-The Serial Killer of CP- A Novel By Orcacam07

[orcacamO7]

CHAPTER ONE

A dark night, I walked forwards into my igloo, pushed open the door, and waddled inside.

I was just about to get ready for bed, when i heard a scream.

I turned around and thrust opened the door. I suddenly began to charge, and i reached the town. As i was pushing penguins out of my way to get to the scream, I heard tears.

I ran into the night Club, a penguin, very pale, was lying face first on the dance floor, the lights flashing onto his motionless hazel eyes. I curiously touched his stomach. His heart wasnt beating. The Penguin was dead, and i knew he had been killed. But there was no blood to lead with him.

CHAPTER TWO

As the body of the penguin was taken away, i watched the penguins eyes, they looked as if they had been hit with a giant flash of light. I was wide awake now, so ii just decided to go Sled Racing.

I stumbled up to the mountain and mounted on my tube. I began to lower down into the hill, my speed increasing very fast. I was in the middle of the hill when,

BAM!

I looked to my side, a giant figure that i couldnt really make out of what it was was speedig at my left, throwing things at my tube. And then the figures is began to glow with red beams of anger.

I fell out of the Sled and plunged into the snow.

I looked over, the figure was gone.

But i knew that it was the killer.


(The Rest Is coming soon)

[Supergirle15]

Great story so far,( my message is too short)

[Brock Lensar]

Nice novel keep up the good work cant wait for the next part:D

[914mgtj914]

a bit harsh'a serial killer etc
but i love it
i cant wait for next part

[orcacamO7]

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CHAPTER ONE

A dark night, I walked forwards into my igloo, pushed open the door, and waddled inside.

I was just about to get ready for bed, when i heard a scream.

I turned around and thrust opened the door. I suddenly began to charge, and i reached the town. As i was pushing penguins out of my way to get to the scream, I heard tears.

I ran into the night Club, a penguin, very pale, was lying face first on the dance floor, the lights flashing onto his motionless hazel eyes. I curiously touched his stomach. His heart wasnt beating. The Penguin was dead, and i knew he had been killed. But there was no blood to lead with him.

CHAPTER TWO

As the body of the penguin was taken away, i watched the penguins eyes, they looked as if they had been hit with a giant flash of light. I was wide awake now, so ii just decided to go Sled Racing.

I stumbled up to the mountain and mounted on my tube. I began to lower down into the hill, my speed increasing very fast. I was in the middle of the hill when,

BAM!

I looked to my side, a giant figure that i couldnt really make out of what it was was speedig at my left, throwing things at my tube. And then the figures is began to glow with red beams of anger.

I fell out of the Sled and plunged into the snow.

I looked over, the figure was gone.

But i knew that it was the killer.

CHAPTER THREE

I ran out of the hill in complete shock.

"What the heck was that thing?" I asked myself.

As i strutted out of the Ski Mountain, i decided to take a rest in the Ski Lounge.

As i sat down, my friend Firecedude walked in.

"Hey." I said to him.

"Hey." He replied.

"Lets go To The Pizza Parlor, Im starved." I said.

"Ok."

We walked a few miles and we ended up in the Pizza Parlor. I looked in shock.

A waitor, dead.

[Doshdie]

its good very gripping and like torchwood

[Rigsandbill]

All three chapters would make up a third of a good chapter. Those chapters are way too short.

Read my story-making guide for some advice. :D

[11dx11]

The 3rd chapter sends this story off well, I like This:)

[Balthasar]

Your story you've written was very well done. It has a good amount of suspense in it, although, it does jump around a bit (lots of sudden things).

Anyway, as a suggestion, add pictures to your story to enhance the overall effect. With pictures, people will enjoy it even more (not that its bad or anything).

[orcacamO7]

CHAPTER ONE

A dark night, I walked forwards into my igloo, pushed open the door, and waddled inside.

I was just about to get ready for bed, when i heard a scream.

I turned around and thrust opened the door. I suddenly began to charge, and i reached the town. As i was pushing penguins out of my way to get to the scream, I heard tears.

