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TnT
11 August 2007, 04:01 AM
:P

Latest Update:
Chapter Three Written and Posted.

I'm going to be writing a short story soon for a little bit of fun.
Containing a day of TnT's life, that he will never forget.(It will be fiction).
I may be including some forumers, but please do not ask to be in it. :D

Thanks, look around for the first chapter soon.(Possibly later tonight).

Some penguins leave and are forgotten, but some are remembered in this thread.
Go there and you will be one step closer to what you want.

Chapter One
Just An Unoridnary Day.

Just another day around Club Penguin.
Penguins waddling around, playing hide and seek and other interesting games.
TnT sat alone, under the tall elm tree . He had been watching the younger penguins playing their games.

"Are you having fun sitting there alone?", asked a voice to the right of TnT.
It was Liney, another penguin that TnT knew.

"Huh....?, Oh of course!", TnT replied with a slight grin.
TnT had fallen asleep for a few minutes.

"Have fun sleeping?", asked Liney.

"I had the weirdest dream...", replied TnT.

"Really what of?", questioned Liney.

"Well In the dream I was sitting under this tree, watching you walking away from me."
"You got to the wooden bridge crossing the river, your were half-way over it when it collapsed under you."
"You were sent flying down the river, people running down the river bank trying to catch you, but the powerful river pulled you too fast."
"Someone yelled out that it had taken you over Daredevil Falls, dropping 100 feet down the waterfall."
"It was very stange.", said TnT.

"Hmm, that's strange, but it was only a dream." laughed Liney.

"Yeah, I guess." said , TnT.

"Well I have to get out of here" said Liney.
"See you later, TnT."

"Okay then, C'ya later, Liney."

Liney started across the field toward the bridge.

"Wait, this is exactly like my dream." thought TnT to himself.

Liney was now starting across the small, wooden bridge.
Suddenly the bridge collapsed under him!


Chapter Two
Over The Falls

"LOOK, THE BRIDGE COLLAPSED SOMEONE TRY TO HELP HIM." yelled many penguins.

TnT took off at a very fast speed toward the river bank, running beside the river toward Liney being carred down the swift river.

TnT spotted a penguin in front of him, running after Liney.

By this time Liney was getting close to Daredevil falls.
If he fell down the water fall, he would surely die from the drop.

Funnyboy had started running even faster toward Liney.
He had caught up with him now, Funnyboy reached his hand out to Liney, while still running.

Liney tried reaching his hand out to Funnyboy, but the river swallowed him back under.

Finally Funnyboy go hold of Liney's hand.
Before Funnyboy couldn't even look up, he was flying down daredevil falls with Liney.

"NO!!!!" yelled TnT.
TnT then passed out.

Chapter Three
The Start of An Adventure


"Are...are you awake?" asked a voice to the left of TnT.
TnT stirred a little then slowly opened his eyes.
He was sitting inside an igloo.
Big, and made of stone.

"Where...where am I?" questioned TnT.

"Your in my igloo"
"You passed out when Funnyboy and Liney were taken over the falls" said the unknown penguin.

"Who are you?" asked TnT.

"People call me Special Agent Balthasar, Balthy for short." said the penguin.

"So what am I doing here?" asked TnT.
"A penguin overheard you telling Liney about your dream." started Balthy.
"He said your dream was exactly what happened to Liney, correct?"

"Yes, that's what happened."
"It was strange." said TnT.

"Do you know what happened to Liney and Funnyboy?" asked TnT.

"No, I'm going with another agent to look for them later." replied Balthy.

"Let me come with you!" replied TnT.

"Erm, I'll have to ask the Head Agent, RFS."

Balthy reached into her pocket pulling out a small device about the size of a cell phone.

"What's that?" asked TnT.

"It's an agent phone, it lets me contact all the other agents quickly." replied Balthy.
"Hold on, let me call the Head Agent."

"Yes?" said RFS.

"TnT, you know the penguin who forsaw Liney falling into the river, wants to come with Agent Robo and I."
"Will you allow this?"

"Hmh, let him know if he goes through with it, he may face some serious dangers."

"Okay, he's said he's ready to do anything".

"Then yes, he may go."

"Well looks like you will be coming with Robo and I." said Balthy.

"Did I miss anything?", asked Robo.

"TnT is coming with us, other then that, nope, let's get moving" replied Balthy.

Poetic
11 August 2007, 04:04 AM
This should be interesting...

Psst...:tnt:...
If I post a picture of a penyun being brutalized, will I get an infraction?

TnT
11 August 2007, 04:05 AM
This should be interesting...

