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Nenaw
05 March 2007, 03:16 PM
I was bored so I decided to make a Club Penguin novel!

Chapter one:
One day Jimmy Mc Gee was sitting in his igloo ( Castle igloo ) Sitting on his couch reding a book . All of a sudden Jim had heard a knock on the door . He knew it was the post man with some letters and if anyone new Jim he hated getting letters . He opend the door and there sttod a small little boy with the messanger bag . When the little boy saw the man he shoved the letters in his hand and ran off quickly . Jim opend the door and then siad " Oh dear...Its what every grown penguin fears..Its the bill!!! " Jim kicked over the little table where he had put his book down . He then slowly opend the envelope not very exited and looked at the total price of the bill and then had a short pause . " 17,0000 COINS!!!!" Shouted Jimmy Mc gee . I knew I shouldent have bought all this funiture . I need to think of a way to get money fast!

Chapter 2:
Jim was walking up and down the floor thinking and thinking . "What should I do" he thought ." Hmm...Maybe I could ask the guy who lives beside me " he thought . So Jim walked over and asked the guy who lived next time him for some money . Little did Jim know that the guy had gone on holidays and the old gardener was living in it . Jim gave a tap on the door and waited for an answer . The old gardener opened the door up and siad " What do you want? " Jim siad quite frightend " Erm...Could I have soom money " siad Jim . Then they old man shouted " Go away you dirty begger and slamed the door shut . Jim was very angery and kicked a stone done the road . But it was an unlucky day for Jim becasue it hit the little boy who gave him the bill!

Chapter 3:
When the stone hit the little boy he fell over crying in pain . " It was an accident I swear and im very sorry" siad Jim the little boy then shouted know you did it because I gave the letters" . But then something very strange happend the little boy shouted out " Im gonna sue you! " and ran off home . 11 Minutes later two policemen came to the door and siad " Your going to court right away James " Jim tryed to say something but the other police man siad before him " What ever you say will be recored and may be used as a type of crimanl record evidence . As Jim walked into the court room he saw the little boy with a cast around his flipper . After 6 hours of screaming and shouting Jim cam out of the court room with know money at all . Thats right... He losst the trail .

Chapter 4:
There was only one way out of this for Jim . He diecded to do something he had never done before . He walked over to his leather couch reached under it and took
out an AK-47 gun . He then put on a super hero mask and walked slowly to the pizza parlor . When he was outside it he took out his gun and ranin the pizza parlor and shouted " This is a hold up " . Everybody in the pizza parlor jumped up in fright and stuck there hands up . " Put the money in the bag " Shouted Jim . " The Pizza Parlor owner threw all the money in the bag . Jim then ran off and the Pizza parlor owner rang the police . When jim had gotten near the manhole he slipped on a banna skin the police where then 3 metres away so Jim hoped up and ran as fast as he could and then... The chase was on

Chapter 5 :
Jim Mc gee was running as fast as he could with the cops chaseing him . Jim went so crazy with crim he started shooting people with his gun! Jim ran threw the snowforts pushing lots of people out of his way . He ran into the town and sprinted in to the night club he pushed 7 penguins on his way to the speaker . When he got to the speaker I slid down the ladder and ran in to threw the door of the boiler room . He stared behind him to check for the police bu then by an accident he fell into the pool. he ran as swam as fast as he could and the police where so close he then ran into the mine and hoped in a cart but crashed in the first turn . When he woke up everything was very bright but when he got his vison back nothing was bright anymore because he was in a jail cell . Jim had no idea what to do . Was it over for Jim , Is he in hell , Find out next time in the Jimmy mc Gee seris...

To be continued....?

The end

granite123
05 March 2007, 03:27 PM
I was bored so I decided to make a Club Penguin novel!

Chapter one:
One day Jimmy Mc Gee was sitting in his igloo ( Castle igloo ) Sitting on his couch reding a book . All of a sudden Jim had heard a knock on the door . He knew it was the post man with some letters and if anyone new Jim he hated getting letters . He opend the door and there sttod a small little boy with the messanger bag . When the little boy saw the man he shoved the letters in his hand and ran off quickly . Jim opend the door and then siad " Oh dear...Its what every grown penguin fears..Its the bill!!! " Jim kicked over the little table where he had put his book down . He then slowly opend the envelope not very exited and looked at the total price of the bill and then had a short pause . " 17,0000 COINS!!!!" Shouted Jimmy Mc gee . I knew I shouldent have bought all this funiture . I need to think of a way to get money fast!

Chapter 2 coming soon...

These novels are such a fad dont bother making them !