I ran into the night Club, a penguin, very pale, was lying face first on the dance floor, the lights flashing onto his motionless hazel eyes. I curiously touched his stomach. His heart wasnt beating. The Penguin was dead, and i knew he had been killed. But there was no blood to lead with him.

CHAPTER TWO
As the body of the penguin was taken away, i watched the penguins eyes, they looked as if they had been hit with a giant flash of light. I was wide awake now, so ii just decided to go Sled Racing.

I stumbled up to the mountain and mounted on my tube. I began to lower down into the hill, my speed increasing very fast. I was in the middle of the hill when,

BAM!

I looked to my side, a giant figure that i couldnt really make out of what it was was speedig at my left, throwing things at my tube. And then the figures is began to glow with red beams of anger.

I fell out of the Sled and plunged into the snow.

I looked over, the figure was gone.

But i knew that it was the killer.

CHAPTER THREE

I ran out of the hill in complete shock.

"What the heck was that thing?" I asked myself.

As i strutted out of the Ski Mountain, i decided to take a rest in the Ski Lounge.

As i sat down, my friend Firecedude walked in.

"Hey." I said to him.

"Hey." He replied.

"Lets go To The Pizza Parlor, Im starved." I said.

"Ok."

We walked a few miles and we ended up in the Pizza Parlor. I looked in shock.

A waitor, dead.

CHAPTER FOUR

The dead waitor had the same bright gaze into his misty eyes, which were shot wide open. I looked around this penguin.

No blood.

(Chapter four to be continued)

[Holagurrl25]

It's a good, suspensful story, you have a good way with words.
But don't keep reposting the same chapters. When you post chapter 1, 2, and 3, don't repost them.

[Baboons33]

lol. I like the story. Serial Killer. lol. I have something to say, Im the serial killer! lol

[zippy500]

cool story but you should make it longer

[Alcatraz]

I like it. As a matter of fact, it is the only CP novel I do like. So basicaly, the killer uses light to kill its "targets"? It is usually darkness and pure fright that does that in other storys. I like how you have taken a change in direction though. Can't wait till it is finaly done and I can read it in full.

[orcacamO7]

CHAPTER ONE
A dark night, I walked forwards into my igloo, pushed open the door, and waddled inside.

I was just about to get ready for bed, when i heard a scream.

I turned around and thrust opened the door. I suddenly began to charge, and i reached the town. As i was pushing penguins out of my way to get to the scream, I heard tears.

I ran into the night Club, a penguin, very pale, was lying face first on the dance floor, the lights flashing onto his motionless hazel eyes. I curiously touched his stomach. His heart wasnt beating. The Penguin was dead, and i knew he had been killed. But there was no blood to lead with him.

CHAPTER TWO
As the body of the penguin was taken away, i watched the penguins eyes, they looked as if they had been hit with a giant flash of light. I was wide awake now, so ii just decided to go Sled Racing.

I stumbled up to the mountain and mounted on my tube. I began to lower down into the hill, my speed increasing very fast. I was in the middle of the hill when,

BAM!

I looked to my side, a giant figure that i couldnt really make out of what it was was speedig at my left, throwing things at my tube. And then the figures is began to glow with red beams of anger.

I fell out of the Sled and plunged into the snow.

I looked over, the figure was gone.

But i knew that it was the killer.

CHAPTER THREE

I ran out of the hill in complete shock.

"What the heck was that thing?" I asked myself.

As i strutted out of the Ski Mountain, i decided to take a rest in the Ski Lounge.

As i sat down, my friend Firecedude walked in.

"Hey." I said to him.

"Hey." He replied.

"Lets go To The Pizza Parlor, Im starved." I said.

"Ok."

We walked a few miles and we ended up in the Pizza Parlor. I looked in shock.

A waitor, dead.

CHAPTER FOUR
The dead waitor had the same bright gaze into his misty eyes, which were shot wide open. I looked around this penguin.

No blood.

Me and Firecedude step out the Pizza Parlor, and then, i saw the familiar Red glowing eyes.

