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flooger100
07 July 2007, 02:07 AM
Yes. You heard right. Little Jimmy is back and better then ever!

Back in 2006 before I left, I used to write stories about a fake penguin named "Little Jimmy". Now im back and along with me, so is Little Jimmy! So lets get started with the story!

Little Jimmy goes to the Gift Shop. An epic tale by Flooger4.

It was a bright and cheerful day in Club penguin. The birds were chirping, the sun was smiling, everybody was happy. It was Thursday. Everyone was having a merry time playing cart surfer and saving up coins so they can buy all the new items in the up coming catalog, witch was coming out today.

Little Jimmy stepped out side his igloo and waved to the local paper boy. "Hey Little Jimmy! Ready for the new catalog?" The paper boy asked. "Yeah I cant wait!" Replied Little Jimmy with a very happy-go-lucky smile on his face. Little Jimmy spent a few hours playing Cart Surfer. Then he waddled down to the cove, grabbed his surf board and caught some waves. The wheather was perfect. All the little fishies were happy with joy. (Unless of course a fisher catches on of them and has it for dinner...) Little Jimmy said to him self "Excellent! I have 5,000 coins. That should be enough for all of the items in the catalog!". He put his surf board in the hut and waddled away.

Little Jimmy was hungry. He went to the Pizza parlor and ate some pizza for a few hours. He looked at his clock. Its 7:00 pm. I guess It wouldn't hurt if I could play cart surfer for about 2 more hours He thought as he waddled out of the door. After Little Jimmy was done playing, he had earned another 5,000 coins. He now had 10,000 coins total.

"Oh no its 9:00! I better head down to the gift shop and get there early!" Little Jimmy said as he waddled to town.

It was pretty crowded around town. Lots of penguins were heading toward the gift shop. "Hey wait up!" He said as he got in before the room was full.
And boy was it packed! There had to be 150 penguins in here at once! Everyone was shoving around and yelling "1 MORE HOUR 1 MORE HOUR!" Little Jimmy found a place to sit away from everyone. He got a book out and started to read it. "10 MORE MINUTES!" a penguin yelled.

Now the madness was really starting to begin. Penguins were being pushed and shoved and tossed and thrown across the gift shop! One penguin threw another penguin across the room and it landed right on Little Jimmy! Little Jimmy put the book down and waddled away. He was being shoved and pushed like everyone else! There were penguins throwing snow balls at people! There were penguins beating up penguins for no reason at all! "5 MORE MINUTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" someone yelled "LEEEEEOOOORY JEEEENKINS!!!!!!!!!!" Said a penguin with a Viking helmet. He charged up to Little Jimmy and threw him across the room. There were penguins flying everywhere! People were getting stepped on and pushed! Violence was everywhere! The room was going crazy!!!!

"60 SECONDS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Now the room turned into chaos! People were trying to bust the door open with a batting ram! The door flew open and slammed into some penguins, shooting them across the room like a bullet. Little Jimmy had a black eye and a noes bleed! Penguins arms were being broken! "10 SECONDS!!!!!!!!!!!!" Bombs were being set off outside the gift shop! Earthquakes were splitting the gift shop in half! Penguins fell in the giant cracks the Earthquake made!! Volcanoes were going off in random places for no reason! "ITS OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" a penguin yelled. Everyone raced toward the catalog shelf were all the catalogs were held. Penguins were being bashed up on the walls! Arms were flying everywhere! Little Jimmy was on the ground being smashed by hundreds of penguins! As he finally grabbed hold of a catalog it was to late. Someone punched him in the eye and stole it from him! Lazer cannons were being shot off outside to try to get inside


The gift shop finally collapsed squishing hundreds of helpless penguins. Little Jimmy was the only survivor. He limped on home and bought the clothes he liked before falling to the ground.




The end.

I know it looks like a lot but it isn't! please read the whole thing! Trust me you will like it.

Obey Me
07 July 2007, 03:03 AM
Nice story. But penguins with lazer guns?

flooger100
07 July 2007, 03:14 AM
Yes penguins with lazer guns. Penguins with lazer guns and battering rams.

Bsbgirl
07 July 2007, 03:47 PM
Yea pretty nice story but it seemed a little too violent. Some words were also mispelled. It was good but I don't know if I'll ever go in the gift shop again! Lol.

~Bsb♥

blackops121
07 July 2007, 03:48 PM
good story but why do leroy jenkins? everybody knows gim but most people use it for world of warcraft when he runs in after being AFK and dies

flooger100
08 July 2007, 12:30 AM
I put that there out of pure randomness. Just like the story lol.

Oceanside344
08 July 2007, 01:44 AM
I really like the story line, but I think it is a little too dramatic, like penguins with Laser Cannons. I'd give it an 8.5/10. There really isn't much room for improvement on that.

flooger100
08 July 2007, 01:50 AM
All Little Jimmy stories start out nice peaceful and happy.

But near the end everything goes chaotic.