Nenaw
05 March 2007, 03:35 PM
These novels are such a fad dont bother making them !

They are aloud though . And a put work into it so please dont mock it .

koolkiernan5
05 March 2007, 03:39 PM
This novel is so cool i love it is funny too i cant wait until chapter two
it wil be cool

granite123
05 March 2007, 03:41 PM
They are aloud though . And a put work into it so please dont mock it .

Dont get me wrong its good ....its the first i have looked forwrd to part 2 :O

Zeekman28
05 March 2007, 03:48 PM
ok.....good story! i guess:D :D .........

Jimbo3000
05 March 2007, 03:53 PM
I was bored so I decided to make a Club Penguin novel!

Chapter one:
One day Jimmy Mc Gee was sitting in his igloo ( Castle igloo ) Sitting on his couch reding a book . All of a sudden Jim had heard a knock on the door . He knew it was the post man with some letters and if anyone new Jim he hated getting letters . He opend the door and there sttod a small little boy with the messanger bag . When the little boy saw the man he shoved the letters in his hand and ran off quickly . Jim opend the door and then siad " Oh dear...Its what every grown penguin fears..Its the bill!!! " Jim kicked over the little table where he had put his book down . He then slowly opend the envelope not very exited and looked at the total price of the bill and then had a short pause . " 17,0000 COINS!!!!" Shouted Jimmy Mc gee . I knew I shouldent have bought all this funiture . I need to think of a way to get money fast!

Chapter 2:
Jim was walking up and down the floor thinking and thinking . "What should I do" he thought ." Hmm...Maybe I could ask the guy who lives beside me " he thought . So Jim walked over and asked the guy who lived next time him for some money . Little did Jim know that the guy had gone on holidays and the old gardener was living in it . Jim gave a tap on the door and waited for an answer . The old gardener opened the door up and siad " What do you want? " Jim siad quite frightend " Erm...Could I have soom money " siad Jim . Then they old man shouted " Go away you dirty begger and slamed the door shut . Jim was very angery and kicked a stone done the road . But it was an unlucky day for Jim becasue it hit the little boy who gave him the bill!

Chapter 3 coming soon...

Thats so good im making it into a movie!!!!

koolkiernan5
05 March 2007, 03:54 PM
I was bored so I decided to make a Club Penguin novel!

Chapter one:
One day Jimmy Mc Gee was sitting in his igloo ( Castle igloo ) Sitting on his couch reding a book . All of a sudden Jim had heard a knock on the door . He knew it was the post man with some letters and if anyone new Jim he hated getting letters . He opend the door and there sttod a small little boy with the messanger bag . When the little boy saw the man he shoved the letters in his hand and ran off quickly . Jim opend the door and then siad " Oh dear...Its what every grown penguin fears..Its the bill!!! " Jim kicked over the little table where he had put his book down . He then slowly opend the envelope not very exited and looked at the total price of the bill and then had a short pause . " 17,0000 COINS!!!!" Shouted Jimmy Mc gee . I knew I shouldent have bought all this funiture . I need to think of a way to get money fast!

Chapter 2:
Jim was walking up and down the floor thinking and thinking . "What should I do" he thought ." Hmm...Maybe I could ask the guy who lives beside me " he thought . So Jim walked over and asked the guy who lived next time him for some money . Little did Jim know that the guy had gone on holidays and the old gardener was living in it . Jim gave a tap on the door and waited for an answer . The old gardener opened the door up and siad " What do you want? " Jim siad quite frightend " Erm...Could I have soom money " siad Jim . Then they old man shouted " Go away you dirty begger and slamed the door shut . Jim was very angery and kicked a stone done the road . But it was an unlucky day for Jim becasue it hit the little boy who gave him the bill!

Chapter 3 coming soon...

chapter two is even better this is the best and funnyest novel on the forums ever

Nenaw
05 March 2007, 04:09 PM
Thats so good im making it into a movie!!!!

Umm... Ok but give me some credit for the movie

Dj Dave
05 March 2007, 04:18 PM
thats a really good novel keep it up!! i cant wait until part 3

dj dave :D

Jimbo3000
05 March 2007, 08:51 PM
Umm... Ok but give me some credit for the movie

SOME CREDIT?:?: :!: :?: all the credit! except the movie makeing (me ) and blue pingu

Nenaw
06 March 2007, 03:57 PM
SOME CREDIT?:?: :!: :?: all the credit! except the movie makeing (me ) and blue pingu

Ok , Tell me when your done . :sick:

Jimbo3000
07 March 2007, 07:49 AM
I will but i might do each vidio in chapters :D :D rod rego might wanna help though hes a good movie maker ;)