1st attempt on a powerpoint penguin

[Ironrocker]

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r212/Ironrocker/1stattempt.png
This is my first powerpoint. Please rate 1-10. I hope to get better at these.:)

[Makarov]

Pretty good, 8/10. But try making the right arm straighter.

[Pearldxpro]

it kind of looks like a fat midget penguin. i like it.

[Ironrocker]

Pitty:Thanks for your advice:)
Pearldxpro:Thanks, I guess.

[Ninja1]

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r212/Ironrocker/1stattempt.png
This is my first powerpoint. Please rate 1-10. I hope to get better at these.:)

I also like it, it is way better then MY first PPT Penguin.:rolleyes: Just fix up the mough a bit, the left arm, and you'll be set.;)

8.5/10.

[Ironrocker]

I also like it, it is way better then MY first PPT Penguin.:rolleyes: Just fix up the mough a bit, the left arm, and you'll be set.;)

8.5/10.
Heh. Thanks.I think i will do that right now.

[Nakz]

I give it a 8/10.
Its pretty kwl for a first;)

[Hinata~]

The eyes need to be straightened, the beak needs a bit of an adjustment, and the arms need to come to a pointy stub instead of 'popsicle' arms.
6/10

[12sportkid]

thats good for your first. but try to make it thiner. 7/10

[11dx11]

As a first I must say great job. Everything looks great on this penguin exept the shadowing below its waist. That could use a little edge up, but other than that I like everything.