NCPBC's Mammoth mag!

[zmactarheel]

Hi this is Zmac with NCPBC's FIRST ever magazine! Please post with your comments and CONSTRUCTIVE critisizm is always appreciated!

MAG:

Cover: http://s128.photobucket.com/albums/p192/okanestar789/?action=view&current=mag1.png

Contents page- page 1: http://s128.photobucket.com/albums/p192/okanestar789/?action=view&current=1ncpbcmagcontents1.jpg

Pages 2-3: http://s128.photobucket.com/albums/p192/okanestar789/?action=view&current=1ncpbcmagossip1.jpg

Pages 4-5: http://s128.photobucket.com/albums/p192/okanestar789/?action=view&current=1ncpbcmagshinobipg1.jpg

Pages 6-7: http://s128.photobucket.com/albums/p192/okanestar789/?action=view&current=1ncpbcmagshinobipg2.jpg

Pages 8-9: http://s128.photobucket.com/albums/p192/okanestar789/?action=view&current=1ncpbcmaginterviewfur.jpg

Pages 10 and Ad page: http://s128.photobucket.com/albums/p192/okanestar789/?action=view&current=1ncpbcmageditletter.jpg


Sorry there is no back yet, as this was just a beta mag to see the feed back on how we did, Please comment!

Thanks, Zmac


Thanks Agent for the HTML mag right here!
http://www.bot-irc.com/mag/index.php

[Party Boy]

We worked really hard on it so I hope everyone reads it.

[Newtown11]

I'd give it a 7/10. It's pretty good, but a bit plain. Add some more detail and i'll defintely be better.

Keep up the good job.

[zmactarheel]

Thanks, Newtown! Like I said it was our first and we're going to make it better, but again, thanks for the comment!

[[-Agent-]]

The magazine is great!

I have setup a easy viewer thing www.bot-irc.com/mag (http://www.bot-irc.com/mag/5.php)

I can update this with new mags also.

As for the magazine it's self there should be more sections for since it was the first "test" it is already ahead of many other fan made games.

[zmactarheel]

Thanks Agent! Me and Party Boy were wondering how to convert it to something like that! I will add it, and yes it was just a test we will keep making more, and more of them soon enough. Thanks for the comments guys!!

[Merry Joe]

Brilliant! Really good magazine guys. I think the best part is the interview with me.:PLOL

[Shippo Fox33]

Since it is your first time i'm giving a nine (hey that rhymed:rolleyes:)

[Flame593]

I really like the magazine, it was really creative! I gave it 9/10

Flame 593http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/3180/889407001187117866cm4.gif

[MarioFan107]

Cool Magazine, 8/10, I can't wait to read the next one. I hope this magazine turns out great and new ones come out every week.;)

MarioFan107-

[Boyinhood]

I Liked It. I Gave It A 10/10 It was really good.

[zmactarheel]

Thanks for all the ratings guys! Party Boy will love to see these good comments, and ratings! Please keep checking the original NCPBC thread for more updates and the next release date of anything. :)

[shortkid7t9]

The ACP lasted a year and a half, if I can remeber correctly. Then there other teams before that like that ninja clan. otherwise decnt paper 7/10

[Mikepain911]

I gave it an 8/10. Pretty good for your first magazine. I think it needs more color. It looks a bit plain. Otherwise, very well done.

[zmactarheel]

Thanks guys, yeah Mike it was a little plain, that's fine though it's okay as long as the next ones to come are better.

[Rod Rego]

It was okay. There were quite a few typing mistaktes I noticed, and a lot of small things that you could have done to make the paper look better and more professional (taking the background away from the "layout" of the magazine, using text colors that match; not random ones, etc.).

Also, the .swf isn't a .swf. Swf stands for shockwave flash, and the paper you posted was created with HTML (hypertext markup language). The two are very different, so I'd suggest changing that.

[zmactarheel]

It was okay. There were quite a few typing mistaktes I noticed, and a lot of small things that you could have done to make the paper look better and more professional (taking the background away from the "layout" of the magazine, using text colors that match; not random ones, etc.).

Also, the .swf isn't a .swf. Swf stands for shockwave flash, and the paper you posted was created with HTML (hypertext markup language). The two are very different, so I'd suggest changing that.

It will get better I promise everyone, this was sort of like a beta mag, so to speak. We just wanted to get feed-back on it to see if more people were going to read. Anyway thanks for the info and criticizm.

[FunnyBoy]

It was okay. There were quite a few typing mistaktes I noticed, and a lot of small things that you could have done to make the paper look better and more professional (taking the background away from the "layout" of the magazine, using text colors that match; not random ones, etc.).

Also, the .swf isn't a .swf. Swf stands for shockwave flash, and the paper you posted was created with HTML (hypertext markup language). The two are very different, so I'd suggest changing that.

About the SWF thing, at least it still works, even though its not an swf.

Anyway, nice paper, some typing mistakes, but good. You did a good job!
Again, another person using the swf idea that the PMC times started using. But I guess people cant be original these days =P

[Pingu 14792]

Cool magazine. I like it! I give it a 8/10! Keep up the good work... ;)

[zmactarheel]

About the SWF thing, at least it still works, even though its not an swf.

Anyway, nice paper, some typing mistakes, but good. You did a good job!
Again, another person using the swf idea that the PMC times started using. But I guess people cant be original these days =P

Well the .SWF type thing or whatever it is was not mine, [-Agent-] gave it to me. Thanks for the possitive feed-back again guys!

[finny2]

cool 10/10
off topic funnyboygo and join my forums soon i will make you a mod

[finny2]

cool 10/10
off topic funnyboy go and join my forums soon i will make you a mod
sorry for double post it was a mistake

[Plazma811]

pretty sweet magazine, i like the part about the restroom igloo lol...

[256log]

It looks really good! I am happy that people like it.:)

[Teater]

nice good job guys. very creative i like the interview part i gave it a 9/10

[[-Agent-]]

It was okay. There were quite a few typing mistaktes I noticed, and a lot of small things that you could have done to make the paper look better and more professional (taking the background away from the "layout" of the magazine, using text colors that match; not random ones, etc.).

Also, the .swf isn't a .swf. Swf stands for shockwave flash, and the paper you posted was created with HTML (hypertext markup language). The two are very different, so I'd suggest changing that.


Yes I am hoping to actually make it into a flash, java, or swf file sometime. :S

[Rod Rego]

;352817']Yes I am hoping to actually make it into a flash, java, or swf file sometime. :S

Flash and .swf are the same thing. ;)

[Donnybrook]

I really can see that you guys put alot of effort into it. Not quite PMC material, but good. :P

[Makarov]

I really can see that you guys put alot of effort into it. Not quite PMC material, but good. :P

I obviously don't think it is PMC Material because I believe they are more CP and you guys are more Forums.

:pitty:

[Dillpickle332]

i gave it a 8/10 it was good but as a lot of ppl said needs more stuff

[JohnLennon64]

I gave it a 8/10 because it was really good but it could use a little bit more stuff but its still really good