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Samson4268
08 March 2007, 03:39 AM
Chapter One: It was a dark stormy night and rockhopper was supposed to return to his island. He decided to stay on the migrator so he wouldn't get ship wrecked during the storm. Rockhopper and a few other penguins had a sleep over with Rockhopper on the migrator. The next morning they waved goodbye as Rockhopper started his long sea voyage back to his island. After he ate dinner he started night watch to make sure nothing "fishy" was going on. At 10:00 pm pst time it started to rain. Then it started hailing and all of a sudden it thundered! Rockhopper and Yarr[his red puffle] almost got struck by lighting. Then it happened, Yarr got struck by lighting! Rockhopper waddled as fast as he could to Yarr. He revived Yarr and then he put him to bed.

Phenom
08 March 2007, 03:42 AM
Good story since it is you first.
It is your first story right:?:

Well anyways good story samson keep making more.

Samson4268
08 March 2007, 03:43 AM
lol no it is not my first story it is my second story on the new forums but i have written the titanic, the stalker, who kidnapped orcacam[also on here]. I think i wrote more but i don't remember them.

Holagurrl25
08 March 2007, 05:30 AM
Erm, interesting.... You could do with a little more detail, and maybe make it a bit more....eventful. Interesting to read, though.