Psst...:tnt:...
If I post a picture of a penyun being brutalized, will I get an infraction?

It's according to how brutalized. :P
If you really want to post it, show it to me on NG's forum first. ;)

darthvader101
11 August 2007, 04:07 AM
Off Topic:no Offesnse But Vt Stinks And Wvu Rules

On Topic:sounds Like It Should Be A Good Story

Poetic
11 August 2007, 04:09 AM
It's according to how brutalized. :P
If you really want to post it, show it to me on NG's forum first. ;)

I'll PM it to you. Nice smiley by the way!
EDIT: Sent.
:D

-- OMG LINES --
11 August 2007, 04:10 AM
Kill me a lot in this story. (If I'm in it) =D Make me laugh at your revenge. (I'm not adding a new chapter until I die in this story)

flooger100
11 August 2007, 04:28 AM
You just gave me an idea of writing one. But that would be copying :p

TnT
11 August 2007, 04:46 AM
Chapter One is up. :D
Comments and Critisism please. :P

Robo
11 August 2007, 06:24 AM
Chapter One is up. :D
Comments and Critisism please. :P
Interesting strangely.Make the chapters a little bit longer.You get to the good part then end the chapter.:(

mischiefmake
11 August 2007, 07:56 AM
Lol, don't you just hate it when they do that?
A good idea though, get to the good part then leave you waiting...
Nice story TnT, wonder what's going to happen next, eh?
;)

-- OMG LINES --
11 August 2007, 12:01 PM
YES! Now for some ebil revenge. Anyways, good story. Wheee. *falls down waterfall*

TnT
11 August 2007, 04:49 PM
Chapter two is up on the first page. ;)
It's pretty short, but soon they will get longer. :P

Madfly
11 August 2007, 04:53 PM
Chapter two is up on the first page. ;)
It's pretty short, but soon they will get longer. :P

Nice. I am a little dissapointed that it is a little short, but it's a good story you got here.

Robo
11 August 2007, 04:59 PM
Chapter two is up on the first page. ;)
It's pretty short, but soon they will get longer. :P

Nice.Kind of funny how you randomly passed out.:rolleyes:

TnT
11 August 2007, 07:26 PM
:P
It was shocking. :D
So I passed out.

-- OMG LINES --
11 August 2007, 08:28 PM
But I'm a killer robot, I DON'T DIE! XD Anyways, nice chapter. Can I die a lot of times like Kenny on South Park?

TnT
11 August 2007, 08:29 PM
But I'm a killer robot, I DON'T DIE! XD Anyways, nice chapter. Can I die a lot of times like Kenny on South Park?

Maybe you aren't dead yet? :O
Who knows?
Well, I do, but no one else. :P

-- OMG LINES --
11 August 2007, 08:30 PM
Maybe you aren't dead yet? :O
Who knows?
Well, I do, but no one else. :PI do! I'ma future seeing robot! I'm dead!

(You are so getting mercilessly maimed in my story for this)

Robo
11 August 2007, 08:54 PM
I do! I'ma future seeing robot! I'm dead!

(You are so getting mercilessly maimed in my story for this)

Just because you said that he is going to make sure you don't die.

TnT
11 August 2007, 09:39 PM
Chapter three is up. ;)
Comments needed. :D

Robo
11 August 2007, 09:45 PM
Chapter three is up. ;)
Comments needed. :D

I liked it.Thanks for putting me in the story.:D

mischiefmake
11 August 2007, 09:47 PM
That was quick, although I suppose they are short chapters, each getting better than the next. Keep it up! ;)

12sportkid
11 August 2007, 10:29 PM
nice story!!! its good! i cant wait to read the next chapters!

-- OMG LINES --
12 August 2007, 12:58 AM
I'm mysteriously disappeared now?

That's it you're going off the cliff. XD

TnT
12 August 2007, 02:09 AM
I'm mysteriously disappeared now?

That's it you're going off the cliff. XD

Yep! =D
No one knows if you're dead or not though. :O

Zeldafan114
12 August 2007, 02:12 AM
Yep! =D
No one knows if you're dead or not though. :O

Let me guess, he'll be the Kenny of your story?

P.S. I now only post in blue when I post in a thread that I think is very good. :P

TnT
12 August 2007, 05:01 PM
Thanks everyone. ;)

Look for the next chapter(s) later tonight.
I probably won't be on much today. :|

TheHuskerDu
12 August 2007, 06:23 PM
Good story, I liked it. It was cool how you included forumers. Good job, keep writing.:)

TnT
28 October 2007, 03:54 AM
I think I'm gonna finally finish this story. :P
Do you all think I should start working on it again?