"RUN!" I yell to Fiercedude

We both began stampeding through the entire Island of Club Penguin. We ran into the Sports Shop and flung our bodies inside the Changing Room.

I hit a cold misty gray floor, filled with inventions and expeiremnts.

"We're in The Agents HQ." I tell Firecedude.

Suddenly, a large penguin wih a stern look on his face began to walk towards us slowly

[~FIREICEDUDE~]

ocracam, look in the fanart and stories section.
Have you seen "who killed fireicedude storys 5 6 and 7"?

Ps good story! Yay im in it! I may make some edits for this story if its ok with you.

[Mick]

Nice but I think your going to fast the chapters are really short!

[TioHalleLoko]

"Chapter 231:
The Serial Killer killed Aunt Arctic, Gary, Rockhopper and later, when sleeping he made a invasion on Mod's igloos and killed them all. And now, he's invadin... OH NO, DON'T KILL MEEEEEEeeeee... *Dead*"

Too much violent. =/

[orcacamO7]

CHAPTER ONE
A dark night, I walked forwards into my igloo, pushed open the door, and waddled inside.

I was just about to get ready for bed, when i heard a scream.

I turned around and thrust opened the door. I suddenly began to charge, and i reached the town. As i was pushing penguins out of my way to get to the scream, I heard tears.

I ran into the night Club, a penguin, very pale, was lying face first on the dance floor, the lights flashing onto his motionless hazel eyes. I curiously touched his stomach. His heart wasnt beating. The Penguin was dead, and i knew he had been killed. But there was no blood to lead with him.

CHAPTER TWO
As the body of the penguin was taken away, i watched the penguins eyes, they looked as if they had been hit with a giant flash of light. I was wide awake now, so ii just decided to go Sled Racing.

I stumbled up to the mountain and mounted on my tube. I began to lower down into the hill, my speed increasing very fast. I was in the middle of the hill when,

BAM!

I looked to my side, a giant figure that i couldnt really make out of what it was was speedig at my left, throwing things at my tube. And then the figures is began to glow with red beams of anger.

I fell out of the Sled and plunged into the snow.

I looked over, the figure was gone.

But i knew that it was the killer.

CHAPTER THREE

I ran out of the hill in complete shock.

"What the heck was that thing?" I asked myself.

As i strutted out of the Ski Mountain, i decided to take a rest in the Ski Lounge.

As i sat down, my friend Firecedude walked in.

"Hey." I said to him.

"Hey." He replied.

"Lets go To The Pizza Parlor, Im starved." I said.

"Ok."

We walked a few miles and we ended up in the Pizza Parlor. I looked in shock.

A waitor, dead.

CHAPTER FOUR
The dead waitor had the same bright gaze into his misty eyes, which were shot wide open. I looked around this penguin.

No blood.

Me and Firecedude step out the Pizza Parlor, and then, i saw the familiar Red glowing eyes.

"RUN!" I yell to Fiercedude

We both began stampeding through the entire Island of Club Penguin. We ran into the Sports Shop and flung our bodies inside the Changing Room.

I hit a cold misty gray floor, filled with inventions and expeiremnts.

"We're in The Agents HQ." I tell Firecedude.

Suddenly, a large penguin wih a stern look on his face began to walk towards us slowly.

As i looked up, i reconized this Agent as Gary The Gadget Guy.

"Are you all being chased by that monster?" Gary asked us.

"Yes." Firecedude replied.

"How did you know about that killer?" I asked G.

G took a deep sigh and looked into our eyes deeply. Then he said,

"It was a few days ago, i was making a robot to test out my new and improved solar powered sled. I mixed up the wires, and they got tangled. The Robot suddenly began to move. There was a huge malfunction, which made lightning shoot out of his eyes. he suddenly stormed out of my lab and into the town. I have been hiding ever since."

then....

BANG!

I looked over Firecedudes sholder.

Red beaming eyes.

"RUN RUN RUN!" I yelled.

The robot began shooting jets of light out of beaming heatwaves. Lightning was going everywere. I was knocked out.

