. Anyway look at the thread I made a new deadline, so get ready for your debut as editorial writer before you start writing make sure you tell me what your writing about. And if your e-mail doesnt work well,,, I have an idea but ill tel u later.

ok great. Is it ok if i pm my artical to you?

[boscobear10]

ok great. Is it ok if i pm my artical to you?

oops i dont even know if you can pm on this forum!

[walmartshrty]

Thank you soccer.

Note: Before you start saying "HEY tHIS nEWSPAPE SUX!!!!!11111!!111!", give the note that only 3 people made this, compared to WonderFire's six people and PMC's 8 people.

HeY tHIS nEWSPAPE SUX!!!11!!11!!!1!1111!


Just kidding. It's actually pretty cool, but the test could have been a bit smaller. For instance, how it kinda went off the page onto the other page was kinda odd. But I liked the writing. 7/10. And I think you spelled Qazar wrong on the front page.

[shortkid7t9]

HeY tHIS nEWSPAPE SUX!!!11!!11!!!1!1111!


Just kidding. It's actually pretty cool, but the test could have been a bit smaller. For instance, how it kinda went off the page onto the other page was kinda odd. But I liked the writing. 7/10. And I think you spelled Qazar wrong on the front page.

Thanks yeah I was afriad that I might have mis-spelled his name and I guess it happened. ANyway thanks!

[Mikepain911]

Great work. Way better than the first. Some text was hard to read and the pictures are fuzzy in places. Good articles though. 8/10

[Lilly 309]

Wow. That's really good! Keep up the great work!;)

[shortkid7t9]

Great work. Way better than the first. Some text was hard to read and the pictures are fuzzy in places. Good articles though. 8/10

Wow. That's really good! Keep up the great work!;)

Thanks guys, compliments and ratings as good as your mikepains were rare. Thanks again I really appreciate it!