[zippy500]

no orcam is banned now he cant continue the novel:(

[flubby10]

Thats pretty nice story but ur banned know :(

[Pinkuin94]

pretty good, mysterious, but its going a bit too fast. use more adjectives. set the scene and the feelings and explain more things. but still good! i like it!

[orcacamO7]

CHAPTER ONE
A dark night, I walked forwards into my igloo, pushed open the door, and waddled inside.

I was just about to get ready for bed, when i heard a scream.

I turned around and thrust opened the door. I suddenly began to charge, and i reached the town. As i was pushing penguins out of my way to get to the scream, I heard tears.

I ran into the night Club, a penguin, very pale, was lying face first on the dance floor, the lights flashing onto his motionless hazel eyes. I curiously touched his stomach. His heart wasnt beating. The Penguin was dead, and i knew he had been killed. But there was no blood to lead with him.

CHAPTER TWO
As the body of the penguin was taken away, i watched the penguins eyes, they looked as if they had been hit with a giant flash of light. I was wide awake now, so ii just decided to go Sled Racing.

I stumbled up to the mountain and mounted on my tube. I began to lower down into the hill, my speed increasing very fast. I was in the middle of the hill when,

BAM!

I looked to my side, a giant figure that i couldnt really make out of what it was was speedig at my left, throwing things at my tube. And then the figures is began to glow with red beams of anger.

I fell out of the Sled and plunged into the snow.

I looked over, the figure was gone.

But i knew that it was the killer.

CHAPTER THREEI ran out of the hill in complete shock.

"What the heck was that thing?" I asked myself.

As i strutted out of the Ski Mountain, i decided to take a rest in the Ski Lounge.

As i sat down, my friend Firecedude walked in.

"Hey." I said to him.

"Hey." He replied.

"Lets go To The Pizza Parlor, Im starved." I said.

"Ok."

We walked a few miles and we ended up in the Pizza Parlor. I looked in shock.

A waitor, dead.

CHAPTER FOUR
The dead waitor had the same bright gaze into his misty eyes, which were shot wide open. I looked around this penguin.

No blood.

Me and Firecedude step out the Pizza Parlor, and then, i saw the familiar Red glowing eyes.

"RUN!" I yell to Fiercedude

We both began stampeding through the entire Island of Club Penguin. We ran into the Sports Shop and flung our bodies inside the Changing Room.

I hit a cold misty gray floor, filled with inventions and expeiremnts.

"We're in The Agents HQ." I tell Firecedude.

Suddenly, a large penguin wih a stern look on his face began to walk towards us slowly.

As i looked up, i reconized this Agent as Gary The Gadget Guy.

"Are you all being chased by that monster?" Gary asked us.

"Yes." Firecedude replied.

"How did you know about that killer?" I asked G.

G took a deep sigh and looked into our eyes deeply. Then he said,

"It was a few days ago, i was making a robot to test out my new and improved solar powered sled. I mixed up the wires, and they got tangled. The Robot suddenly began to move. There was a huge malfunction, which made lightning shoot out of his eyes. he suddenly stormed out of my lab and into the town. I have been hiding ever since."

then....

BANG!

I looked over Firecedudes sholder.

Red beaming eyes.

"RUN RUN RUN!" I yelled.

The robot began shooting jets of light out of beaming heatwaves. Lightning was going everywere. I was knocked out.

CHAPTER FIVE

As i awoke, Firecedude and G were out of sight.

The HeaQuarters was in small flames and emerging into mists of smoke. I emmidiatley stormed out through the secret entrance and looked outside.

The Robot that tried to kill me stood right before my trembling body.

I got a Hockey Stick from the side of the sports shop.

"BRING IT ON!" I yell.

The Robot Suddenly Opened its eyes wide open, and he began to beam with fury and anger. He was just about to shoot his beam of light, when.......

BAM!

The robot suddenly clammed up infront of my, i thought it was throwing a fit. it twisted and turned, until finally....

KABOOM!

The robot exploded.

I looked behind the smoking, broken robot.

Firecedude had a fistr right were the robot had exploded.

"You punched it?" I asked him.

"Nah, there was a self distruct button!"

THE END

[zippy500]

CHAPTER ONE
A dark night, I walked forwards into my igloo, pushed open the door, and waddled inside.

I was just about to get ready for bed, when i heard a scream.

I turned around and thrust opened the door. I suddenly began to charge, and i reached the town. As i was pushing penguins out of my way to get to the scream, I heard tears.

I ran into the night Club, a penguin, very pale, was lying face first on the dance floor, the lights flashing onto his motionless hazel eyes. I curiously touched his stomach. His heart wasnt beating. The Penguin was dead, and i knew he had been killed. But there was no blood to lead with him.

CHAPTER TWO
As the body of the penguin was taken away, i watched the penguins eyes, they looked as if they had been hit with a giant flash of light. I was wide awake now, so ii just decided to go Sled Racing.

I stumbled up to the mountain and mounted on my tube. I began to lower down into the hill, my speed increasing very fast. I was in the middle of the hill when,

BAM!

I looked to my side, a giant figure that i couldnt really make out of what it was was speedig at my left, throwing things at my tube. And then the figures is began to glow with red beams of anger.

I fell out of the Sled and plunged into the snow.

I looked over, the figure was gone.

But i knew that it was the killer.

CHAPTER THREEI ran out of the hill in complete shock.

"What the heck was that thing?" I asked myself.

As i strutted out of the Ski Mountain, i decided to take a rest in the Ski Lounge.

As i sat down, my friend Firecedude walked in.

"Hey." I said to him.

"Hey." He replied.

"Lets go To The Pizza Parlor, Im starved." I said.

"Ok."

We walked a few miles and we ended up in the Pizza Parlor. I looked in shock.

A waitor, dead.

CHAPTER FOUR
The dead waitor had the same bright gaze into his misty eyes, which were shot wide open. I looked around this penguin.

No blood.

Me and Firecedude step out the Pizza Parlor, and then, i saw the familiar Red glowing eyes.

"RUN!" I yell to Fiercedude

We both began stampeding through the entire Island of Club Penguin. We ran into the Sports Shop and flung our bodies inside the Changing Room.

I hit a cold misty gray floor, filled with inventions and expeiremnts.

"We're in The Agents HQ." I tell Firecedude.

Suddenly, a large penguin wih a stern look on his face began to walk towards us slowly.

As i looked up, i reconized this Agent as Gary The Gadget Guy.

"Are you all being chased by that monster?" Gary asked us.

"Yes." Firecedude replied.

"How did you know about that killer?" I asked G.

G took a deep sigh and looked into our eyes deeply. Then he said,

"It was a few days ago, i was making a robot to test out my new and improved solar powered sled. I mixed up the wires, and they got tangled. The Robot suddenly began to move. There was a huge malfunction, which made lightning shoot out of his eyes. he suddenly stormed out of my lab and into the town. I have been hiding ever since."

then....

BANG!

I looked over Firecedudes sholder.

Red beaming eyes.

"RUN RUN RUN!" I yelled.

The robot began shooting jets of light out of beaming heatwaves. Lightning was going everywere. I was knocked out.

CHAPTER FIVE

As i awoke, Firecedude and G were out of sight.

The HeaQuarters was in small flames and emerging into mists of smoke. I emmidiatley stormed out through the secret entrance and looked outside.

The Robot that tried to kill me stood right before my trembling body.

I got a Hockey Stick from the side of the sports shop.

"BRING IT ON!" I yell.

The Robot Suddenly Opened its eyes wide open, and he began to beam with fury and anger. He was just about to shoot his beam of light, when.......

BAM!

The robot suddenly clammed up infront of my, i thought it was throwing a fit. it twisted and turned, until finally....

KABOOM!

The robot exploded.

I looked behind the smoking, broken robot.

Firecedude had a fistr right were the robot had exploded.

"You punched it?" I asked him.

"Nah, there was a self distruct button!"

THE END

lol funny ending once again nice stories

[orcacamO7]

well, it dosent seem like anyone else liked the ending.....

[Patman58]

That was an amazing story nice job. I loved the ending it was funny. I hope you make more stories you're great!